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Love the concept of a whole other world, but I think that the plot shouldn't move as smoothly as the description leads the reader to believe.






One day, het parents she and her little brother moved to another city for her father's job. She didn't liked it, the boring little city... Until strange things happened. She got kidnapped by an elf. She took her to her world and that's were the story starts.
Will Anna succeed in saving one world? Is she able to deciber the strange markings in the white book?