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message 1: by Vincent, Group Founder (new)

Vincent Lowry (vlowry) | 1131 comments Mod
Night


Make us kids once again.
Smooth these wrinkles
with your starry wonder,
the magic of the unseen.

Erase the scars of days
piled too high to summit,
of memories best
left in the penetrating light.

Return the love of possibility,
the hidden forest that beckons our heart,
the black sea that holds a hundred treasures,
a thousand journeys.

Let one star die on the horizon
so that the birth of countless
suns may be born in our eyes,
flickering dreams yet to be.

Conceal what is known.
Blur what is clear.
And when day catches us again,
let our eyes be closed in a moonlight bliss.

(c) 2013 by Vincent Lowry


message 2: by Steven (new)

Steven (tbones) | 408 comments Very nice :o)


message 3: by Vincent, Group Founder (new)

Vincent Lowry (vlowry) | 1131 comments Mod
Thanks, Steven :)


message 4: by Steven (new)

Steven (tbones) | 408 comments You are most certainly welcome sir :o)


message 5: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinbienvenue) | 2293 comments Very good poem Vincent


Cate's Book Nut Hut (catesbooknuthut) This is a wonderful poem. The rhythm is right for the subject and it flows. Do you have an anthology?


message 7: by Vincent, Group Founder (new)

Vincent Lowry (vlowry) | 1131 comments Mod
Thank you, Justin and Cate.

I will have an anthology of poems coming out soon. I hope it will be by the end of 2013.


message 8: by Vanessa Eden (new)

Vanessa  Eden Patton (vanessaeden) | 509 comments I feel you man


message 9: by Vincent, Group Founder (new)

Vincent Lowry (vlowry) | 1131 comments Mod
I'm glad you liked it Vanessa :)


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