Your writing discussion

I am writing a book thing; some people say it sounds nothing like twilight but a few has said it does.. of course when people say Vampire they're gonna think of twiligth it s natural but seriously does this sound alot like twilight?????? please read and give me your comments.. if it does sound like twilight imma delete it....



http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

it does NOT, even a little bit, sound like TWILIGHT!!!!!!!!!!

thank you vera much ^^

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The plot isn't like Twilight but their are similar scenes like Jake leaning on his car like Edward always did. The note on the pillow like Breaking Dawn and Twilight. The straight forwardness when Adrein says My Dear and stuff. All the vampire characteristics like that they are cold, and pale, beautiful, and that Jake's vioce you described it as angeletic and musical! So only a little part of it is liek Twilight!