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Aug 03, 2013 02:54PM
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hi, guys, I've looked at some RP comments, and I have some suggestions:Make them longer! Some are like " _____ laughed." There's no details in that comment, nothing you can really do with that. Instead do something like: "_____ laughed, his/her corners of ____'s mouth crinkled in smiles, and his shoulders heaved from how heavy _____ laughs were." Not that much detail but try for something a bit more details. I've been on GRs for about a year now so i'll give tips!
Yeah, but still. Sometimes all you can put is a little phrase. You know, to move the rp along. This isn't advanced rp...
yeah, um with the whole detailed thing....IF the part calls for it, like your describing a room or a place or even a feeling, please do, but sometimes it doesn't need for that...I've been on GR since 2010 and I've been roleplaying for almost that long and I still put 1 line responses sometimes...
well not always, but com'on " _____ laughed." really guys, you can do better than that. And I'm NOT trying to be the bad guy. I just think it would be MUCH MORE fun adding more details to your comments :-)
do you really want to argue with me? I don't see YOU trying to make the group better and you're a MOD.
I am not argueing with you. And yea, so Im a Mod. How is it you expect me to make the group better? I created this thread -_-
Beautiful the chat is amazing *_* just creating a thread doesn't mean you're doing good and all that. You can be killing off everyone with a knife in one hand and a gun in the other in a RP, but I guess being a mod magically makes you be good..
*sighs* I didn't say you were doing that, it was simply a metaphor-( ish). And I COULD list you my problems buttttt you for? Nahhh
nepeta the most adorable roleplayer wrote: "ok julia lay off you arent making this very fun"she started it, i'm simply saying what i'm saying because SHE wanted a fight.
Paigetwo *Caitlyn* wrote: "Ok then. Whatever. Have a nice day."Why THANKS for caring sooo much for MY well being.
you were arguing back, you COULD have commented somewhere else ( yeah I could have too....)) so you really can't say that.
Yea. This is pointless. I didn't start nor take part of it. That is pretty good considering how I am.





