Young Adult Historical Fiction discussion

I am writing a book about the possible murder of Amy Robsart, a noblewoman in Elizabeth 1st's time. Have a read for free and any feedback would be welcome,

http://www.wattpad.com/story/9806212-...

Thanks

Evelyn

Yes, keep on, this is good! Like you said, grammar could use help a little, but it is an excellent plot worth pursuing! :)

Hi Tara,

thanks for the encouragement and I will keep trying to improve the grammar, I'm reediting as I go along so I think it's getting better. Ultimately a proof reader will be needed! I'm going to keep trying to post on a Friday, this is my first attempt at Historical Fiction and it's much harder than Fiction with all the research needed, but interesting too,

Thanks

Evelyn

I agree that writing historical is much harder than writing realistic!!! Research... It can be so difficult...