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message 1: by Rebecah (new)

Rebecah | 5 comments Tell me if you would read this book.

Marielle is the Crown Princess of Escarose, set to become Queen as soon as she marries. She is set to marry Sebastian d'Norolocke, but when he comes to visit Escarose, he is murdered. Marielle decides to find out who committed this crime just as Raien, Marielle's younger sister Isla's fiancée, and his sister Venli arrive at the castle. As Marielle struggles to unmask the murderer, she finds herself caught between decisions involving those who she called her allies, those who she thought were her allies, and those plotting to kill her, putting at stake not merely her kingdom and her people, but her heart.


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments okay, i know this is only the plot summary but right now my head is swimming from all these names. so i can't even tell you if this would be the kind of book i'd read. maybe you could revise what you put on here so it's a bit more readable? :)


message 3: by Zanib (new)

Zanib  (dawnofthebooks) | 95 comments Rebecah wrote: "Tell me if you would read this book.

Marielle is the Crown Princess of Escarose, set to become Queen as soon as she marries. She is set to marry Sebastian d'Norolocke, but when he comes to visit ..."


All the names made it a bit tricky to catch up with, but I still think the plot is interesting, and yes I would read it. But that also depends on the style of the writing.

Still, the plot actually does seem interesting, so.. again, yes, I'd read it, lol.


message 4: by Naomi (new)

Naomi  (purplebookdragon) | 1705 comments hmmmmm. sounds interesting....


message 5: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments It sounds interesting. Depending on the writing style, I would read it.


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