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message 1: by [deleted user] (last edited May 02, 2009 05:56AM) (new)

((Use double parenthises when your not RPing. It's winter right now))


message 2: by Anony-miss (new)

Anony-miss a-non-y-miss MidnightSoul smelled the sharp winter air, shivering. She felt terrible, being recently in an argument with family.

MidnightSoul looked around with doubt. Snow, white, ice, snowflakes, icicles . . pure white and frozen blue was seen everywhere.

Finally stopping for breath (the cold air tickled her lungs and airway), MidnightSoul saw tracks of a heavily-claws creature. They seemed recent, for they felt warm.

Following the tracks in the snow with curiosity, MidnightSoul found herself lost after an hour.

Disappointed with herself, she finally went back.


message 3: by Siareen (new)

Siareen Starfire watched in the shadows as MidnightSoul came back into the cave. she desperately wanted to know what the alpha had been doing,and why she came back looking so dissapointed but knew better then to question her.

after a few minuets Starfire crept out of the cave herself onto the snow. it was easy to find the alphas foot prints. nose first, she followed them.

after a few moments she came across the tracks of a heavily clawed creature.
she could smell MidnightSouls smell all around.
"so this is what the alpha was doing" she thought to herself. and she had obviously not found anything.

Starfire decided to see to where the tracks led to.
she at least would not give up until she found the creature. she would prove that she could do things better then the alpha.

Starfire followed the tracks most the afternoon. it was a good thing it hadn't started to snow. otherwise she'd be in trouble.

it was almost sunset by the time Starfire reached an opening to a cave. the tracks led straight inside.

exitement grew inside her.
this was it! it had to be!!!
slowly, she walked inside.

it was too dark for even her wolf- eyes to see. but she didn't need to rely on her eyes. she had other senses. her ears pricked up, trying to hear if anything was in the cave.

silence.

maybe the creature wasnt in the cave after all. but starfire handnt seen any tracks leading out of the cave. only in.

suddenly, she heard a rustle. startled, she turned to the source of the noise.

she was sidways to it when it pounced. Starfire felt a claw tear her side.

she tried to fight back, but was loosing blood quickly.
the creature tore at her legs, face- anywhere it could reach.

she could feel herself going unconscious.

starfire managed to relese one last desperate howl before she blacked out.



message 4: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 06, 2009 02:51AM) (new)

Moondust heard Starfires howl. She started at a run trying to follow the sound. She stopped and sniffed. She smelt Midnighsoul's and Starfire's scent.

She followed and found herself at a cave entrance. Iwish I could blend into the snow, She thought.

She entered the as quietly as she could. She sniffed, since she couldn't see very well. Where are they?

Her ears pricked up and twitched. She heard a growl. What the...? She was feeling panic. The cave was small. She had a flashback:

"Mom! I can hunt almost as good as you!" Her mother smiled as she tried to pounce on a mouse. It was small but she was a pup then, so she only needed a couple to fill her.

Her father laughed. "Not quite!" She glared. Moondust caught three mice that day.

She was eating when she heard the gravel crunch beneath the humans contraption. Her an her family shrank back into the shrubbery, but before she was fully in the bushes, the human caught her.

Her father lunged at him. He wouldn't let go. He shook off her dad and threw her in a small plastic cage.

They took her to another place. She was far from home. She howled for her family but they never came. That was when she met the old leader of FireClan.

Also, she became very claustrophobic.


Moondust was back in the present. She shook off her nausea, determined to save Starfire. She kept going.

Minutes later, Moondust noticed that the space was bigger and brighter. She sniffed and smelt Starfire.

Moondust ran to her. "Sorry if I hurt you." She murmered softly. She yanked on her tail.

Half way through she tasted her blood. She spit out Starfire's tail and pushed her.

Once outside she managed to get her on her back and she carried her to their own cave.

Moondust nudged Starfire. "Wake up."



message 5: by Siareen (new)

Siareen starfire stirred to find moondust standing over her.
"what... happened?" she asked feebly


message 6: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 07, 2009 01:05AM) (new)

"I don't know. I was worried when you didn't come back so I went to look for you. I found you in a small cave then brought you back here." Moondust replied softly.


message 7: by Siareen (new)

Siareen "oh. why am i covered in..blood?"
she asked


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

"You tell me."


message 9: by Siareen (new)

Siareen "i wouldnt be asking if i knew, would i?" starfire snapped


message 10: by Anony-miss (new)

Anony-miss a-non-y-miss MidnightSoul heard the screams, but thought better of herself. She made her way to the clan camp -- nobody.

