Young Writers discussion

Description: Alyssa is a criminal, and she knows it. The blood of her ex-boyfriend, Christopher, is still drying on her hands when the supreme police force, the Viligants, arrest her and through her into the dreaded Asylum to die. But there is a reason why she killed Christopher, a reason based on a power that she just realized she had. Against all odds, she escapes the prison, taking with her a boy named Stephen, who has a secret of his own.





My story is NOT COMPLETED. I work on it in Wattpad, and I update regularly. I understand that it is a love triangle story, but I want to use this to see if I can take something overused and make it interesting.
ALL FEEDBACK IS APPRECIATED.

Sounds cool, can you give a link?

That sounds really good! Would you mind posting it here or even on your profile so I can read it? I'm not really familiar with Wattpad.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/4212100-...

I really like the idea for this and I like your writing style too. One thing that I can say right now is that I think it would help if you explained Ally's ability to see people's future intentions a little more. It would be nice to have a little background information about it if you could write some. I look forward to reading future chapters. :)

Sierra- ok! I'm going to do a flashback chapter per your comment! Thank you for your advice!

Yay! No problem. Let me know when it's posted ;D