Vampire Bites discussion

I have a question and if I'm out of line, slap me and send me on my way... I'm writing a weekly serial on Kindle about vampires and spies, and while a few people have read it, I have no reviews. If I shared a copy of the first chapter for free to a select few, would anyone be willing to write a review?

Again, if I'm out of line for asking, I apologize. Sorry if this was a bother.

JD

thats totally not out of line
and i would read it its just im really bad at on line reading and reviewing
but its not out of line

Thanks for the reply! It's up to you, but I could send it to you if you were interested. No pressure.

um like i said
im really bad at reading books online...like my eyes hurt and i give up
sryy ill c if anyone else'll read it....

i would love to read it!