READ 96 Group 2 am discussion

Luis Rodriguez
Journal Submission # 3
Death Note Another Note : The Los Angeles BB Murder Case
Chapters 4-7, pages 101-176
Melissa, Joseph, and Nicole
Friday, October 25, 2013, 12:32am
Murder Mystery. My book Death Note: Another Note The Los Angeles BB Murder Cases by Nisioisin is about a man the name of Beyond Birthday and pretty much how he murders certain individuals to send a message to “L” who he happened to AFICIONADO. “L” happens to be the greatest detective of the century according to the book there are three main detectives in the century “L” being number one, Eraldo Coil being number two, and Erarudo Koiru being number three in which all three of these detectives are “L”’s aliases. The story goes on with Beyond Birthday murdering three people and how due to controversy to “L” it happens to be very dangerous for him to be walking out in public so he emails an FBI agent by the name of Naomi Misora. Naomi and “L” get acquainted through email followed by instructions that ultimately lead her to having a spot on the case with “L” who is currently only talking over computers and cell phones. “L” instructs Naomi to go visit the first crime scene and to check out for hidden clues or left messages but ends up finding someone by the name of “Rue Ryuzaku” in other words “L”. They reach an ACCORD and come to the conclusion that the killer did leave a message and it was the address to the second victims home. Once reaching the second home Naomi gets attacked by some guy who almost kills her but she manages to fight for her life and ended up throwing in a few good punches making the perpetrator take off running. After the encounter with what is believed to be Beyond Birthday, she continues to walk to the second crime scene and ends up seeing Ryuzaki standing outside waiting for Naomi to show up. Ryuzaki and Naomi quickly went into the place and started investigating to cut time short Ryuzaki pulls out a file from the third crime scene and it has photos because apparently the body was chopped and placed in different places all over the persons house. They notice a connection on how and where the body parts were positioned and some of the photos taken and the third crime scene leading ultimately to a massive complex which would hold Beyond Birthdays fourth murder. Blues-harp Babysplit happens to be the fourth victim or so I thought until Naomi notices that her and Ryuzaki have split to go look for B.B. Seeing that Ryuzaki was somewhat VENERABLE Naomi runs into the room she was assigned to go but finds nothing wrong , “L” then gave Naomi a call and informed her that this Ryuzaki guy was actually Beyond Birthday afterwards she hears an explosion and runs to go see if Ryuzaki was fine but instead it happened to be Ryuzaki’s room that was rigged and as he was burning Naomi put him out. After the fire was put out she quickly checked his pulse on his arm, as his pulse happened to be weak and she estimated that he wouldn’t live before the ambulance and fire department came she cuffed his hands behind his back and read him his Miranda Rights.

Create a source sentence. Otherwise, good job here.

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