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message 1: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)


message 2: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe I like it!


message 3: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe It's really good. Have you written anything yet?


message 4: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
wow twiligt its really good! why didnt u tell me you had written something new? *throws an accusatory look* haha jk


message 6: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
hey i tried opening it but i cant find it


message 7: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Argh! It doesn't work.


message 8: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
see?


message 9: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe ...


message 10: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe erm, on her profile, there's no writing. she must've deleted it...


message 11: by Moody (last edited Jun 27, 2009 06:41AM) (new)

Moody Claire (singurl) | 7 comments My newest story in place of Renesmee's finished one. It's title is wall of destiny wherein a girl tries to find out who her real soulmate is- the one the wall of destiny shows her or the one she obviously truly loves even if it's forbidden.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Renesmee's story (love story of twilight character's daughter with Jacob and her own dangers). You can read in...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

Playing Pretend Book 1 (My boyfriend is hers) is a about teen love and friendship in highschool...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

it's actually finished.

Book2 is in the making. Same characters from book 1 and new ones, too in college while they're trying to balance Love, Friendship, school, sorority/fraternity and eveything about college life.The site is...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


*I'm a bit busy reading now for the challenges this season so if you find my currently written stories being boring, tell me so I could revise them for you.

^^


message 12: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe SiNgUrl, those are really good! You've done really good at writing these! So much accomplished!


message 13: by Brandon (new)

Brandon Let me put an excerpt i made up on the spot.


message 14: by Brandon (last edited Jul 07, 2009 09:47PM) (new)

Brandon Sam was lying on the bed. Doctors rushing in and out.
Katie was outside, trying her hardest to be patient.
Vitals stabilize, and a doctor came to meet Katie. "You can see him now." The doctor tried his best to smile, but it was a weak one. Katie ran to Sam's room and rushed by his side.
"Oh my, are you okay?" Tears touching the edge of her eyes.
Sam let go a chuckle, "Yes, the doctors said I'll be fine." He couldn't believe he just lied to her. The doctors told him the complete opposite. Sam reached and grabbed her hand with a weak, pathetic, attempt. "I want you to know something," A pause.
"What, Sam, what do you want me to know?!"
Sam took a deep labored breath. "I... I love you, and cannot lie to you. The doctor says I will die. Soon."
Tears streaked Katie's cheeks. "No Sam! I love you too! I need you Sam!"
Sam smiled and chuckled again. "Heh, You'll e fine Kat. I know that. And that's all i need to know."
Katie smiled and cried. She leaned in and kissed him. The deepest kiss Sam ever felt. Katie pulled away and put her face in her hands. Sam face turned grim. Sam grabbed her hand and she looked up. "I love you Katie." And took his last breath. Telling the one he absolutely truly loved, that he cared the most for her.


At the funeral the pastor stood and gave a few words. "Sam was a good, honest, passionate, fun loving boy, and had no reason for his time to come. God chose that he needed Sam in haven more than he needed him on earth." He turned to the second casket. "He also chose Katie. We all know that Sam was deeply in love with Katie, and Katie was deeply in love with Sam. He couldn't leave one without the other. In this example of perfect love, we should all give thanks that they are together, and rejoice that they now dwell in the promise land. Living perfectly, together."


message 15: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe That's really good. Did Katie die too though? I got kinda confused when I saw that it said also chose Katie.

*sighs*

Just all of a sudden I was reminded that I need to start my pigeon inspiration thing...

Anyway, good job!


message 16: by ♥Jenny♥ (new)

♥Jenny♥ | 43 comments Yep! loved it!


message 17: by Brandon (new)

Brandon haha, thanks.
And yeah they both died. I wrote that in like a minute.


message 18: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe I don't write that fast. I'll write, and then have to do research. And then write again. Well, at least Sam and Katie ended up together.

Wait, is it Sam? *goes to look*

Yep.


message 19: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
lol


message 20: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe What's up Rocio? How's your story with Michael the stalker going?


message 21: by Moody (new)

Moody Claire (singurl) | 7 comments I've written an excerpt or at least the first one and a half pages of the story I'm writing offline which has a working title of "The Lost Vampire Empress" but it's not that catchy so I'm still owrking on finding a more suitable title.

Please check it out and tell me what you think.

Here's the link...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...




message 22: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
twilight67 wrote: "yeah did you finish it yet"

no im still writing it
i can post a link though: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
i think ill write everyday a chapter


message 23: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Coolz!


message 24: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe Lolz. Yep!


message 25: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
mez back!!


message 26: by korrinamoe (new)

korrinamoe YAY! ROCIO'S BACK!!


message 27: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
haha


message 28: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
hi


message 29: by Maggie (new)

Maggie (maggierocks) | 95 comments wow i see theres a lot of people who like to write!


message 30: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
i updated my story ppls!


message 31: by Moody (new)

Moody Claire (singurl) | 7 comments True soulmate has just been updated and check out my one shot stories.


message 32: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
yay! haha


message 34: by DemonKitty003 (new)

DemonKitty003 (vampireprincess) | 97 comments i got ch 10 up and is working on ch 11 right now^^



message 35: by Maggie (new)

Maggie (maggierocks) | 95 comments Rocio wats ur story called again?


message 36: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
the revenge


message 37: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)


message 38: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
haha thanks


message 39: by Maggie (new)

Maggie (maggierocks) | 95 comments lol nice


message 40: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
awww.


message 41: by Maggie (new)

Maggie (maggierocks) | 95 comments thats so sad *tear*


message 42: by ~House~M.D~ (new)

~House~M.D~ | 2 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...

House M.D fanfic, with the House/Cuddy pairing... I just hope someone does watch this show here.. xD


message 43: by oıɔoɹ/rocio♥, cRaZy LitTlE pIrAtE mOd! comment or u shall be deleted! (new)

oıɔoɹ/rocio♥ (lalis26) | 1431 comments Mod
haha


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