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message 1: by Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind (new)

Vampire Dark the fiend | 33 comments Mod
My Rules
1) No fighting over things please!
2) Have fun
3) if you join you actually help out once in a while

SEEE simple!!!

Any Questions


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

okay


message 3: by Bianca (new)

Bianca (otakuninja) i dont totally get this group...


message 4: by Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind (new)

Vampire Dark the fiend | 33 comments Mod
i'm making and publishing a book and i want you guys to give me some advise


message 5: by Bianca (new)

Bianca (otakuninja) cool! is the starting on another topic? i think i read it


message 6: by Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind (new)

Vampire Dark the fiend | 33 comments Mod
i'll start it soon hold on a sec...


message 7: by Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind (new)

Vampire Dark the fiend | 33 comments Mod
Prologue rough draft i've got some of the story i've thought up for the prologue.


message 8: by Bianca (new)

Bianca (otakuninja) ok


message 9: by Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind (new)

Vampire Dark the fiend | 33 comments Mod
i don't know though give me ur advise


message 10: by Bianca (new)

Bianca (otakuninja) ok i love it so far, but my advice is to use commas and punctuation like that. It seemed like the sentences were run-ons and i saw some good places where you could put a comma.

my advice, but i really want to know what will happen! :)


message 11: by Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind (new)

Vampire Dark the fiend | 33 comments Mod
kk 6_6


message 12: by Bianca (new)

Bianca (otakuninja) yay?



message 13: by Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind (new)

Vampire Dark the fiend | 33 comments Mod
i'll start rough drafting c1 when i get back g2g


message 14: by Vampire Dark the fiend, is bored out of my mind (new)

Vampire Dark the fiend | 33 comments Mod
hmm


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