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Well I just finished reading this book and yes it was a contemporary romance novel but low and b..."
I read a romance book by 'she who will not be named' (so incensed I can't actually form her name in my brain!) not so long ago where the 'H' took 600 pages to actually fight his way to be with his 'h'.
There were several battles to the death, raging wolves, tyrannic parents, kidnapping, jealous rivals, epic war, a spell in a dungeon, and any number of other things going on but when he actually gets to live a HEA, she goes off with some guy in a short battle frock(apparently he had a great pair of pins!) and has the 'H' s baby and he (the H) doesn't mind and goes off and marries some random French woman who runs a bakery!!!
600 pages!!!! And all the rubbish happened in the last 10...I nearly threw my beloved kindle across the lounge!



That's an excellent point Teshelle and I too have read some books that actually make me sit back and breathe deeply when that happens. Those are the exceptional ones that we all hope to discover.
The ones I detest are when you actually feel cheated by the writer. The book I was referring to above just looked as though the writer had lost her way and she wrote the quickest way out of all the hero's and heroine's difficulties that she could think of. I think she was out of ideas and desperate to finish the book. It was very disappointing after all the time invested.


Bwahahahaha! Almost worth reading for the laugh!


I would agree with you most of the time, but there are occations when for a very good reason there is a choice to the type of ending you perceive. This is not a hollow ending it just that you chose the conclusion depending on your outlook.

Now, about writing cliffhangers. What makes a cliffhanger a cliffhanger? The emotion that is evoked in the reader. What's going to happen next? Cliffhangers are not necessarily scenes of a person hanging from a cliff (for example) they are chapter endings in which something happens that causes the reader to look up at the clock, note that it is midnight, and say, "Just a few more pages."
Here it comes, she thought, trying to keep tears from leaking. He's going to break up with me.
He took a deep breath, took her trembling hand in his shaking fingers and asked, "Will you marry me?"
End of chapter
If the reader ABSOLUTELY must find out what happens next then that was a successful cliffhanger.

I've been conned before into buying several 'episodes' of one book so I just deleted the blasted book from my kindle.


Girl with the Dragon Tattoo became even more fascinating to me when I realized the book was one big comeon for the real story in the next two books.

As for romance, it's practically the definition - a love story with an HEA. Otherwise label it Women's Fiction.
Well I just finished reading this book and yes it was a contemporary romance novel but low and behold ..It didn't all end happy! I have to say I thought what is going on . Being fairly new to genre after about 20 odd books you get the general gist of the stories Hell that swhy we read them Everything always works out as it suppose to Girl get Boy get married or plan to win the day etc. Well don't get me wrong 90% all followed the rules but this "maverick" writer bent one them I nearly passed out with surprise