Hmmm. That was odd.

"Guys? Could you please tell me what's going on?"

Silence.

"Guys?"

Silence.

"C'mon. Work with me."

Silence.

MidnightSoul sighed in exasperation. She smelled for them, but the smell seemed to seep into the snow.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Siareen wrote: ""i wouldnt be asking if i knew, would i?" starfire snapped"


"I wasn't there so why are you asking me? You so ungrateful! Why can't you say thanks and tell me what you remember from the cave?" She scowled.



message 12: by Siareen (new)

Siareen starfire looked abashed.
"the thing is, i dont remember anything past walking into the cave."
she admitted.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

"Well, if you remember anything then you have tell Misnight soul or me. Are you hurt anywhere besides your tail?"


message 14: by Siareen (new)

Siareen "my side is hurting a bit but otherwise im fine"
she responded, stating the truth.
starfire stood up but collapsed from weakness of loosing so much blood.


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

"I think you should stay here until you get your strength back. I'll go out and hunt for us."


message 16: by Siareen (new)

Siareen "but what if the thing that attacked me returns?"
starfire regretted the words the second they came out of her mouth.
she was NOT cowered, and she hated sounding like on.
"im sure it will be ok though" she added quickly


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

Moondust thought about her first camment. "Do remember what the thing looked like?"


message 18: by Siareen (new)

Siareen starfire serched her memory.
"no. i only felt its talons.
maaybe it was a griffin or something."


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

"I thought griffens were stories to scare pups?"


message 20: by Siareen (new)

Siareen "where have you been during your lifetime? only wolves that stay in their mothers shelter think that"
starfire scoffed


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

"I've heard of griffens, but I don't believe in them. Deal with it."


message 22: by Siareen (new)

Siareen "your the one that will have to deal with when a griffin decides to attack YOU!"
starfire answered


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

Moondust rolled her eyes.


message 24: by Siareen (new)

Siareen "and dont roll your eyes at me!
come lets get back to camp."
starfire retorted


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'll roll my eyes if I want." Moondust smiled and helped Starfire stand.


message 26: by Siareen (new)

Siareen standing was painful for starfire, but she tried not to show it.
but she couldnt help limping


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

Moonstone tried to take all of Starfires weight, but she was smaller then Starfire. It was pretty difficult.


message 28: by Siareen (new)

Siareen "i can walk my myself, thanks!" starfire snapped.
she hated admitting she needed help.
she started walking towards the cave, trying not to show the pain it was costing her.
at last they arrived


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

Moonstone only glared. "I was only trying to help."


message 30: by Siareen (new)

Siareen starfire sighed. "i know. im sorry. i guess my pride got the better of me." 'again' she added to herself


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

"It's fine. I know how you feel but sometimes you just have to accept the fact that you need help sometimes."


message 32: by Siareen (new)

Siareen starfire didnt answer


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Moonstone sighed. "Ok. The silent treatment is really old and only pups do that."


message 34: by Siareen (new)

Siareen starfire rolled her eyes
"i wasnt giving you the 'silent treatment'. i just didnt have anything to say. now if you dont mind, im going to see our healer."
starfire walked of in search of the clan healer.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

Moonstone rolled her eyes back at Starfire. "Whatever you say." She walked over to where she usually slept and layed down.


message 36: by Siareen (new)

Siareen starfire found the clan healer and asked her to heal her. after theat she went to sleep.


message 37: by Siareen (new)

Siareen starfire woke up to find everyone gone.


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

Moonstone looked around and saw only white. The snow. She started to panic. She howled for help.


message 39: by Siareen (new)

Siareen starfire heard the howl. she howled back


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'm close!" She howled again. "Help!"


message 41: by Siareen (new)

Siareen "moonstone!!!!!!! what happened?!" starfaire howled, as she sniffend around franticly for a sign of moonstone


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

"I can't see anything! I only see snow! Everywhere!" Moonstone yelled.


message 43: by Siareen (new)

Siareen "keep talking!!!! and follow my voice!!!" starfire cried out


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

"Ok...!" She yelled uncertainly. She stummbled through the snow and followed Sarfires voice


message 45: by Siareen (new)

Siareen finnaly starfire noticed her
"there you are!!! how did you get lost?!"


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

"I don't know. I just opened my eyes and saw this! Snow. It's everywhere."


message 47: by Siareen (new)

Siareen "have you seen any sign of the others?"


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

"no. only you."


message 49: by Siareen (new)

Siareen "where do you think they can be?" starfire asked, getting desperate


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

"i don't know. i can't smell anything but the snow and you so tracking them is close to impossible."


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