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message 1: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) So I'm writing this story, it's called the Last one Standing.

The world is torn apart. A war has been going on for years. Families are fighting and looking for each other. On which side of the wall would you be? This story will tell you about three different lives inside this crazy world. Those lives are connected and yet separated.

Here is a link to where you can read it : https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

If you are also (like me) on wattpad you can read it here: http://www.wattpad.com/story/10740969...

I'd love some Feedback :) and I'll let you guys know whenever I post something new :)


message 2: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa)


message 3: by Alyssa (last edited Feb 08, 2014 06:02AM) (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) I always like to imagine actors or models as characters. I like to see faces when I'm writing. They don't exactly match my vision of the character but they come close. So here they are:









Let me know what you think :) If you think I should use other pictures or other actors? Feedback is appreciated!


message 4: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments cool, I'll read them when I get the chance:)


message 5: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) You have no Idea how much that means to me :) Thanks


message 6: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments you bet!


message 7: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Do you like these as characters or not?




Please let me know if you think they are suited or not?


message 8: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments I'm on mobile...can't see them


message 9: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Oh :( damn.. that is too bad.. :(


message 10: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments Yeah:/
I won't expect to be on a computer for at least another three days.


message 11: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Aaaahw :( hmm
I can wait for your opinion for 3 days.. I think.. I can.. :P


message 12: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments hehe yep
that's when I'll be at my mom's house. (my parents share 50/50 custody, so I switch off every four days)


message 13: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Oh okay .. You don't have a computer at your dads?


message 14: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments nah. I do at my grandparents, so I can always walk to my grandparents house(it's really close) and say I need to use the computer for homework though;)


message 15: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Aah okay :P seems confusing.. :S :( I'd always lose stuff. Wondering at which house I left my stuff, you know?


message 16: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments oh yeah. I pack up almost everything to take back and forth. it usually takes me carrying six bags fill of stuff. quite a load, indeed


message 17: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) I can imagine, that sucks :(


message 18: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments kinda. four more years! Haha


message 19: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) And then off to College :P?? Or something else?


message 20: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments yup. imma free load off of one of my friends. she wants to be a surgeon! so we plan on moving into an apartment in southern California while I complete college and work on my career as an actress or photographer. Yeah, it's pretty far-fetched but it sounds good, don't it?;)


message 21: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Wait .. What?? XD


message 22: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments green arrow...WHAT?? where did that come from?


message 23: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) @alyssa, that does sound good :) hope that all works out well! What kind of photography?


message 24: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments I wanna take pictures off nature, our cities. if not as a career, as one if my many hobbies. you like photography, right?


message 25: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) I'm wondering the same XD


message 26: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Oooh yes :P I sure do. I wanted to study photography. But I didn't get it. They are really tough at those schools.


message 27: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments Kayla?? lol


message 28: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments @Alyssa- oooh yeah. it's hard to get into acting schools too. if I like drama class next year at high school, I think I wanna apply to this high school that is mainly for performing arts the next year.


message 29: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments @Kayla- oohhhh


message 30: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) I know the show arrow but that's a different Guy. Which Guy are you refering too? (I think my max, but that is Chris Evans, hè plays Captain America in the Avengers)


message 31: by Reann (new)

Reann And the human torch in fantastic four'


message 32: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) @Alyssa (This is weird!), oh that does sound cool :) hope you get in!!


message 33: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) The Human Who What?


message 34: by Reann (new)

Reann The Human Torch from Fantastic Four.


message 35: by Reann (new)

Reann Yes he is. Captain America is the Human Torch.


message 36: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Oh Yeah. That too is Chris Evans


message 37: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Yes it is Chris Evans :P though They do look awfully alike, especcialy the right pic.


message 38: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Confusion!!


message 39: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) But do you Guys think They are suitable for my characters in my story??


message 40: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Yay :D


message 41: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) I like your characters Alyssa!


message 42: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Thanks Tia :) You're the best :D I Like yours too. Oeh i almost finished your Book cover thingy. But i got frustrated at my laptop So nor im trying to sleep, kinda.


message 43: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) Ooh YAY!! Can't wait to see it!! Thank you so much Lyss!


message 44: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Yw ^^ i just hope you Like it..


message 45: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) I prolly will. I can't really be picky ya know. It's not like I can do any better XD


message 46: by Alyssa (new)

Alyssa (vr_alyssa) Hahaha fair enough :) :P I'll send it to you tomorrow (for me).


message 47: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) Alright :D


message 48: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments @Alyssa- thanks, I hope I get in too!
@Tia- that's funny that you called the other Alyssa 'Lyss'. most everyone I know calls me either that or 'Lyssie'/ 'Lissy'


message 49: by Tia (new)

Tia Jenkins (tia_jenkins) XD It's just easier than typing out Alyssa all the time


message 50: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments Yeah. and it's easier if ppl called us by different names anyways


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