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message 1: by Apps *ąþþℓεş щïŧɧ şþℓεεŋ ïş şҩųïşɧγ*, Apples of the Insanity Troop (last edited Oct 31, 2013 02:06AM) (new)

Apps *ąþþℓεş щïŧɧ şþℓεεŋ ïş şҩųïşɧγ* (appsl) | 173 comments Mod
The Shadow Realm

The River of Forgotten Memories

A pale, milky river meanders around ruins of ancient temples. The temples once might once have had great white pillars and arches, but time has eroded it's grace. All is silent but for the rustling of the knee high grass.

Path One



message 2: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments Marus strolled through the temples. They were little more than ruins but with his mind's eye he saw them as they used to be. He saw them, great and mighty, a show of dedication to half-forgotten gods. He saw the people who had lived here. He saw the priests, and a lamb they led to the altar. He saw men, not unlike himself, with gladii, controlling the crowds. He walked amongst them, unnoticed, only half-aware that what he saw wasn't as it was.


message 3: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments Marus turned through his dreamscape, walking and conversing with people long dead, and seeing sights that have long since faded.


message 4: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments ((In reality, the only human there is Marus, he's just having freaky flashback hallucinations...))


message 5: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments ((Cool. You gonna edit?))


message 6: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments ((OK))

Marus continued from his dreamview. But something was wrong. An intruder. His conciousness snapped to reality, and his mind interpreted the deaths and ruination of all those people. He sank to his knees and began to weep.


message 7: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments ((Sorry for the massive delay))

Marus looked up, the tears drying from his face. He was to show honour in defeat. He unclipped his gladius, and threw it away from him, then stood up, barely acknowledging the intruder.


message 8: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments He looked at her for the first time, and asked, helpless, "Where am I? Why are they all dead?"


message 9: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments "Then why did I not die with them?"


message 10: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments He stood, and made it clear that he would follow her.


message 11: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments "Lead the way."


message 12: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments Marus followed her, still partially in shock from his terrible revelations. His mind unable to function fully, he found himself asking: "Where are we now?"


message 13: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments He did so, and looked across to her, then adjusted the rag to fit better.


message 14: by The Phantom (new)

The Phantom (zerosummations) | 176 comments "Scipius Marus Iucundus." Marus replied with his full name. Marus the Second of the House of Scipii.


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