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message 1: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) Where Mongul is absolute ruler.


Anna (Unquenchable Reads) (unquenchablereads) (Is this where Madison is?)


message 3: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) ( Yeah she is most likely in the cells waiting for the arena to begin)


Anna (Unquenchable Reads) (unquenchablereads) (Ok)

Madison cries in her cell. She missed her daddy mommy Antony Alaina and Kat. She was only five. How was she going to fight?


message 5: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) ((You know, Abomination II is stranded on a prison planet. You could easily grab him and have him fight her.))


Anna (Unquenchable Reads) (unquenchablereads) Madison kept crying. She wanted Kat. She curled up in a corner.


message 7: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) It had been a four day flight, and Abomination II was almost fully healed. He was ready to take on anything... except Mongul. Or Supes. Or... well, hopefully most members of this planet weren't as strong as Mongul, or, which would be most helpful, weren't as strong as him. It would be easy to fight against weaklings.


message 8: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) " Now, let's see." Mongul said looking through the cells for his choice of battle. Finally coming to abomination's cell he looked him up and down for a moment or two. " So tell me, what exactly can you do."


message 9: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) "I smash things. I know a few basic Martial Arts moves. I fight. I'm three times stronger than The Hulk when he hasn't amplified his strength through a greater level of anger. I... I fight. That's it," Abomination II answered. He was sort of in the right place.


message 10: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) " Hmm, interesting a neanderthal with extra rough skin... as long as you don't die you'll be worth my time.." Mongul said realizing his cell as the cells began to signal the way to the battlefield.


Anna (Unquenchable Reads) (unquenchablereads) Madison kept crying. She wanted her family. She was only five. She couldn't fight.


message 12: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) Abomination II really would rather face ANYTHING over Mongul, so he headed in the direction of the arrows flashing, with just a slight pain in his neck to remind him of what Mongul could do. He made his way to the arena, and put himself near the middle while he awaited what would happen next.
((What happens next?))


message 13: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) ( He faces the little girl...)

Mongul waited till he prize was on the stage. " Ladies and gentleman of War World, I present to you Ragnarok vs the Stark Crybaby..."


message 14: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) "Ragnarok?" Ragnarok... I guess... asked. He kind of liked it. It was better than Abomination II, at least. The number took the fear right out of the name.
"RAGNAROK!!!" He bellowed. It was clear that he was not the longshot here. Everyone was betting on him, though who they were going to collect from was beyond him.


message 15: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) " Let him show no mercy." Mongul bellowed as threw him an energy axe. "realize the girl.." He said as Madison was thrown into the ring.


Anna (Unquenchable Reads) (unquenchablereads) Madison sniffled and looked at who she had to fight. She didn't even know how to fight. "I'm nwot a crwybaby!"


message 17: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) ((Release. Release the girl. Realize it to figure something out.))

Ragnarok knew what was supposed to happen next. He gives them a show. That would be tough with her. He stepped up to her, the small child being nothing to his near 12 feet in height. A baby. They sent him against a baby. Ah, well. Let's give them a show.
He grabbed her by the hair and flung her (only about 30 feet) into the air, holding back so that he didn't kill her by accident.


message 18: by GatbsyLover20 (last edited Aug 17, 2013 12:30PM) (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) ( Sorry :P)

Mongul leaned a little in his thrown. One move and he was good, my he might have a future in this after all.


Anna (Unquenchable Reads) (unquenchablereads) Madison screamed. She didn't know what to do. She hoped someone would come.

(Can anyone get here?????)


message 20: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) ((I don't think so, maybe Dusty, but he doesn't know where "here" is.))
Ragnarok caught her on her way down and spun her around by her legs in his right hand, to the delight of the crowd. He found a particularly deep patch of sand (I pictured the Arena floor covered in sand, is that accurate?) and threw her into it, well, it was more of a drop, really, because if the fight was over too soon, he'd have a disappointed crowd.


message 21: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) ( Yes)

The tyrant smiled. The fight just kept getting better and better.


Anna (Unquenchable Reads) (unquenchablereads) Madison landed on the sand. She quickly sat up. She felt pain but wasn't going to cry.

(Is there any way Madison could maybe live?)


message 23: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) ( I doubt it Mongul wants to see death... so it's either Madison or Ragnarok)


message 24: by Kendra (last edited Aug 17, 2013 12:43PM) (new)

Kendra (madamejade) ((Well, we can't kill her without permission from you, so...))

