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Hi everyone!
I am Leo Borgelin and a creative writer. I have an upcoming book coming out called The Sun Came Through My Window To Say Hello.
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We Were Once Gods
We were once Gods,
living high in the mountain tops
Free of order, roaming the free land,
The day was young, but it had yet to grow,
Giving time the opening to run aimlessly
But then the day grew old,
Time limited itself, order became my captor
holding me with its bare hands as time marks my new boundaries,
I now sit on a flat land with no ups and downs
Restricted to travel a day's worth abroad my new land,
Never again are we to reach our beloved land
The mountains were high
And the Greenland was low,
Never again we were to access our beloved land,
Foreign to us as we now know it,
But still strong in our roots
To only serve as a reminder to what kind of life we once lived,
As our only option we helped these new Gods grow,
Nurturing the Gods because they remind us of what was once ours,
For we too were once in their land,
As we had fallen from the mountain tops,
They will do accordingly,
Side by side in the land where time age,
No longer in the Mountains where youth persist
For this is the life of us Gods

I'm a self-published author with a middle grade children's historical fiction novel coming out shortly.
My book is called, Tula's Path: A Cherokee Trail of Tears Story.
Here's my blurb:
When Tula’s father announced that he was moving the family outside of the Cherokee Nation to live as whites, something inside her began to die. That was six long years ago, and Tula has struggled every day since. She hated leaving her people. She hated leaving her grandfather. She hated watching her mother grieve herself to death. But what she hates most of all is keeping her Cherokee heritage a secret. Then in one day, all the pent-up anger and guilt comes to a head, and Tula is forced to choose between keeping her family’s secret or standing with her friend in his darkest hour. Is she brave enough to choose the right path? Will God sustain her through the dark times?
Movie rating for my book is G--it's Christian.
Here's a link to my book trailer:
(on a budget, so I did the trailer myself)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XhFcV...

I am the youngest in the family and I lived in a small house with all my brothers, my mum and her boyfriend. My brothers are just thugs: never work, sit in front of the telly all day, drink, fight and cause trouble. My mum and her boyfriend are little better.
I used to work in a supermarket (shelf-stacker) and read on the bus when going to and from work. An elderly gent used to say, "hello," whenever he saw me and once asked about my book. I wasn't too complimentary. He said, "A good book teaches you something." That comment put me on a path to learn from my reading. A short time after, I joined Goodreads and since have moved to live with a lady who once taught English and History. Her son, who I think must be on first name terms with just about everyone in the country, found me a job in a garden centre and paid for me to go to Open University; where I'm reading History.
I'm in my first year and so studying like mad.
My life has changed, I am the luckiest girl in the world and all because of a man on a bus.
I'm now reading what I believe is 'good stuff'. My interests are being drawn to thrillers and crime set in Eastern Europe.
I have read that some of the best works are from indie authors but they never get recognised because 'indie books' are largely ignored.
I've recently read Cossack, Ronald Mcqueen: a great thriller that taught me lots and lots (I believe he is an indie author, but I'm not sure).
I've also read two books by an indie author that I think are superb. He is a Goodreads author and he doesn't seem to promote his work. I wrote to him and he tells me he is in Europe helping to provide aid-work and involved in the transport of aid-supplies and other things and has little time to go online. I have asked his permission to talk about his books on your group and await his reply.
I ask, can I provide a review of Cossack? And, can I provide a review of Ben Carlyle's books, if he allows me?


I work in hospitality: a plush establishment, patronised by more gentle, conservative folk. I work. I walk. I read. I work. I walk. I read.
I don't know just yet what I really wanted to read, I'm just picking books from the small library where I work. I hope to find friends and share thoughts on what I do read.
I'm very new to this: I'm all ears or should I say, "All eyes."


James Patrick, I'm known by all as 'Jimp' - my elder brothers started that (short for JimmyP) and so it was carried over to school and then my adult life. My wife-to-be, when we first met, thought it most funny. Jimp, I find from her, [a Norwegian], in the English dictionary means: scant, slender and I am slender [long-distance runner slender]. A sport I love and love much more as it helped break the ice when I met Tordis (Tor): an angel. Tor she told me means Thor. I'm most fascinated by thriller/suspense - fiction/non-fiction and have always taken an interest in books concerning the modern history of Europe and of late more the second war and the years post those dark times. If anyone has recommendations, I would be most grateful. Happy reading to all.

Reccs would be welcome: not from the author!



I know the author. It's a long story.... Several years after I had reviewed his book, I met him. We are now friends. At this time and for the foreseeable future the author is offline and busy transporting household goods within the Black Sea Basin.
My review is at: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...
There are other reviews, far more insightful than mine.
Thank you for your consideration.

I'm a single girl from West England and struggling to make ends meet.
I'm a signed up member of the local library and I'm an ebook fan (it's a cost thing) and have the Kindle app on my laptop.
The library has a book group. I thought of joining, but coffee and a bun costs an arm and a leg: I'll stay home.
Friends and recommendations would be good.
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I have a feature film writing credit, 'Underdog's Tale', an Australian Indie movie which featured a few actors who went onto big things, one of the stars, Ollie Torr starred in a film with Rebel Wilson.
Thanks for this platform. Indie authors unite ... and become the establishment and kick those other buggers to the curb, Stephen King, this does not apply to you ... or George Martin ... or ...