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message 1: by ♕ ❤ ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (last edited Dec 11, 2013 09:01AM) (new)

 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) | 36 comments https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...
WHERE'S MY DOLLY?
The innocence of a child who believed her dolly was dead.

Poor Melanie,where did her new dolly go?Click to see what happened


message 2: by ♕ ❤ ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (last edited Dec 11, 2013 09:06AM) (new)

 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) | 36 comments https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/.... IT WAS AN ACCIDENT..HONEST!

A story of domestic violence and revenge.Poor Trudy and her desperation.
This story came 2nd in my first story comp.
The theme was "I accidentally killed my best friend/pet etc.
I wrote this to show the desperation of an abused person.It was an accident though,wasn't it?
Click to read.


message 3: by ♕ ❤ ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (last edited Dec 11, 2013 09:10AM) (new)

 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) | 36 comments https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/.... BROKEN FAMILY.Joan and Ray were the happiest people alive,had a beautiful daughter,no money worries,house,car,everything,until Ray was made redundant and the tragic events that followed.A story set in the 1980's of how redundancy can affect and change a once happy,loving family,leading to
prostitution,drugs,alcoholism and internet stalking,including the emotional story of Joan and Rays child being taken to a safe haven.


stats Published on 2013-10-28

This is my first attempt at writing a novelette.I have the makings of 9 chapters but still have research to do to add in stuff I have missed.I.e,foster parents,the process of having your child taken away from you.
Here is a sample.
Click to read.


message 4: by Ingrid, Just another writer. (new)

Ingrid | 935 comments Mod
I was intrigued by your stories. My critique and feedback are in the links:)


 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) | 36 comments Thanks Ingrid.I read your feedback and I really appreciate it.
It meant a lot to me.:)


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