Delia Colvin Fans & Book Lovers Club discussion

I'm trying to find a post here where they said that they would love to beta read anything others are writing. I don't remember who said it but can you let me know? I have some pages and I was going to post it on fiction press for opinions but I don't know if I still have many grammatical errors or anything that need to be fixed/changed/omitted. Thank you :)

if you guys are interested i posted chapter one. please give me you honest opinion.

http://www.fictionpress.com/u/804107/...