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message 1: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
example:

(this is a way i guess of developing their persionality??? XD)


Kyle: Hey!! how's it goinG!!! i don't actually rememebr anythng of my past, which sucks!! and first thing that happens to me is that i get attacked by wolves!! :'( lukcily the epic trio were there to kill the wolves... adn eric of course.

Eric: HEY!! im like, the same!!! i just found myself in a forest randomly, and it was pitch dark and i also got attacked!! but kyle, you were much worse!! you have three VERY deep gashes on your chest.. -.-'



Bianca: hey!! i'm like, totally in the same boat as you guys!! i woke up to find myself deep in snow!! it was FREEZING! nad guess what?? i found a guy....IN A FROZEN LAKE!!! and i was like ZAP nad got him out...he was like.. wearin NOTHIG on apart from VERY ripped pants.


Me: guys!! stop confusing people!! they haven't read your story yet!!

neal: (the dude in the lake) Yeah! 'cause you have only posted 2 chapters and ''PROMISED' to post a third, so..WHERE IS IT???

me: ':O!!! i promised to post it by the end of the month!!!

Neal: you FINALLY got 2 fans who are awaiting updates, and you still ahven't!!

me: :'(!! but it's HARD!!

Neal: for heaven's sake!! you freaking wrote me into a frozen lake!!! i want to get to elementum!!! i have like.. hypothermia!!! get me OUT of here!!!

me: b-but, that's not until like.. chapter 5 or 4!!!

Kyyle: yeah, wait up!! i have to be treated first!! btw o heaveny creator, i kinda agree with nea on that point....i'm here, stuck with three deep gashes, and you're busy writing this sh!t!!! get off your computer, put socks on, adn stop writing ujseless crepes!!!!


message 2: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
(Xd i ra for it he is pretty scary.. neals scrier though XD)


message 3: by Janelle (new)

Janelle (LOL! WTF COOL!?!? This junk is funny but confusing XDDD)


message 4: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
(^^ hehehhe XD that's the point, only if you know who the characters are then you could understand....so...point is...READ MY STORY!! nah jks that wasn't the point. i just wrote w/e k?? that's what you guys should do)


message 5: by Janelle (new)

Janelle (alright, give me some time to let creative juice build up okay? :D)


message 6: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
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message 7: by νєяαℓι∂αιиє , Goddess of Short stories (new)

νєяαℓι∂αιиє  | 57 comments Mod
Here's what the main character in my story thinks of me:

Katarina: WHY THE HELL did you dump me with an annoying cat that talks and reads my PRIVATE (note the private) thoughts????????

Also, that bird that was singing? It has the worst song ever, you know that? It stopped just in time.


message 8: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
winter: -.-'


message 9: by νєяαℓι∂αιиє , Goddess of Short stories (new)

νєяαℓι∂αιиє  | 57 comments Mod
XD


message 10: by Janelle (new)

Janelle This is my main characters:

Cassandra: Well, well, well, look who finally decided to show. where have you been these past three weeks not releasing a single new chapter? this next one better be good because your fans... HATE YOU.

Me: I'm sorry... I'm trying but school keeps me busy-

Rose: We don't wanna hear it, kree-ate-tor! You abandoned us for your petty homework? HOW COULD YOU?!

Me: I'm sorry!! *sobs*

Alex Medina: Sorry won't cut it this time, Janelle. You'll have to do more for your repentance status. RELEASE MORE CHAPTERS FASTER!!

Me: I'M SORRY!!!! *wails*

Rose, Cassandra, Alex: *sighs* She doesn't get it...


message 11: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
Alex: hehehe we have the same name. hi im kyle's brother


message 12: by Janelle (new)

Janelle Alex Medina: Hey, I'm Rick's younger brother. (another character in the story) how're you? ^^


message 13: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
Alex: oh im.good. im actually not in coolio's story yet, only rps. since im in the fture in the second book


message 14: by Janelle (new)

Janelle Alex Medina: I feel your pain bro, i'm supposed to be a main character yet i barely appear at all. Guess whose fault that is? *glares at author* the worst part is i 'like' the main character Cassandra >.<


message 15: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
Alex: lol, yeah, i'm not actually a main character..am i?

me: i havem't decided yet but you'd be a minor major character

Alex: -.-' what on earth is that??

me: it means you are a major character but your not really important?? or you;'re important but you dn't affect the main characters or plot line much????


Alex: -_- see what i have to deal witgh?!!?!?

Kyle: Don't worry bro!!! its cool

Alex: like you can speak!! byou're the main character!!

Alexis: i aM too don't forget!!

Thalia: GET LOST!!! dam gwidon spawn!!

