Pens, Paper, Write! discussion

If you want to post something for others to read, but you don't want it to be judged, post a link here

You guys can read this story I started I guess... It takes about one and half weeks to finish a chapter so sorry if you get bored... Btw the start and title was inspired by Torimiester but she stopped the story I was inspired by... :^(

Here's the link:
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...