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message 1: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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You always need a creepy place, that no sane person would go ;)


message 2: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler parked the car a block way from the meeting place.


message 3: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli sighed, she felt bad for leaving Sam all alone, "Sam should be here... Not me..." She looked down at the knife and new Sam was stronger and a better fighter then she was.


message 4: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (last edited Oct 14, 2013 03:17AM) (new)

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Mario stood far off, talking into a walkie-talkie.
Tyler squeezed Olli's hand and offered her a small smile, "Mario would be crazy protective if she was here." Tyler brushed back some of Olli's hair, "Like I am right now."
Before Olli could respond, Mario came back to them. His face serious. "When its time, you 2 go in to get Tom. I have Rebels in rooftops, who reported Tom is being held inside. We'll make a distraction, while you 2 slip Tom out through the tunnels." Mario laid a map of the tunnels on the hood of the car for everyone to see, "Most of the tunnels are controlled by the mayor, so Olli stay close to Tyler, he knows the tunnels one wrong turn and you could in up in enemy territory."


message 5: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli nodded and looked over the map, studying it.
"What about me?" Hank asked as he walked in, freshly showered.


message 6: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (last edited Oct 14, 2013 03:32PM) (new)

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Mario wondered if Hank being here was a risk, "Trail them, be close but not enough to get caught." He looked at his watch, "I'll met you all in the tunnels." Then headed off.


message 7: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Hank nodded.
Olli hugged Tyler's arm nervously, "do you think we can do this?" She whispered.


message 8: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler kissed her forehead, "Where about to see love."


message 9: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli frowned, she didn't like the answer. She wished she had stayed home with Cindy and Bean.
"Help!" A faint male voice called.
Olli jumped, "th-that was Tom..,"


message 10: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler squeezed her hand, "Let's go."


message 11: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli nodded and fallowed Tyler, she could hear Hank's pleads getting loader and her stomach turned at the memory of him in her two visions and the picture.


message 12: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler held Olli tight as they headed inside. Mario said they had back up, and Tyler really hoped so. They stopped and saw Tom tied to a chair with Men guarding him.


message 13: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli looked around at the men, "what are we going to do?" She whispered softly and hoped the men wouldn't hear them.


message 14: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Before Tyler could say anything a loud boom came from outside, the distraction. Most of the men ran outside. Gunshots ranged outside.


message 15: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli jumped. She saw Hank run into the room that had hank in it, "what is he..." She watched as he got the attention of the two men and the one chased after him.


message 16: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler went after the reaming man and quickly disarmed him. He jerked his head at Tom for Olli to help.


message 17: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli knelt in front of Tom and untied the ropes.
"Olli? Your okay?" Tom whispered in amazement.
She smiled, "yes, and happy too."
He smiled weakly and hugged her when Olli got the roped undone. He pulled away and stood up grunting.
Olli shot up and looked around, "should we go?" She asked nervously.


message 18: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler came back to Olli and Tom, "Come on, we don't know when they'll be back."


message 19: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli nodded and stuck close to Tyler.
Hank ran back and tried to catch his breath, "we have to go."


message 20: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler agreed, not liking how he was with 2 men who had slept with Olli. Both Olli probably still had feelings for. He led the ground to an entrance to a tunnel, like the one he used to help Olli escape from the breeding faculty. He went down first and helped Olli down.


message 21: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli held onto Tyler as he help her.
Tom and Hank fallowed Tyler from a bit further back, being sure to give the couple their space.
Hank looked around, "where is Mario meeting us?))


message 22: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler bit his lip, Mario was supposed to be here already. He shook his head to shake away the thoughts, "He's probably got held up." He looked back at Tom and Hank, "We have to get Olli out of here."


message 23: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Tom nodded and started walking again.
Hank hugged Olli from behind, "Tyler, she's a strong girl; she can handle it," his voice was sweet.
Tom arched an eyebrow at Hank. He walked over and grabbed Hank by the ear, causing him to let go of Olli and wimped in pain, "don't touch what isn't yours," he dragged Hank along with him.
Olli giggled softly and took Tyler's arm again.


message 24: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler smiled softly, he thought maybe Tom wasn't so bad. Hank still needed work. As they continued walking, they spotted Mario leaning against a wall. He hand at his stomach and eyes closed.
Mario opened his eyes to see them, "What took you so long?"


message 25: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli ran up to him, "are you okay!?" Sam would kill her if anything bad happened to Mario.


