Young Writers discussion

Hey guys I have been working on this book that i'm writing with the name ReImagine and will be using as my senior year school project next semester and I'm also posting the finalized chapters on GR to get feedback and comments from other young writers, authors, and readers.
So please check out what i have already posted and leave a comment of what you think and honest feedback!

Here's the summary:

"I've always read about what it would feel like when your life changes, when it flips upside down; when someone you've gotten used to goes away. I've wondered what it would be like when you have to choose between the two most important people in your life. Even wondered about how things would look like when you meet someone who makes you doubt yourself, but that same person gives you hope only to leave you hopeless in the end. I’ve always wondered what I would do if any of this happened to me. But never did I ever think it possible to happen, I was just always imagining.
My name is Anna, Anna-Marie King if you ask my Mom. Seventeen years old. A normal girl, well at least that’s what I thought. With everything any girl could ever ask for. A loving family loaded with money, an amazing, smart, older sister who takes care of me, a best friend who’d do anything for me, a best friend who’d Guard me, and mostly a role model that I can look up to and trust with everything. I had it all. Whatever I needed whatever I wanted, until the day my sister disappears. That day changes everything, it changes me, my family, my best friend, even my role model, and mostly it changes my life forever.
If I was ever asked to imagine what my life would be like I would have done it in a heartbeat, without a second thought, listing all my normal girl dreams and wishes. But now the word imagine, itself scares me, for reasons you will find out. But what if I was asked not to just simply imagine but to reimagine not only my life but the whole world, to reimagine everything I've ever seen and to reimagine everyone I’ve ever met. What then? Tell me, would you REIMAGNE?"

Here's the link to the 1st chapter:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Thank you so much for the time spent reading and writing an honest feedback as well : )

@Asma

Your jacket-flap summary could use some trimming, first of all. Second, somehow I really really like this story, even though I don't have much to go off of with how her life changes.

I might actually take time to read this. :D

Thank you!

Today I posted my finlized 5th chapter! hope u guys check it out whenever u have the time

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...