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message 1: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
A place to get a quick bite to eat, or to get a part time job.


message 2: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
Dawn stared out the window, as they pulled up. She wondered if her daddy was going to replace Melly with Marina, but would she leave just like Melly too?


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Marina got out and opened the door to get Dawn out


message 4: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
Dawn got out and stayed close to Marina.


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Marina smiled and took dawn's hand, she walked to the door with them


message 6: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
Dawn squeezed Marina's hand, "We get pizza?"


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Marina nodded "yeah!" She smiled at her


message 8: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
Dawn smiled, "You like daddy?"


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Marina smiled at dawn "what do you mean?"


message 10: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
"Pepperoni." she said


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Marina smiled and blushed slightly


message 12: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((Not even Dawn misses Melly? *cries in corner*))


message 13: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((True. I was kinda thinking of killing Melly; from illness. That's another reason I wanted Mack and Melly to have a baby; cuz then Grant and Mack each have something/someone to remember her bye))


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

((lol I agree, no baby!!))


message 15: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((Lol I'm gonna kill her eventually :p she kinda bugs me.. I hate characters in stories that cheat and stuff.. Duno why I made her do it XD and awwwwwwww why noooooooot? It would be the cutest little boy ever!))


message 16: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((Awww *cries more* can Mack at least let Dawn and Abby have play dates?))


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

((lol that would be weird with Grant and Mack seeing each other. And wouldn't it be even weirder if Patrick and dawn grow up and are friends or they are together!))


message 18: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((Lol that would be funny! XD MELLY's DEATH WILL NOT BE IN VAIN!))


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

((lol none taken, Grant hates Macks guts too :) lol ))


message 20: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((She must die! >:3 and aww :( but I want Abby to hang out with Dawn :( ))


message 21: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((I guess v.v and lol mad with power? I haven't killed a character in sooo long. Why can't I kill Mel-Mel? She's already suffering))
((Oh! And when Mack and Melly meet at the bar later on, I was gonna have her ask him to just be friends; that okie?))


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

((lol Grant would hate that so much!))


message 23: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((For them to stay friends? Or if she died?))


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

((both!)


message 25: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((Ahhh))


message 26: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((Duno.. I'm going to make her almost die at least))


message 27: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((Yay!))


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

((okay, that's fine, but her dad is dying already! You can't kill her!))


message 29: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
(Hehehe I could >:3))


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

((lol if you kill her temp and I will kill you (jk) ))


message 31: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((Lol okie :p))


message 32: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((Lol XD))


message 33: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
((yes she volunteers as tribute XD))


message 34: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((lol XD))


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

((lol! Kris your turn to post))


message 36: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (last edited Dec 03, 2013 04:48PM) (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
((okie but I'm with Liz on this :p like it would be so adorable if Dawn and Patrick became friends))

Dawn looked up at Marina and wondered if she was supposed to be the new Melly, "Do you draw like daddy?"


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

Marina shrugged "I draw a little bit" she smiled


message 38: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
Dawn smiled, "We draw when we get back home?" she asked because Mack would probably have to work.


message 39: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
((like I'm no to Melly dieing but it'll be funny to me to see Grant and Mack fight over her))


message 40: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((they could meet at preschool? Mack wouldn't have to know :P nether would Grant :p))


message 41: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
((but he wouldn't know!))


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

Marina smiled and nodded "we can draw when we get back"


message 43: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
Dawn smiled, "Yay!"


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

Marina nodded "yeah" she smiled at Mack

((I DO NOT like that idea!!!!(


message 45: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
((which one? There were a lot lol))


message 46: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 131006 comments Mod
((why not? there just kids :p they have nothing to do with Melly))


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

((okay, I don't care!)


message 48: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (last edited Dec 03, 2013 05:18PM) (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
((dont punish the kids :'( ))


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

Marina smiled and nodded "yeah"


message 50: by Khrisma, ~Gone with the Wind~ (last edited Dec 03, 2013 05:35PM) (new)

Khrisma M. (kristatic) | 80433 comments Mod
Dawn ate her slice of pizza, when the waitress brought their food, watching Mack and Marina.


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