Ragnarok pounded the sand a few feet away from her with a fraction of his strength and the sudden soil displacement threw the little girl onto her side. He pinned her down with his left hand and rose his right hand in a fist. Then he looked about the crowd. Should he be getting thumbs up/ thumbs down signs now?


Anna (Unquenchable Reads) (unquenchablereads) (Every time I get a favorite character on here they die)


message 26: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) ( Well im making Black Hand soon so it'll all work out... and it'll give the heroes a reason to fight more)


Anna (Unquenchable Reads) (unquenchablereads) Madison looks at him with big eyes filled with fear. Her mouth she kept closed.

(I guess you can if you want to. Unless Mongul wants a servant)


message 28: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) ((Still waiting for Mangul's verdict. Thumbs down means kill her, Thumbs up let her live, the so-so sign and he keeps the fight going awhile longer.))


message 29: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) Mongul's face formed a sadistic grin. As his hand went sideways, it was time to see just a wee bit more suffering.


message 30: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) Ragnarok nodded in the tyrant's direction and backed away from Madison a bit. He heaped up huge scoopes of sand and threw them into her, causing her skin to be eroded away, giving her a whole bunch of what seemed to be papercuts.


Anna (Unquenchable Reads) (unquenchablereads) Madison saw the blood. She tried not to cry. She had no idea of what to do.


message 32: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) Mongul watched with a smirk on his face, so vicious, exactly what his twisted mind loved to see.


message 33: by Kendra (last edited Aug 17, 2013 01:07PM) (new)

Kendra (madamejade) It was time for a grand finale. A crowd can only watch so much of a giant pounding an infant. He scooped up the girl and threw her 45 feet into the air before he bounded onto the wall of the arena, waiting for her to come back down.
It didn't take long. He leaped from his perch, the gray monster redirecting his fall directly above Madison Stark to go straight down, with his fist only inches behind her. As she landed, his fist crushed her, along with going rather deep into the stone beneath the sand. He rose his fist triumphantly, his fist coated in sand and tiny bits of rock, glued there by children's blood. He let out a mighty roar as the crowd cheered.


Anna (Unquenchable Reads) (unquenchablereads) Well, Madison was dead now. Alittle five year old killed. Buried in the sand.


message 35: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) ((How many people have died on this arena, and are they cleaned up after?))


message 36: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) Mongul appealed " Fantastic, Fantastic..." Mongul decided to take the floating pad down to him. " Let's hear it for new champion of War World."


message 37: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) Well, they heard it for him. The crowd went nuts.
"These are the wealthy who like watching kids die, I assume," Ragnarok... I guess... guessed.


message 38: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) ( Thousands... and mongul as mutated wolves eat the corpses)

" Of course they are... and if they're don't well, let's just say my collusiem gets a new fighter... for at least one round."


message 39: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) ((So, there's lots of bones.
Also, could you look over that sentence, because I'm not sure what he's saying.))


message 40: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) ( He's saying if they don't like it he'll for them to fight but they dont last long)


message 41: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) ((Force who to fight who?))


message 42: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) ( Just people in the past like rebels and such have fought his best warriors and died very brutally)


message 43: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) "Do you have anyone who isn't a little girl for me to fight?" it made sense that the tyrant would, since that seemed to be his job.


message 44: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) " Actually, I did have a man on a glider who was suppose to find fighters for you... but i do not know where he is."


message 45: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) "The Dust Goblin? He can't fight supers. He kills the weak and runs away from the strong, using ambushes. He only kills, he does not capture." And he knows this because... um... Plot convenience.


message 46: by GatbsyLover20 (new)

GatbsyLover20 (dclover) " Well if he does not capture, I will crush his skull in my grip myself." Mongul said in an unamused grunt.


message 47: by Kendra (new)

Kendra (madamejade) "He has no skull. He is made of dust," Ragnarok actually knows this one. He saw under Dusty's suit.
Right about then, someone who looked exactly like the Green Goblin (Dusty) came out of a black portal and dumped what seemed to be a hybrid man/gecko at Mongul's feet.
"I hope you don't mind that I also killed innocent bystanders," he told Mongul before he flew back into the portal, which closed behind him.


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

Alaina drove by, parking her motorcycle. She took off her sunglasses, because it was getting dark. She leaned against her motorcycle, thinking. "It looks safe to me." She muttered. She was still various, having her phone ready to call for back up. Alaina walked right in, searching for Madison.


message 49: by Kendra (last edited Aug 17, 2013 03:31PM) (new)

Kendra (madamejade) ((This is a different planet.))


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

((Its under Places, not Planets.))


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