Alexis: :'(


message 16: by Janelle (new)

Janelle Alex medina: O-K. I'm just going to pretend that never happened. *back away slowly and disappears*

Sam: Don't listen to him. You guys are hugely entertaining ^o^

Tory: Yeah, all we have to do is get some popcorn and watch the show ^o^

Cassandra: why does it seem like you're mocking them? -_-

Sam and Tory: cuz we are! ^o^ *brillant smile and standard thumbs up*

Cassandra: idiots. -_-


message 17: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
Alexis: btw, if you want to understand ANY of this you should really go read coolio's story!! it's on goodreads and wattpad!!

Thalia: don't go ordering around people damn child of Gwidon!!!!!

Gwidon: OFF WITH HER HEAD!!!

me: btw gwi is a tyrant king who hate people like thalia (elementals) and alexis is his daughter so ppl hate alexis


alexis: :'(!! but i hate him too!! he treats me like....crap!!!! :'(

Gwidon:.....-_-' i love you too honey


message 18: by Janelle (new)

Janelle Cassandra: oh trust me you guys, the author over on our side has definitely read a few pages of your story, but nevertheless she didn't get far into it (I don't think there was much chapters out at the time) anyways, i'll make sure our creator catches up again. Right creator?

Janelle (me): o-of course!!! ^o^;


message 19: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
me: ^^ onlt 2 chapters up.....

SEra: it's sad cause she has already written hslf of chapter 3 AND she has written chapter 6 and a few other chapters but 1 thwy are later on and 2 she is too lazy to type em up.

me: yeah :'( sera is so sweet <3 but last night at 12am i came up with loooadfs of stuff. im going to have like lts of proogues i think.


message 20: by Janelle (new)

Janelle Me: oh that's good :D

Rose: you still haven't updated that story? For God's sake my creator started a completely new version of her story AFTER she was on chapter 15 and started from scratch. She has 8 chapters out from the new version and hopes to release the new chapter soon. Where have YOU been all these long years!?!

Me: n-now don't be so rude rose, i'm sure Cool had many things to do other than write her hobby. When she's ready to write again we'll all be ready and waiting for her :)

Rosr: yeah, yeah, buttercup...


message 21: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
me: nah. too lazy and imma not actually allowed to write cause i get too into it and i have loooafds of homework and i say im doing it but REALLY im reading manga ^^


message 22: by Janelle (new)

Janelle Me: hahahaha, that's exactly what it is for me XDDDD i've been saying for several weeks now i'm gonna release this chapter but i never do because of hw or a book i'm reading. (usually the book XD) so yeah, i've officially stopped doing my hw because i'm too lazy to do it ^o^


message 23: by Janelle (new)

Janelle ((wait a second!!!! you read Noblesse!?!? >:o)


message 24: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
me: um...-.-' yeah?? *to luke*whisper** how'd she know???

luke: want me to get rid of her???

me:!! NO!!! maybe later ^^

macbeth: -_- coolio'!! go write an essay about me !!!!

me: :'( do i have to??

macbeth: do you WANT to go see the play or not!??!

me: :'( kk


message 25: by Janelle (new)

Janelle Me: Like the MANGA Noblesse with rai and frankenstein and stuff? and HEY! wait a second! are you guys tryin to get rid of me!? QwQ

Rose: What are you guys talkin about?

Tory: I believe it's about an essay and play.

Cassandra: What kinda play?

Tory: The romantic tragedy kind.

Cassandra: How do you know?

Tory: I read the future +_+

Cassandra: No you didn't. you hate using your powers. What's the play about macbeth?

Tory: Pay attention to me please...

Alex Medina: MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! She could care less about you Torrence, just accept that she loves me more!

Tory: Technically, in the story right now she's thinking of me more than she is you.

Alex: but she's afraid of you! what kind of love is that when she's in constant fear that you're going to kill her in one of your escapades!?

Tory: I would never harm something so precious.

Alex: You already have!!!

Cassandra: I love how you guys talk about me like I'm not here -_-


message 26: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
me:.......franken is so evil its funny <3<3<3<3<3 and rai lol...
its like... rai manages to.open the door by himself for the first time...m-21 thinks they have been found ans the enemy is ousdie and thats why they stopped outsude the door and was opening it slowly. then he opens the door and light streams in like...lol...and franken vlaps and m-21 is sooo confused ^^ XD


message 27: by Janelle (new)

