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Oh I thought I put an appearance...I will fix it when I get off app.
Shalom. Let's get things moving, yeah?
Madison? Are you planning on working on her any more?
Oh yes, sorry. I just haven't been able to gain access to a computer to edit it. I will the next chance I get!
"...Teagan always has her face buried in a book, as well as her personality."|||||I'm confused. She always has her personality buried in a book?
One more thing. Why is her surname different from the rest of her family's?
Yeah, like she hides behind her books...
And because her family gave her her grandmother's name in memory of her.
And because her family gave her her grandmother's name in memory of her.
Well, about the personality part, it's a bit awkward, if you know what I mean. I would suggest altering it a bit?
Is there anything else I need to change, besides.my appearances?
I will look over it as well, but I need to go eat some food first. Sorry. :/
A few notes.Position:
• "N/A (For now)" | This should be at least 'Student', but if you want her to be a Prefect, you will need to apply, but check for availability first in the Members of Hogwarts topic.
I didn't mean to post that yet. I will add to it and let you know once I've updated it.
"This is a thin wand; it is rich in color, showing off white hues with a few small streaks of brown."||||| It sounds a bit odd when you start with "this". I would suggest "Teagan's wand is thin and rich in color, showing off white hues with a few small streaks of brown."
Yes, I think that sounds better too
and I am so sorry I can't edit it right now...I don't have a computer, and I cam't do it on my phone!
It's okay! Take your time.
(Gentle reminder, dear.)
Name: Teagan Anay Rose
Gender: Female
Blood: Half-blood
Age: 17
» Birthday: October 21
House: Ravenclaw
» Year: 7
» Quidditch: N/A
» Position: N/A (For now)
Wand:
» Wood: Beech
» Core: Augurey feather
» Length: 13 inches
» Flexibility: Slightly Springy
» Description: This is a thin wand; it is rich in color, showing off white hues with a few small streaks of brown. The base is decorated in a simple vine-like design that wraps part way up to wand, indicating the handle. This wand chose Teagan because she is intelligent beyond years, and open minded. She is often misunderstood and is a lone wolf, though not by choice. Her true personality hides behind her intelligence. This wand was perfect for her. She found it on her third try.
Appearance:
Description: Teagan has medium toned brunette hair that matches her deep amber eyes. She is average female weight, and stands at 5'8". She is quite strong, despite her weak appearance. Everyone has to agree that she has a beautiful smile that lights up her whole face. Her hands are very delicate and long, which is a good match for her wand. Teagan always has her face buried in a book, as well as her personality.
Background: Teagan doesn't have much of a history. She grew up in a meadow that was surrounded by a forest, pretty much in the middle of nowhere. She lived in a pretty, two-story, light blue house with her parents and grandfather. She started going to Hogwarts when she was about eleven. While in her second year attending, her grandfather passed away, and she has never gone home since, not wanting to have old memories brought forward. Teagan has never had any friends, she has always been an outcast. She has always been misunderstood, and no one has ever tried getting close to her.
Relations:
» Damian Haeld - Father; Pure Blood; Alive; Former Gryffindor
» Analai Haeld - Mother; Muggle-Born; Alive
» Carson Paera - Grandfather (On mother's side); Muggle-Born; Deceased
Pet: Owl
» Name: Tyul
» Gender: Male
» Age: Seven; she has had him since she began to attend Hogwarts.
» Appearance:
» Description: Teagan picked Tyul not because of his striking beauty- even though he was by far the most beautiful animal there- but because of his personality. Tyul was the most quiet animal at the pet shop; he didn't make the tiniest sound and didn't move a muscle, except his eyes that followed her around. He was a peculiar thing and Teagan took an instant liking to him, and him to her.
Other: Teagan has a different last name as her parents; her last name was taken from her late grandmother (Whom she had never met.)