I basically made up an entire world, with countries named after psychologists (I was in summer school when making this). I'm considering making this into a series, but this first one takes place in the country of Taher, following the exploits of a young pickpocket Cannon. He stumbles upon a con, Zajonc (look it up, psychology buff). These two clash like fire and ice, but Cannon doesn't know it, thinking he's finally found a family. This novel basically follows the gaffs these two make when thrown together, leading to a great mistake of epic proportions forcing Zajonc to make a decision that until then would have never been an issue before. There will probably be more adventures in later stuff, but this novel basically shows how Cannon and Zajonc become a disastrous duo.
The prologue is set in the future, and it's supposed to be Cannon and Zajonc (now adults) telling their story to their families. I really don't like the way I ended the prologue, but I'm stuck on how else to end it. Please give me honest critique.
The prologue is set in the future, and it's supposed to be Cannon and Zajonc (now adults) telling their story to their families. I really don't like the way I ended the prologue, but I'm stuck on how else to end it. Please give me honest critique.
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