Janelle Me: yes!!!! That's the one! (but that happened so long ago :/) what chapter are you on? Or do you get the books instead of going online? But that scene was sooooooo funny. It reminds me when rai got a phone and he sent m-21 a message saying, Good job~ Good job~ m-21. And m-21 got confused thinkin the union had found him again XD I was laughing so hard when i first read that scene. I love noblesse, mainly cuz of rai, red head, fraken (and who is the blond that is TOTS hot with the cool mask and leader of the kertia clan?) yup, those are my favorites :D franken though... He is just TOO funny!!! (and sometimes he looks kinda hot except when he's transformed by the dark spear :/) man i love noblesse. Why isn't it more popular yet? It's so hard to find noblesse fans!! XD


message 28: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
...dude...its the 3rd mist populer manga on manga fix..where i reas my manga. and i am on chapter 30 something for the 3rd time. jks you seemm. i started reading the manga but then stopped at around hpater 40 the re started and finished it now im re starting it cause tuesday takes roo long to get here..bte thats the day a new noblesse chapter is realesed. im also into the author's other manga called ability!! love that!!


message 29: by Janelle (new)

Janelle wow, seriously? i'm on chapter 297. i get my manga from mangapanda.com. mangafix most not be a popular website becuz other than you and like, one other, i've never heard a wisp from noblesse fans. i've reread noblesse a number of times too XD i think on the website i go it it's released every monday.
oooooohh! you have GOT to read the manga called kubera!!! it compares to noblesse! and i'll make sure to check out ability. if it's anything like noblesse and how great it is then it must be awesome! :D

http://www.mangapanda.com/kubera


message 30: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
you see, mannga fox is the most populaar manga site i think. and it IS realesd late mondays but i read it tuesdays.

and the reason i started reading noblesse was cause of ability!! and ability comes out every thursdays or fris but i read it on saturdays along with beelzebub. i've been eagerly awaiting for new chapters since the middle ^^.


and i shall read that


message 31: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
actually now on manga fox noblesse is no. 2 in popularity above http://mangafox.me/

it goes

1. naruto
2. noblesse
3. beelzebub
6. maid-sama! deserves to be higher though


message 32: by Janelle (new)

Janelle Oh wait, it's manga FOX, not FIX? (you said fix first XD) then yeah, i know manga fox. It is a pretty popular website huh? I don't get on it a lot though :/ (mostly cuz i haven't figured out to navigate it yet XD) ability huh? Now i've got to check it out. It sounds so interesting! I wonder what it's about :0

Naruto shall forever be number 1 it seems XD yeah with manga fox they do things right and put noblesse in the top ten chart!!! (on mangapanda it's not even mentioned and you have to manually look it up :/) they even have pandora hearts before noblesse!!! >:o beelz is sooo funny XD *le gasp* maid sama!! I totally forgot about the manga! I promised myself i would continue it after finishing the anime but i guess i forgot! XD how much you wanna bet 3rd 4th and 5th place are bleach, one piece and fairy tail? :/

So how far is mangafox with the chapters in noblesse? Didn't you say they were in the 40s/50s section in chapters? If so, they must not have many volunteers on that project :/ (the horror!!! QwQ)


message 33: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
for manga fox it's the world god only knows i think and then kimi no iru machu then it's maid sama


no n on on !!!!!!! IT'S ON 198 AS OF LATE MONDAY!!!


IMMA GONNA READ IT NOW!!!!!

Annarasumanara photo: annarasumanara-2669343_zps97748e62 annarasumanara-2669343_zps97748e62.jpg


and then back to annarasumanara


message 34: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
go here now: http://forums.mangafox.me/threads/486...

you will NEVER regret it i promise!!


message 35: by Janelle (new)

Janelle ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 wrote: "go here now: http://forums.mangafox.me/threads/486...

you will NEVER regret it i promise!!"


what's going on? i don't get it o-o (i'm opening up the link now)


message 36: by Janelle (new)

Janelle ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 wrote: "go here now: http://forums.mangafox.me/threads/486...

you will NEVER regret it i promise!!"


lol, you'll never guess what i got ;D (I rechose when i got a girl for first kiss or whatever but for the most part it was pretty clean :D)


message 37: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
pfft mine were sooo out there....


message 38: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
o did ot three tomes


i married ignes (girl star of newest chpt.), rael and regis....

at some point.the old.lord liked me

and rai killed me.....and the same time he was my riv


message 39: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
al


message 40: by Janelle (new)

Janelle Why don't you just edit what you say instead of using a brand new box? XD

And that isn't the newest chapter :/ that one is pretty old. Right now i'm on chapter 297 where they are explaining frankenstein's and rai's past after the latest battle with the new revealed union clan leaders :0


message 41: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
^^ hehehehhehhe


well

1) too lazzy

2) i've reaad chapter 198 ^^ so i'm happy <3~~~


message 42: by Janelle (new)

Janelle Hehe. That was a really funny arc XD


message 43: by ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆, Goddess of gods and goddesses ~ Noblesse (new)

ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 138 comments Mod
^^ ya


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