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message 1: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 04, 2013 11:46PM) (new)

I always loved playing this game with my sisters. So how it works is someone starts the story with sentences and the next person will add on to the story,and the next and so on. You can type as much as you want.

Example:
Person 1: I was laying on my bed when I heard a scream.
Person 2: I leaped off my bed in surprise.
Person 3: There was another scream louder this time.

And so on....
Hope this is a lot of fun


FIRST LINE: I was walking home from school when I noticed a white van...


message 2: by Rachel , The Attentive One (last edited Oct 05, 2013 11:10AM) (new)

Rachel  (APCB Reviews) (gr8rach) | 8842 comments Mod
Being the curious person that I am, I quickened my pace.


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

My heart started beating faster as I got closer.


message 4: by Rachel , The Attentive One (new)

Rachel  (APCB Reviews) (gr8rach) | 8842 comments Mod
I approached the car and saw that no one was in the front seats.


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

I frowned in confusion, and went to the back door of the van.


message 6: by Rachel , The Attentive One (new)

Rachel  (APCB Reviews) (gr8rach) | 8842 comments Mod
I opened the door and gasped in shock at what I saw.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Justin, my brother's friend was tied up in ropes. Two men in front of him were talking, but turned towards me when I opened the door.


message 8: by Rachel , The Attentive One (new)

Rachel  (APCB Reviews) (gr8rach) | 8842 comments Mod
I slowly backed away from the car, turned, and sprinted for my house.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

I could hear their footsteps in pursuit, I got to the front door but my hands kept fumbling with the keys.


message 10: by Riplo ft. Diplo (new)

Riplo ft. Diplo I felt a man grab me from behind, I twisted and kicked him in the groin.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

He fell, but his partner still standing lunged at me.


message 12: by Riplo ft. Diplo (new)

Riplo ft. Diplo My chest heaved as he landed on top of me, I struggled against him.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

The man that I'd kicked had recovered and the two of them together hauled me to my feet.


message 14: by Riplo ft. Diplo (new)

Riplo ft. Diplo They dragged me towards the van, my attempts to struggle were futile.


message 15: by Rachel , The Attentive One (new)

Rachel  (APCB Reviews) (gr8rach) | 8842 comments Mod
They wrestled me into the back of the van.


message 16: by Riplo ft. Diplo (new)

Riplo ft. Diplo Justin struggled against the ropes and yelled at our captors, his voice muffled against the gag.


message 17: by Rachel , The Attentive One (new)

Rachel  (APCB Reviews) (gr8rach) | 8842 comments Mod
I kicked and punched and clawed but it was futile. They bound my arms and legs.


message 18: by Riplo ft. Diplo (new)

Riplo ft. Diplo They exited and slammed the doors behind them, leaving an eery silence


message 19: by readeraz (new)

readeraz (zoethereader) | 474 comments I looked into Justin's eyes. Fear, worry and pain. I screamed but it was only muffled. I tried to scoot over to him and rest my head on his shoulder. "This couldn't be happening," I told myself, "this can't be real."


message 20: by Rachel , The Attentive One (new)

Rachel  (APCB Reviews) (gr8rach) | 8842 comments Mod
What will my parents think? How do we get out of this?


message 21: by readeraz (new)

readeraz (zoethereader) | 474 comments I felt my face wet with tears, and began to sob, when I realized Justin's face was wet too, he was crying. Not as a sign of weakness, but of fear for the both of us.


message 22: by Rachel , The Attentive One (new)

Rachel  (APCB Reviews) (gr8rach) | 8842 comments Mod
I took a deep steadying breath. Calm down.


message 23: by readeraz (new)

readeraz (zoethereader) | 474 comments I had to figure out how to get us both out of here. I am smart, strong, and fierce. "This is not the end," I tell myself, "this is only the beginning."


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

There was a sudden jolt. I realized we were moving.


message 25: by Riplo ft. Diplo (new)

Riplo ft. Diplo I searched the van for a weapon, a tool, anything I could use to escape.


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

InsaneLuckyDucky-DaughterOfHades- wrote: "There was nothing in the van I could use to escape. Fuming mad, I screamed into my gag. I didn't care my brother's friend was sitting right next to me watching me. I was angry. Angry with those kid..."

