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Lina looked at Molsdar confused, "Take it before I send Goul back on you." He growled, she gingerly took the food from him, thinking it was a trap. "You need your energy for this Sunday." "What's this Sunday?" She asked, with food in her mouth, she was starving. "Don't talk with your mouthful, you'll choke."
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Alex let go of Fae, and stood again, Ginger watched him. He kept a calm composure to his face though he felt very much like destryoing a whole building.


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((when will you learn it's MOSLDAR not Molsdar?))
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Lucy opened her eyes, and looked around, it always took her a while to remember where she was after a vision. After remembering she was in her room watching TV, she francticly stood and called Fae's cell phone.
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Fae's cell rang, loud and clear, ruining the concentration of Ginger and Alex's meditation. They let it ring three times before deciding to get it, Ginger answered the phone: "Um... hello?"
"Ginger? Why do you have Fae's phone?"
"Well, I-"
"Nover mind, it doesn't matter; look, I just had another vision and I think that Lina's in trouble... this person had the most horrible red beady eyes, and he was draining Lina of her powers... it was horrible..."
"Lina? Do you know where Lina is?" Alex looked up to Ginger, and put out a hand for the phone.
"Who is this?" Alex was cautious for a trap; "Let me come over there and I'll explain.... where are you?"


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((you know Jess, fucking sue me, okay? sue me!))

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Lina ate her food in silence, her hand shook terribly as she nibbled. "Why am I here?" She finally managed to ask, Mosldar looked at her, "In due time, my dear, in due time." "But I want to know NOW." Lina spoke out of terms, then flinched, thinking he was going to send Goul on her again.
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Alex kept his staff raised and pointed at the door when Lucy flew the door open, "We have to hurry, it's almost time." "Time for what?" Ginger put a hand on Alex's staff and lowered it, then got Lucy a glass of water to help calm her breathing. She ran all the way there, from the second that Ginger picked up the phone. Lucy looked over to Fae, and nearly screamed, "What happened?" "A spell... nothing that can't be broken easily." Alex lied, to make not only Lucy, but Ginger feel better.
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"The next full moon, there's a ritual I do once a year, when the full moon is at the direct point..."
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"he calls it the 'Drain Ritual', and it's exactly what it sounds like...."
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"Your power is special, yours has something that not your sister or your mother have." "What's that?" She asked, almost scared to know...
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"He only drains the young, the fresher the power, the more he can take..."


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Mosldar smiled at her reaction, "You.... you're gonna...... what?" Lina stumbled for words, crawling back a bit with plate in hand. "Full moon tommorow night, you will be nothing more than an empty shell."
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Fae screeched again, causing Ginger and Lucy to hurridly run over there. Alex slowly got up and followed, keeping an eye on her tribal markings; Fae's wings went back in and her marking dulled down, becoming a normal color again.
Fae opened her eyes and looked up a everyone, "What are you all doig in my house?" She sat up and looked around, "Wait... this isn't my house... What happened?"


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Fae stumbled to her feet ((yes it's possible because I've done it... and as we all know Fae is me)), then wobbled a bit more; Ginger grabbed onto her to steady her and Lucy ran to get her something to drink.
"How are you feeling?"
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Mosldar growled, and slammed Lucy against the bars; she screamed in pain.
"Do you ever stop talking?!!"
He put his hand to her throat, then it glowed a red, burning her throat. Lina opened her mouth, but no sound came out; she widened her eyes in panic and suprise.
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Fae drank the water quickly, her throat had been burning ever since she woke up. "Fae?" Alex squated next to her, putting his staff carefully down and stared into her eyes. Fae looked at him, "Will you tell me what's going on?" He nodded, and slanted his eyes, staring into her eyes; she leaned back slightly.
"I'm going to ask you a few questions, okay?" She reluctantly nodded, and he began.
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Lina slammed her head against the wall, over and over again, "Will you stop the drama, I just temporary ook out your voice.... you were annoying me." Lina looked at Mosldar, and opened her mouth to angrily scream.
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"Do you remember your full name?"
"Faeth... Nomi Cringe."
He clicked his tongue, not looking happy for the pause; "How old are you?"
"Seventeen... why again are you asking me this question?"
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Mosldar sat down and looked at the crystal ball, he saw Alex looking back at him, "She's gonna lead you right to me... You'll pay for your actions... I swear it."


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