message 26: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Mario gave Olli a small smile, "Nothing I can't handle." Even though he wasn't sure, he had taken a bullet to the stomach, but he was still breathing so he must be fine.
Noise came from down the tunnels, "We need to move."


message 27: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli nodded and took Tyler's hand; she wasn't going to lose him.


message 28: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler squeezed her hand and they took off with everyone on their tails.


message 29: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli heard gun shots and she held back her tears, she hoped nothing bad would happen.
Tom grunted as a bullet ripped threw his arm, but he didn't stop.


message 30: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Mario, already in pain, fell when a bullet pierced his shoulder.


message 31: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli glanced behind her and saw Mario fall, "no!" She stopped and looked back at him.
Tom helped Mario up and Hank held onto Olli, stopping her from helping Mario.


message 32: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler went back to help Tom with Mario. The footsteps getting closer. He looked at Tom, "I've got him, get Olli out of here."


message 33: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Tom nodded and checked Mario's pulse, "he's still alive, but we have to move fast." He let go of Mario so Tyler could carry him.
Olli felt a sharp pain in her back and tears filled her eyes, she already new what it was. Hank let go of her and Tom caught her before she fell, "Olli, don't look," he whispered.
Olli nodded and closed her eyes as he picked her up and ran around Hank's cut in half body.


message 34: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler tried to get Mario to go but he stopped him. "Tyler I can't.."
Tyler frowned, "No, I not leaving you here."
Mario shook his head, "I'll just slow you down."
"Better than death." Tyler said, "What about your family?"
Mario moved his bloody hand from his wound a groaned in pain, "I'll distract them lead them away." He looked into his friend's eyes, "Go."
As much as Tyler hated to admit it Mario was right. He was barely holding back his pain. "Don't you dare die." Tyler warned Mario, "Sam will kill me."
Mario gave Tyler a small smile, "Tell her I love her."
Tyler nodded and he rushed back up with Tom and Olli. Trying to forget about Hank's body.

Mario watched Tyler run away, and gritting his teeth to stop from screaming in pain ran in the opposite direction. The police fallowed him, instead of the others.


message 35: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli could feel the blood running down her back, "it hurts," she whimpered.
Tom nodded, "I know Olli, try to stay away though, alright?"
Olli nodded and noticed Tyler, her eyes widened, "w-where's Mario?"


message 36: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler was silent as he led them through the tunnels.

Mario came to a stop as he ran into a corridor filled with armed men. The noise behind him told him, he was trapped. Clapping filled the room as the mayor step up to Mario, "Well played Mario." Soldiers rushed up and tied his hands behind him. "But not good enough.
"If I had known this would happen I would have brought presents." Mario panted, as they took away weapons. "Olli's gone, far from your reach."
The mayor walked up to Mario, "For now, but I have someone of equal importance." He ruffly lifted Mario's face, "With your death, begins the end of your pathetic rebellion."
Mario spat blood into his face, causing one of the guards to hit him over the head with a gun. He groaned in pain.
The Mayor wiped his face, "Get him in the van and call the press. Its time for an announcement."


message 37: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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"We have to get him," Olli moaned in pain and slowly started to feel faint.


message 38: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler looked at Olli worried, "Are you hurt?"


message 39: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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She but her lip at the pain, "Mario can't die!" Tears filled her eyes, "Sam needs him, Tyler!"


message 40: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler ground his teeth, angry at himself, he should have forced Mario to come, "Olli we have to get you out of here, now."


message 41: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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"But..." Tears ran down Olli's face.
Tom sighed, "Olli, please. Listen to him, he won't die, okay?"
Olli sniffled and nodded, "promise?"
Tom was silent for a moment, "your hurt, you need medical attention."


message 42: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler led them to an exit, he helped Olli out of the tunnels.


message 43: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli saw the car and forced herself to run to it.
Pain filled Tom's body when he saw the gash across her back. He walked over and helped her into the car. He looked at Tyler, "where's the closest hospital?"


message 44: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler's heart jumped seeing Olli's back, "Not far."


message 45: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Tom nodded, "do you want to drive? Or me?" He thought Tyler might want to be with Tyler.


message 46: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler tossed Tom the keys and got in the back with Olli.


message 47: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Tom nodded and got into the front seat and drove to the hospital.


message 48: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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"Are you okay?" Tyler asked worried.


message 49: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

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Olli nodded, "I'm fine..." She started crying, "what are we going to tell Sam?"


message 50: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

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Tyler kissed Olli's hand, "I don't know,love."


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