I looked over at Justin and he was doing something bizarre with his eyes that I couldn't understand. After a minute I saw that he was trying to tell me that something was in his pocket.


message 27: by Riplo ft. Diplo (new)

Riplo ft. Diplo I nod quickly, showing that I understand, and fling myself to his side of the van.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

I land on my side but am able to get upright. I get close enough to him where I can reach inside his pocket. With my hands being tied I awkwardly maneuver my hand into his pocket, and pull out a razor blade.


message 29: by Tina (new)

Tina (tiiiiiiiiiiiiiina) | 140 comments Whilst I fumble to hold the razor blade properly, the car suddenly jerks to the left and the razor slides away.


message 30: by Riplo ft. Diplo (new)

Riplo ft. Diplo I curse under my breath and dive for the razor, careful not to cut my hands


message 31: by Tina (new)

Tina (tiiiiiiiiiiiiiina) | 140 comments Just as my fingers brush the handle, the car jerks to the left again and the razor falls down a thin crack in the floor.


message 32: by Sarah (new)

Sarah | 203 comments My head slumps against the floor of the van with a thud as the hope that had been rapidly growing inside of me vanishes along with that small, silver blade


message 33: by Tina (new)

Tina (tiiiiiiiiiiiiiina) | 140 comments From the corner of my eye, I notice Justin staring at me, no emotion in his eyes or face. All was now silent except for the rumble of the van.


message 34: by Riplo ft. Diplo (new)

Riplo ft. Diplo I know I failed Justin. I took his razor, his hope, and I lost it.


message 35: by Tina (new)

Tina (tiiiiiiiiiiiiiina) | 140 comments Just as I was beginning to wonder where we were, the van jolted to a sudden stop and I rammed my shoulder into Justin's chest; earning myself a low, annoyed grumble from Justin.


message 36: by Sarah (new)

Sarah | 203 comments The engine cut off and we both kept still as we heard car doors opening and boots shuffling on dirt. Low murmers of men talking started and then slowly faded as they headed away from the van.


message 37: by Riplo ft. Diplo (new)

Riplo ft. Diplo Hope surged in my chest, they'd left us alone.


message 38: by Sarah (new)

Sarah | 203 comments But what could we do? We were bound and gagged and had no way of getting looses. I turned to Justin, my desperation showing clearly on my face.


message 39: by Tina (new)

Tina (tiiiiiiiiiiiiiina) | 140 comments He returned the same look of fear and desperation as I raked my brain for any possible ideas. When all of a sudden, I heard a gentle knocking on the window behind me. So quiet, I almost didn't hear it.


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

Bit it was there. I looked at Justin, and his eyes were wide.


message 41: by Sarah (new)

Sarah | 203 comments He slowly got onto his knees and painstakingly crawled over to the tiny window.


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

Using his head, he slammed it into the glass, shattering it. Now it made sense why he was the star football player.


message 43: by readeraz (new)

readeraz (zoethereader) | 474 comments We both gasped. And tried to explain through our gags, but the sound was only muffled. She reached to me first removing my gag. My heart beat racing, I started to tear up. Through my shaky voice I got the message across, " they.....they just took us..." She nodded and hugged me. Warm. A nice feeling was soothing.


message 44: by Tina (new)

Tina (tiiiiiiiiiiiiiina) | 140 comments As she pulled away, you could hear footsteps making their way to the van. The men were coming back except this time. There were 3 more men.


message 45: by readeraz (new)

readeraz (zoethereader) | 474 comments " My name is Alexa," she said while reaching over me to untie Justin, " if you want to survive, come with me, and fast". She finally got his ropes off, and she started sprinting. Justin glared at me, and we both ran off after her.


message 46: by readeraz (new)

readeraz (zoethereader) | 474 comments "I work with the resistance." Alexa looked at me and then to Justin. " Those men that captured you were going to experiment on you, and torture you." I was breathing heavily, and trying to process what was going on. My legs screamed angrily at me to stop running, and take a break. But the adrenaline flowing through my veins thought differently.


message 47: by Rachel , The Attentive One (new)

Rachel  (APCB Reviews) (gr8rach) | 8842 comments Mod
"I just want to go home," I said.


message 48: by readeraz (new)

readeraz (zoethereader) | 474 comments " If I let you leave now, there is nothing stopping them from capturing you again." I looked at Alexa then, her blonde wavy hair bouncing along her shoulders as we sprinted. Justin who had been quite the entire time asked "How do we know we can trust you?"


message 49: by readeraz (new)

readeraz (zoethereader) | 474 comments But of course he followed her. There was something about her, maybe the softness of when she hugged me. or the look of sympathy she gave us when we were terrified, that made a part of me want to trust her, NEED to trust her. Even though I know we shouldn't.

- I just want to take a little moment of time for everyone to think about how amazing this story is so far. LOVE IT! -


message 50: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 06, 2013 02:32PM) (new)

We ran and ran, just when I thought my legs would collapse under me, Alexa stopped and started franticly removing piles of dirt from one spot. Soon enough I could make out the handle of a trap door.


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