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message 1: by Cat , The Fabulous Kitty MOD <3 (last edited Jan 08, 2014 04:20PM) (new)

Cat  (cat335) | 1051 comments Mod
We shall be having our first writing contest!! Woo!!! *throws confetti* :D

So the rules are simple:

1. Deadline January 15th
2. It's freestyle, so you can write about whatever you want
3. There will be a poll at the end for each of the participants
4. The winner gets to...pick the BOTM (book of the month) for the next month!!! :D
5. And don't vote for yourself. It wont count


message 2: by Cat , The Fabulous Kitty MOD <3 (new)

Cat  (cat335) | 1051 comments Mod
If you have any questions feel free to ask!


message 3: by MiMi (new)

MiMi (planetearthturnsslowly) Also there is only one entry per person


message 4: by Cat , The Fabulous Kitty MOD <3 (new)

Cat  (cat335) | 1051 comments Mod
Well ill be the first to post I guess. This is just something I wrote in 5 minutes of boredom XDD Its not that good, but whatever XD

Rain

The sky is marred by storm clouds
The sun concealed
The droplets hit the ground so loud
The water a florescent teal

I hear a thundering boom from the sky
The dark storm brings out the pain of my heart
The bright light reflects off my eyes
The clouds mix into an indistinct image of art

The somber day
Brings out the tortured depths of my soul
But soon light shines through with dainty rays
And the sky is no longer a dark coal


message 5: by MiMi (new)

MiMi (planetearthturnsslowly) Here is mine. It is called:

A Ridiculous Pointless Poem

There are many types of people in the world
Some will make you want to hurl
Some will make you want to cry
And make your tear ducts run bone dry
But in the end you still have friends
That you love and care for till the end


message 6: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) I can't write poems :(


message 7: by MiMi (new)

MiMi (planetearthturnsslowly) Sure You can! You just gotta believeeeeeeeeeee! XD


message 8: by MiMi (new)

MiMi (planetearthturnsslowly) Cat says its ok but you just gotta BELIEVEEEEEEEEEEEEE


message 9: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) XDD I've tried before and it ended very very badly


message 10: by MiMi (new)

MiMi (planetearthturnsslowly) Did you believe hard enough? XD


message 11: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) Yes, I believe I did xD


message 12: by MiMi (new)

MiMi (planetearthturnsslowly) Well all you need is Faith. Trust. and of course PIXIE DUST!!!

Cat says you are still a good writer


message 13: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) TINKERBELL!!!

Have you read my book Mimi?


message 14: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) Where is Aisha btw?


message 15: by MiMi (new)

MiMi (planetearthturnsslowly) I have not yet... but I plan to. And Cat's phone is broken so she is telling me what to type. I am talking to her. I am not just pretending to be her.


message 16: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) I kinda figured XD How'd her phone break? AND YOU MUST READ ITTTT!! I finished 3 chapters in 3 days which is kina epic for me xDD


message 17: by MiMi (new)

MiMi (planetearthturnsslowly) it broke because iphones are that way.


message 18: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) Ah. I see XD


message 19: by Cat , The Fabulous Kitty MOD <3 (new)

Cat  (cat335) | 1051 comments Mod
XDD Nooo, it was in my sweater pocket which decided to get caught in the car door as I closed it -_- So it got smashed and barely works :'(


message 20: by MiMi (new)

MiMi (planetearthturnsslowly) yep. I gtg. I will be on here later though.


message 21: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) Awww Sorry Aisha!! That sucks big time!


message 22: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) MiMi wrote: "yep. I gtg. I will be on here later though."

Bye Mimi!


DeliciousFicticiousKilljoy (mcrmykilljoysoldier) | 35 comments Memory

I walk alone
Through my useless life.
I don't want home
I want a knife.
I try to remember
That cold Night.
In the middle of December
Filled with fright.
My mom began to yell
My dad took off.
I had to sell
My life in scoff.
The memory shifts
In the pale moonlight.
My heart never lifts
Even in the morning light.
It begins to rain
With clouds above.
I remember the pain
Of the ones I love.
The memory of life
Comes to an end.
As if I strife
Away from a friend.
The pain never lightens
The clouds stay.
As the Dawn lightens
My life fades away.

The memories never seem to fade,
For they never will.

Depression never truely fades away.
Death shall overcome life.
Life falls under death's sickening spell.
My life is falling faster than others'.
For depression never truely leaves.
It waits arround every corner.

