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Caitlan
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May 23, 2009 07:51AM
okay, this folder is for information and questions....ask away!
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umm.. what exactly are we meant to do in this group?
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yes you do. lol
here it is it's very dramatic.
Baelia turned from Lust and Bryce and collapsed into a chair. She closed her eyes, her heart hurting. The nightmares all came back flooding into her mind. She could remember her mother holding her in her arms, Baelia only 5 years old, her mother smoothing her hair back as Baelia's little body was racked with pain, both physical and mentally. She remembered seeing her father standing in the hallway, talking with the doctor, and the doctor told Baelia's father she would not live past the age of 18. Her grandma stood by him, and her strong, wonderful father collapsing into crying, his mother holding him. Baelia remembered the tears from her mothers eyes fall into her hair.
Her memory fast forwarded 13 years later, Baelia now 18. She sat in a chair, her legs twisted, her hands like claws. Her face was gaunt and pale. Her mother and father were talking in the corner. They had decided the only way to save their precious daughter was to turn her into a vampire. Baelia had rested her head on the table, feeling too weak to lift it back up. There was a knock on the door. Her mother wiped the tears from her eyes from watching her daughter struggle. She rushed to the door and opened it. A tall, pale beautiful man stood there.
"Can we trust you?" her mother asked in a hushed tone.
"There's no one better." the man said in a velvet voice. Her mother nodded, the tears again streaming down her face as she walked towards Baelia. She took her hand. "It's going to be alright sweetie. This man is going to make you better." Baelia saw her mother's eyes were filled with fear.
"Is it going to hurt?" She asked, feeling childish.
"Only a little bit, sweetie, but it will make everything all better."
The man was suddenly by Baelia's side. His face was slightly twisted in disgust at Baelia's bent limbs. Her mother gripped her hand as the vampire got closer, then bit her neck. Baelia screamed, the pain, oh the pain was terrible. "Mama!" She shrieked, looking at her mother desperately. "Help me!"
Her mother bit her lip. "I'm so sorry! I love you Baelia. Remember that. I love you."
Baelia tried to speak. "Ma- I lo-" She broke off with another scream, and blacked out. When she woke up, her parents were gone.
SWEET!!!!!!!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEE VAMPIRES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZZZZZZIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 CAN YOU PUT MORE ON IT PLEASE?!
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well, can you make it into a story??? PLEASE!!!
please please please please please?!?!?!?
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he he! i don't really like vampire stories but yours is good Liv! idk why i just called u Liv but it works, right?
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