I Write, Therefore, I Live discussion

I've posted this on a lot of writing groups, but I would like some advice on my short-story. Thank you.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

*reads*

Only got to read chapter one, but it seems really good! I'll read more when I get to. Just need to finish Whisper in the Dark, and then I can read ALL of Everyone's writing!

XD

Dude, my stories suck so much so far. It's because my stories are in that madman stage. I don't have MSword so this is like my MS Word.

I've had Writer's Block for like weeks now. Just don't give up! I gave up on a story and I always think about it now. It scares me!!

I liked your story, Sarah, and I think you should write more about those two.

I think you have a great idea going and if you tried could probably make it into a novella or maybe a mystery novel. Its a great start and I can't wait to see what else you do :D

Good job

Thanks for the comments. :) I've decided to set it aside for the summer, and then try to expand on it.

Yay! And you're going to post more right?

Yeah, of course. :)

Yay!

I'm also working on a bit of a true life story. I've posted 1 and a half chapters so far. It's a work in progress though.

Okay :D

hey ppl can u go to my folder and read my stories and give my some advice or something?? i need it!!

Of course! I am always willing to read everyone's writing!

thanks!!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
here!!

I read it, and it's really good! I hope to see more soon!

thanks!!

Yuppers, and you could open your own topic if you want.

cool!! thanks!!

Yeah. Then we could have just one discussion that we know is about your story.

yeah!

Did you make it yet?

yeah!