- Hannah


DeliciousFicticiousKilljoy (mcrmykilljoysoldier) | 35 comments Good job!!!!


DeliciousFicticiousKilljoy (mcrmykilljoysoldier) | 35 comments I think your is. Mine is too depressing.


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

I suck, I know xD

The unicorns run through the rain of the night
The stars were shining oh, so bright
They lifted their heads, watching the stars
Then the stars rained down then made it to mars~


message 27: by Cat , The Fabulous Kitty MOD <3 (new)

Cat  (cat335) | 1051 comments Mod
No!! It's pretty good!!! :D


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

I've never made a poem before so yeah xD


message 29: by Cat , The Fabulous Kitty MOD <3 (new)

Cat  (cat335) | 1051 comments Mod
As you can tell *points up to 4th comment* I'm not really a poet either XD But, no worries, its fine ;)


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

I couldn't think of anything but unicorns at the time xD


message 31: by MiMi (new)

MiMi (planetearthturnsslowly) That's a really cool poem!!


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Mean Names

I thought we were friends I guess not at all.
You set me up for failure and you never seemed to call.
You changed over the summer, wearing makeup and such.
I thought we were friends but it was just a hunch.
You called me mean names, you tried to bring me down.
But I refused to do it,
I refused to frown.
I tried to be nice, I used to wave at school.
But you just ignored me.
I guess I wasn't "cool".
And now you have a "boyfriend", even though your twelve years old.
You called me mean names, now that's just cold.
I don't understand what your trying to do.
Don't you know I have feelings too?
I don't get it, I don't understand.
And you will never know where I stand.
You don't get my pain.
You think I'm insane.
I used to cry myself to sleep.
Sometimes, I laid in bed, and couldn't to go to sleep.
You said "best friends til' the end!"
Well, that was a lie.
Because in the end we just said goodbye.
You called me mean names.
You try to put me to shame.
But you won't break me.
Can't you see?
It was true, you were just using me.
I guess I was the only one that couldn't see.
You called me mean names.
And now I see can your little game.
But, I have new friends now.
And they understand me too.
I'm happy now!
I'm as free as a bird, no stress at all.
And guess what, my new friends always call.
You didn't break me even though you tried so hard too.
You called me mean names, but I never did that to you...


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Imma re do my poem

I won't try to stop my heart from beating
Every beat that comes and goes is fleeting
It won't be long till I am dead and I can't breath
My Body rests where heaven and hell meet


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

Like a Bullet from a Gun

The words shoot out of their lips like a bullet from a gun
Aimed at me
Targeting me
Something I can never outrun.
The bullet hits me
Right in the heart
Destroying my confidence
Tearing it apart.

I know I can't take this much longer
I'll be falling to pieces
And I'll be weaker, definitely not stronger.

They don't understand
How it hurts
The pain
How I try not to cry
And all of the happiness I feign.
As if everything is okay
Like the words didn't hurt
Like I'm
"Having a good day"

The laughter
The teasing
The snickers
The bleeding.

The bleeding I cause
With the blade of my scissor
Why do I do this?
I guess the words were a trigger.

I wish they would stop
Just LEAVE ME ALONE
Go back to ignoring me
But I'm their victim, who would have known?

Their words linger in the back of my mind
Everywhere I go
They stay there, never behind.
The words always haunt me, I can't shake them off
They always laugh at me, mock me, acting as a little scoff.

The words shooting out of their lips like a bullet from a gun
Aimed at me
Targeting me
Something I can never outrun.
The bullet hits me
Right in the heart.

Smashing it into pieces
Nothing remains
But my blood
My sadness
And my pain.
As I die in the darkness
My life down the drain.


message 35: by Cat , The Fabulous Kitty MOD <3 (new)

Cat  (cat335) | 1051 comments Mod
These are great poems guys!! :D


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks!!


message 37: by Cat , The Fabulous Kitty MOD <3 (new)

Cat  (cat335) | 1051 comments Mod
No problem :)


message 38: by MiMi (new)

MiMi (planetearthturnsslowly) Paige, yours is sooooo good! :)


message 39: by Cat , The Fabulous Kitty MOD <3 (new)

Cat  (cat335) | 1051 comments Mod
Agreed! <3 :)


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

Thank you so much!!! :)


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