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message 1: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131467 comments Mod
A giant room filled with 60 beds.


message 2: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
At some point while heading down the hall Bryn had gotten ahead of them, living Tiffany and Derek in uncomfortable silence


message 3: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
"Lets get on thing straight." Derek told Tiffany, not looking at her, "I'm only doing this because Bryn asked."


message 4: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (last edited Oct 20, 2013 04:28PM) (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Derek frowned not liking the way, she was talking about Bryn. "You should be nicer to her." he snarled, "She only wants to help."


message 5: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
"Then what would you do if you were caught?" Derek asked angry.


message 6: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Before Derek could give Tiffany a snark come back, Bryn came back to them. "Come on, slowpokes."


message 7: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Bryn smiled at Tiffany, but frowned at her face, "Hey, you okay?"


message 8: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Bryn stopped Tiffany, letting Derek get ahead, "Tiffany?"


message 9: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Bryn frowned, "Okay.." The girls caught up with Derek, who stopped in front a door.


message 10: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Derek opened the door, and led the girls inside and to the cribs in the back, where the babies where kept.


message 11: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Bryn hung back with Derek not wanting to interrupt Tiffany and Jude's reunion.


message 12: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Derek went to make sure, to make sure no one interrupted them.

Bryn found herself missing Dawn watching Tiffany and Jude. She rested her hand on her swollen stomach, could she loved this one like Tiffany did Jude?


message 13: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
((What should happen do they get caught?))


message 14: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
((KK, so then what?))


message 15: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
((Your just making reasons for Tiffany to hate him more... LOL))


message 16: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
((lol :p))

Derek came back, "Time's up, let's go."


message 17: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Bryn leaned against Derek's body, "Will you look after Jude?"
"Sure, love." Derek told her, waiting for Tiffany.


message 18: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Derek nodded and led the girls back to the West Wing.


message 19: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
((sure, u post first))


message 20: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Lee, Bryn, and Tiffany rushed to the boy's room.


message 21: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Lee watched Tiffany and her son, he had made the right choice by getting them and Bryn out. "We need to get moving before they notice us."


message 22: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
"The back door." Lee said, knowing that taking 2 girl out would be hard enough, but with a giant baby carriage they had to stay out of sight.


message 23: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Lee them down the hallway quickly.
Bryn fallowed behind Tiffany and thought she heard footsteps.


message 24: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Bryn squeezed Tiffany's hand, "How much further?"


message 25: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Bryn nodded and heard a man yell from behind them, "Hey where do you think your going?!"


message 26: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
((Should I make Derek die?))


message 27: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
((It'll add sadness, plus he has no purpose to me))


message 28: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Lee came to a stop at the door and pushed Tiffany and Jude ahead of him.
"Stop now!" The guards called, gun shots were shot but missed them.


message 29: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Bryn tried to run but tripped and fell.
“Bryn!” She heard a familiar voice yell.
She looked up and saw Derek at her side, helping her up. “You have to go now!”
“Come with us...” Bryn stopped seeing the gun pointed at her.
“No!” Derek cried and jumped in front of Bryn just as the guard shot at her, but instead hit Derek.
“Derek!” Bryn cried catching him when he fell. Blood pouring from his chest.
Bryn searched his face frantically, but his eyes had already glazed over. “No! No! Derek please!”
Lee ran over to Bryn and pulled her away from Derek’s dead body. Bryn squirmed in his arms, tears in her eyes, “Let me go! I won’t leave him!”
Lee held on tight to Bryn and carried her outside and closed the door behind them. Lee looked around and relaxed seeing Tiffany had made it outside.
"We need to keep moving." He said, not knowing how long they had before they sent people around back.


message 30: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Bryn still struggled in Lee's arms, "Let me go! We can't leave him!"
Lee tightened his grip on Bryn, "Bryn, he's gone."
"Your a monster! I won't leave him!" Bryn cried.
Lee looked at Tiffany looking for help. If Bryn didn't stop yelling, it would give away their location.


message 31: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Bryn focus on Tiffany, tears streaming on her, "Its Derek. I can't leave him!" She cried harder remembering the blood, and feeling the blood on her clothes.


message 32: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Lee looked at Tiffany sadly, "He's dead."
"No he's not!" Bryn cried then quiet down, "He can't be." she said her voice filled with pain.


message 33: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
"I'm not going to be able to get you, two to HQ before nightfall." Lee said watching the fading sun, "But I can get you somewhere safe then here."
Bryn stop fighting Lee and cried softly into his shoulder.


message 34: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Bryn hid her face in Lee's shoulder. She didn't want Tiffany's pity she wanted Derek.
Lee heard footsteps, "Guys we need to get going, now."


message 35: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Lee fallowed behind her.

((Cont @ hotel))


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Jake cooed as his feet moved around. He was about a week old today. He smiled, his twin was in the girls room


message 37: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Jem pulled Meg into his room and over to his bed where his supervisor was.


message 38: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131467 comments Mod
Meg blushed as she fallowed him in. She looked at his supervisor; he was cute.


message 39: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
"What's up kid?" His supervisor asked Jem.
"Meg has a letter but she can't read it." Jem said.
He nodded and noticed Meg, "Do you want me to read it?"


message 40: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131467 comments Mod
She nodded, still blushing. She took it out of her pocket and held it up to him, "yes pweez."


message 41: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
He nodded and took the letter and read it outloud for her


message 42: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131467 comments Mod
dear Megan,
Your mother and I have been best friends for a long time, even before she came to the facility and I became her supervisor.
Your parents met in high school, and they instantly connected. It wasn't until two years after graduation that they got married. And your mother became pregnant.
After eight short months, your father went out to buy you a crib. But there was a robbery and he was held as a hostage with a few others. He sadly didn't live threw it.
Your mother was torn. Around nine months, she came to the facility and had you. She passed away shortly after having you.
My name is Carissa, I can tell you more when your able to read this. Your parents loved you. I'm sorry.
~Cass



message 43: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Will((I need a name)) felt bad as soon as he read it. He wished he had read it in his head first so the girl wouldn't hear it.


message 44: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131467 comments Mod
Meg bit her lip to try and stop the tears. Her parents were dead? She sniffled and ran out of the room.


message 45: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Jem frowned and ran after her, "Meg! Wait up!"


message 46: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131467 comments Mod
Meg stopped and cried hard. Her supervisor lied to her.


message 47: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Jem caught up to her and watched her, not sure how to help. Was he supposed to hug her? Tell her Will must have read it wrong? What was he supposed to do?


message 48: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131467 comments Mod
She looked at Jem and hugged him. She cried harder, hiccuping every so often.


message 49: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80893 comments Mod
Jem hesitated but hugged her back, "i-its going to be okie Meg."


message 50: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131467 comments Mod
She nodded and sniffled. She hugged him a bit longer then pulled away and rubbed her eyes, "sowy.."


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