Bookaholics To The Hundredths Power discussion

You can make a topic for your writing with a link to it

It's not a serious, literary piece, but a rather tongue in cheek fun read--it's FREE this weekend Feb 15-17: So You Married a Lacrosse Player: A Wife's Survival Guide

http://www.amazon.com/So-You-Married-...

Here is a link to my story. It's a truth or dare crossover between Harry Potter, The Hunger Games, Percy Jackson, and later on, the Kane Chronicles.

Here is the original link, on wattpad:
http://www.wattpad.com/23683049-truth...

And here is the latest link, on goodreads:

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

Please tell me what you think?!?!?!?!

https://www.goodreads.com/story/list/...

and

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2...

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

It's not a very creative title or anything, I just wanted some feedback on my writing.

Striking Like That-
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

I'd appreciate some feedback! And if you have stories too, I'll read & give feedback on them :)