In Remembrance... discussion

since a lot of people are going to write poems for Mark's grave..I think that we should all post them here! so everyone can see them

im still working on it...when do you need them?

uhh..by sunday. im just saying...when everyone is done with them

I'm gonna write it tonight

im working on mine

ok...idont think im good at writing poems so im gonna write a note:

hi mark..i dunno who u r but u died so good luck in Heaven....and all that stuff...and..um...yeah. so i hope u like ur grave and stuff...and...i think u kno this but everybody who knew u says that u were awesome and it was really cool what u did for ya girlfriend...i just thought u might wanna know that people miss u

was that ok??

i wrote this but i dont know him..is that ok??

yeah i think so

ok..good cuz i feel like i shud do somethin cuz i heard bout him

uhhhh here is my poem
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REMEMBER!

There are things we remember
And things we forget
But Mark you were one very special friend
Some days we like
And some days we hate
This day is sad and not so great
People used to see you all the time
But theres no hurry, this is just a ryhme
Some things get greater and greater in life
But not today
For when you read this you'll be dismay
Im sorry you had to go
And we all had to stay
But that is just how things work out some days
So farewell and goodbye
I am sorry about this ryhme
For it is not as good
Nor as strong as our friendship forlongs
So Remember

I'm just gonna write a note too

I know we didn't know each other very well but you were a totally awesome guy. I hope you know we all miss and love you! Make sure you watch over Jess and protect her. I think that you were awesome for being willing to do anything for your girlfriend

Is that good?

Holly!! I can put that in his casket?!

Yeah go ahead

lol thanx!!

did u like it?

Yeah it was awesome

btw i gtg do my hw...be back later(maybe)

kk see ya!

yes!! and that is good sarah.i wana put that in his casket too

Bye Sarah

seems like the world is out of place now
and we cant believe you're gone
i think we all feel the same inside you took
a step and we couldnt say goodbye we miss your
laugh we even miss your cry

he couldnt have known that what
happened might have brought us down
and the one you loved is hurting most of all
i wish you could come back why did
you have to go help me understand
i need some help to know

with your final heartbeat you
told the world goodbye when
we walk sometimes we fall

That was great JoJo Ray

I never knew you
But I feel you would have been a great friend
I look at the sky
at heaven
asking why God has taken you away so quick
I hope you like it there
I hope no problems face you
I hope you know that everyone here
On this Earth
Will be there for you
Next generation
I hope we both will meet
and become good friends
Till then
I say good bye
May you be happy
whereever you are

but fall on the ones who miss you
fall on the ones who care we need
you back but yet cant be so

he couldnt have known that what
he did maybe would have
brought us down and the
one you love is hurting most of all
knowing your not around i
wish you'd come back why did you
have to go help me understand
i need some help to know
why did you have to go

those r really good!

Oh my gosh. I'm sorry but it's bringing me to tears.

put my 2 messages together and thats the whole thing

Its good....

Yea. I agree with Sheeky.

your friends
oh how they will miss you
blessed be
let your soul rest in peace
find good
in where ever you may go
find peace
forever shall thy rest
goodbye
our last words to you

that wasn't very good cause i just thought of it so...

It was still good.

~**HollyBerry**~ (future cullen!!!)TWILIGHT!!! wrote: "your friends
oh how they will miss you
blessed be
let your soul rest in peace
find good
in where ever you may go
find peace
forever shall thy rest
goodbye
our last words to you

that was..."

That was really good

i broke down crying 2 day at school

I almost did......I was right at the edge...but I forced myself not to

i didn't find out about mark till about 1 hour ago

Yea, I liked it too.


There's always a way
To stay here
You may be in Heaven
But you're here too
We look up at the sky
Waiting here for you
We know that you'll always be with us
So we keep the faith in ourselves
Please make trips here
For we miss you terribly
Please shed the spirits on all of us
We'll treasure it forever

i found out yesterday morning

I found out.......yesterday like in the middle of the day

thanks guys. those are really good

I'm gonna dedicate my song "Good Bye" to him it's only profile, ill post it laterim on an ITouch

ok here is mine:

I didn't know you for long,
One day for a fact,
Where ever you may be,
Please rest in peace.
While we cry here for you,
I would like you to know,
We all like you,
Forever and all.

Those are good....

Yeah that's really good Riley

waz this on the news?

no

it should b....

hey spencer i just sent u a friend request

Mark...
The one who led us through the dark
No matter who you were
he'd be there....
Mark..

he had to go,
no one to stop him,
too late,
hes gone.
i sit here in the corner thinking about his face
when he would always be there when i fell or when i cried
hes gone now...
no one to hold