Anything & Everything!!!! :D discussion

so i got a few replies saying that we should have writings folder in our group.

here is the place where you can post poems...


i start!




Cathartic

red splashes
blood flowing as if a watefall
clock ticking
water dripping
heart beating
as every second goes by it gets worse
the pain now almost unbearable

before the darkness takes over me
there are flashes of images ; memories
prictures of you leaving me
YOU, who once meant the world to me
leaving me
leaving me alone
to play the game called "life"

as the fire consumes me
the pain overwhelms me
my body screams out of pain
burns scorche my skin
my heart beat slows down
water drips faster
the clock stops ticking
I QUIT

Here's an haiku i made up:

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't end right
Air Conditioner

Aiman wrote: "Here's an haiku i made up:

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't end right
Air Conditioner"


ummmm? im sure id like it if i knew how haikus worked....

Rose wrote: "Aiman wrote: "Here's an haiku i made up:

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't end right
Air Conditioner"


ummmm? im sure id like it if i knew how haikus worked...."

Really Rose, you DO live under a rock!
*exhasperated sigh.
*shakes head*

Aiman wrote: "Here's an haiku i made up:

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't end right
Air Conditioner"

hahahaha good one!
that actually made me laugh.

First line must have 5 syllables
Second line must have 7 syllables
Third line must also have 5 syllables

yup! Makyla's got it right!

see Rose, unline you Makayla is SMART...

Im hurt :(

put a bandaid on it. noon cares.
lol. im way toooo sarcastic.
CUZ IM JUZ SOOO AWESOME!
hahahaha yup im pretty funny

U wish i love u XP

pffft i wasnt talking to u....
oops i was meant to write that in the Adrian fan club...

Sasha Ivashkov-Herondale wrote: "Aiman wrote: "Here's an haiku i made up:

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't end right
Air Conditioner"

hahahaha good one!
that actually made me laugh."

Thanks ;)

Autumn leaves falling
Spreading colour through the grass
Makes me want to dance

Sucks that in Australia, leaves don't turn orange and red and yellow during Autumn and fall off trees.

Depends where u live. Where me n sasha live it does happen. Sometimes.

yup. Laeaves always fall off.

Rose wrote: "Depends where u live. Where me n sasha live it does happen. Sometimes."

Not for me

My teacher made me write some haikus for class-voila!

Haiku's are so short,
and so very much boring.
Who invented them?

A Japanese man,
wrote a very stupid poem,
in quite old Japan.

Called it a new type,
so he could be quite famous
I suppose. BORING!

Here we sit in L.A.,
A long time after after Japan,
writing dumb haiku's.

Idiotic Poem,
Everybody hates you.
Especially me.

I'm writing another poem called,"Office Supply Princess" and "Why I hate your Guts". COMMENT PWEASE! I WILL WUV YOU FOREVER IF YOU DO!

Please post a link to them, Angel. They sound great!

just a little inspirational outburst during science...hope you like it

Pink and orange streaks form across the sky.
Ripping open the clouds making way for the sun.
All points to a perfect, bright and sunny day.

Office Supply Princess (rough draft)

Paper clips are her necklace,
Packing pellets her bejeweled crown.
Tape is a gem, oh so rare.
Printer paper of the highest variety is her bracelet.
An office chair is her throne.
Oh who is this regal creature?

My little sister at my mother's office.

Pwease comment!

Angel wrote: "Office Supply Princess (rough draft)

Paper clips are her necklace,
Packing pellets her bejeweled crown.
Tape is a gem, oh so rare.
Printer paper of the highest variety is her bracelet.
An office c..."

This is really good...and super cute

Thanks!!!!! :)

Cool

This was my deviantart journal:

(I hate sharing my work, but here goes)

I thought I was going to die
But you saved me.
I thought I was going to starve
But you fed me.
I thought I was going to drown
But you gave me air.
I thought that there was no one
But you cared.
I thought that I had fallen
But you helped me up.
And I thought that I was broken
But I didn't realise you'd fixed me.

It's called 'You, My Saviour'

that is simply amazing n heartwarming.

You can see some of my other work at:

http://makayla-maud.deviantart.com/

Forgotten:

When flesh evaporates
When Earth dissolves
When oceans burn
When Man fades
And Angels are condemned
The forgotten shall grow wings
To swallow the world
They once loved