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This is a great piece! Please extend it, if possible. I would love to see it published.
Yes, I agree. WHat's your inspiration?
...*What, not WHat...
...*What, not WHat...
Just life haha. I read ton's of books, and listen to alot of out there music. David Foster Wallace has been one of my huge influences lately, James Joyce is who I style my prose after, Modest Mouse, Nirvana and Red Hot Chili Peppers for musical inspiration, Da Vinci and Dali paintings, Kerouac mysticism, Buddhist Philosophy are also huge for me.
You read Oscar Wilde? The Happy Prince is so sad... :'(
I have not yet, although I do plan on it.
Here's a link. Hey, Jin, you can read this too. It's long, but if you're a fast reader it'll only take about fifteen minutes or so....
http://emotionalliteracyeducation.com...
http://emotionalliteracyeducation.com...
Haha, I'm actually writing a poem, maybe here in a bit.
That's pretty cool. Summary, please?
Haha, I'm attempting to create a dream sequence.
It's interesting at best, but it isn't going to make sense to anyone haha
It's very good. At the end, you might want to make an abrupt stop using punctuation, since the rest floats around like a dream(which it is) and you could use:
vapid walls boring bed-sheets
shabby shades, the kaleidoscopic splendor
replaced.
Just a suggestion, though you don't have to use it. It is quite good. You have a vast vocabulary. :)
vapid walls boring bed-sheets
shabby shades, the kaleidoscopic splendor
replaced.
Just a suggestion, though you don't have to use it. It is quite good. You have a vast vocabulary. :)
I can see why... :D how old are you? This is pretty good writing. . . some of the words, I don't even know.!
You going to consider writing as a career?
It is my preferred career at this point.
That's understandable... i'd be surprised if you didn't.
Haha, I'm not getting my hopes up, but that's the field I'm working towards
Do you have plans for writing any books or anything like that?
Right now, I'm just writing short stories and stuff, but I do have a few novel ideas.
Would you mind telling me about them? XD I always get these ideas for a book, but it's hard to keep it going and then taper it down for an ending....it's very difficult. :o
Well one I had was a fictionalized account of Socrates teaching Plato, because to my knowledge, that has never been done. Another was a guy working at a news station, television, and going through the realization that nothing the station presented as news was real because it's all subjected to bias, and that nothing is really true anyway, etc.
That's pretty interesting.
lolz! Whenever I hear someone say Socrates, or Plato, or someone like that, I remember the quote from the Princess Bride:
"Ever heard of Plato? Aristotle? Socrates? ....morons."
That's my favorite movie.
lolz! Whenever I hear someone say Socrates, or Plato, or someone like that, I remember the quote from the Princess Bride:
"Ever heard of Plato? Aristotle? Socrates? ....morons."
That's my favorite movie.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...
...this is for nanowrimo JIN I KNOW YOU'RE BUSY BUT PLEEEEEZ
...this is for nanowrimo JIN I KNOW YOU'RE BUSY BUT PLEEEEEZ
Any opinions at all are welcome.