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message 1: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
Think of your favorite...let's go with...food. Yes, food.

Describe what it tastes like, but don't stop there.

Cover as many senses as you can: the physical feel of it; the smell; what it looks like; if it's crunchy, describe that sound; and taste, of course.

Think of if you've ever felt like you were starving to death, then you bit into your favorite food. You probably closed your eyes and savored every moment of it. Describe what you felt.

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My favorite food is pepperoni pizza. When I smell a saucy, cheesy, spicy pizza baking in the oven, I can hardly wait to get my hands under a soft, warm slice. I cannot bear not sinking my teeth into the gooey, doughy thick crust pizza, cannot stand to have the round, red little pepperonis taunting me.

I remember one time going from 11:00 until 7:00 without eating even a snack. As soon as that heavenly pizza came out of the oven, I nearly burned my fingers as I escorted the biggest slice to my plate, blanketing it in a snow of Parmesan cheese. At the first hot, steamy bite, I grinned ear-to-ear. That one little slice of pizza was comforting to me...and my starving belly. I enjoyed every last bite, until I reached the crust, and then I started on another slice. It was the most amazing pizza I thought I had ever tasted.

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Grr...now I want pizza.

Make my mouth water!

Peace!
~Tia


message 2: by Bailey (new)

Bailey (baileyr9350) Awesome! Makes me want pizza too! I'm not gonna do a description right now, but I just wanted to say, that is really good, and I also like Parmesan cheese on my pizza! I thought i was the only one!


message 3: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
lol wow, awesome! Can't wait for your description.

Guess what? After I wrote that, I asked my dad what we were having for dinner, and he said "burgers" so I got all depressed, but then my mom came home with a pizza...

...and the rest is history!


message 4: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
Thank you...I feel so special.


message 5: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
I know, right?

I REALLY want some bacon right now, but instead I have Ritz crackers and a can of spray cheese.


message 6: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
No.

I want some Mountain Dew...but my dad drank it all *glares*.


message 7: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
I'm gonna have some chocolate milk.


message 8: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
Too much Mountain Dew? That's a good one.


message 9: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
Sounds like the book for me...


message 10: by Tia Todd, I am addicted to Mountain Dew and Adam Gontier's voice. (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) | 506 comments Mod
Oh, I LOVE Haddix! No way...


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