READ 96 Group 1 pm discussion

Sylvia Plata
Prof. Hughes
Reading 96
25 October 2013
Journal 3: Summary
In A Beautiful Mess by T.K Leigh Olivia and Alexander have fallen in love but it’s not the first time. Alexander and Olivia had grown up together but on Alexander’s ninth birthday a CATASTROPHE occurred. In the mean time of his birthday little Olivia was only six years old when her and her family had gotten into a bad car accident. First, her family called Alexander’s Dad frightened somebody was after them. Next, they immediately tried to leave the city. Then a black SUV had rammed them from behind knocking them out of the freeway. Soon her parents died from the impact of the crash and so did Olivia. So that’s what Alexander believed. That is to say the CAPRICIOUS moment was once Alexander had discovered she had been alive this whole time. He could have found out five years before but he was too afraid of the letter his father had left behind once he had died. Twenty-one years later after the accident, after all the suffering he had been through, he now discovered… she had survived! On account of his father had lied to him and covered up multiple secrets in order to keep Olivia safe. Alexander’s suspicion of his father’s death began to lead towards him protecting Olivia. The family business was a private protection program. In the meantime Olivia and Alexander had moved past their attachment issues from their childhood trauma. Although Olivia isn’t aware of the truth of her parents’ death or of her past years with Alexander she continues to sense a feeling that she knows him from somewhere. So far Olivia doesn’t remember a thing before the accident or even that she grew up with Alexander. However she has these CHAOTIC dreams of the accident but doesn’t realize they did occur once. Alexander and she are too busy falling in love with one another. They spend almost every moment together. Only Alexander realizing there’s people after her wanting her dead. It’s still a mystery not even Alexander knows but pieces are falling into place. Alexander has discovered that before the death of her parents money was transferred into multiple accounts. In other words he needs to be CANDID by tell Olivia the truth before it’s too late but he’s afraid of her reaction. As a result will she run from all her issues or will she face them with Alexander.

Your source sentence is a bit confusing. Consider revision. Good use of vocab.