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message 1: by Hayleebee (last edited Dec 30, 2013 08:36PM) (new)

Hayleebee | 48 comments I love feedback. Don't be afraid to give me construction criticism or point out spelling/grammar errors.
And please tell me if my covers look okay.

**Warning**
My stories do have some swearing in them, there's not a lot. I think Trapped has the most.


message 2: by Hayleebee (new)

Hayleebee | 48 comments Will I Be Free-
Description: Jenna Fletcher is sixteen and her life sucks. She is sentenced to 10 years of palace work for something her estranged mother did. While she works she realizes the royal may not have it as easy as she thought.
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...


Trapped-
Description: 40 years in the future a vampire finds a way to turn humans in to vampires with out biting them. Any humans between 13-18 are left to fend for themselves while the rest live in safety.
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...


message 3: by Hayleebee (last edited Dec 30, 2013 05:48PM) (new)

Hayleebee | 48 comments I haven't put it on goodreads but I do have a third. Should I put it on GR?
Remember Me-
My name is Erika and my best friend just fell out of the closet. Now I'm helping her keep her secret because if people were to find out they would destroy her. But In a small town no secret stays a secret for long. Taria's getting closer and closer to the edge and when she fall I'm afraid no one will be there to catch her.

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...


message 4: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) Yes! I wanna read it! It sounds really interesting!


message 5: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) Coolsies!


message 6: by Hayleebee (new)

Hayleebee | 48 comments Who Would I Be?

If somebody asked me
Who else would you be?
Just for today
Or forever either way?
So who would I be?

A famous author like Stephanie Meyer?
Or someone born to inspire?
An actress like Anne Hathaway?
Or painter not alive today?
So who would I be?

A scientist like Marie Curie?
Or a judge addressing a jury?
A singer like Taylor Swift?
Or an athlete with such a gift?
So who would I be?

I’d say, even just for tomorrow?
No ones life has been exempt from sorrow
So truth be told, I’d rather be
No one but plain old me
Why you ask

Because if I were anyone other than me
I’d never get to meet the same people you see
I’d never seen the things I’ve seen
Or gone the places I have been
So now do you see, I never be anyone but me.


message 7: by Hayleebee (new)

Hayleebee | 48 comments I finally finished the 4 chapter of Will I Be Free Yay!
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...


message 8: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments that poem is amaZing


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