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Elaine Williams How many times can this writer use the word "chuckle?" I'm only 1/3 the way through and it's driving me nuts!

Don't get me started on our "heroine." I just about need heroin to get through it!


Frannie Cheska lol is that kellan chuckling? yeah people mostly hated the heroine but i love the story and it didnt bother me much.


message 3: by Paula (last edited Jan 07, 2014 08:40AM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Paula Yea, she used that word a lot. also Kiera was crying so much that it's a wonder she has any tears left. I loved the book too, but the level of betrayal was devastating. Her sleeping with him while he slept in the other room was disgusting. At least wait until he leaves for work---not that the situation would be more morally correct. Those immoralities gave the book its edge though.


Elaine Williams I also couldn't get over Kiera and her nervousness. She was nervous about riding a train? Seriously? It's a train! Not a rocket! She has to be about the lamest character I have ever read about. Love the boys though.


message 5: by Paula (last edited Jan 25, 2014 05:46PM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Paula Funny you say that you loved the boys…..If you loved Denny, could you love Kellan too and vice versa? I really liked Denny's character but just could not really care for anyone else. Maybe its my age.


Frannie Cheska i love kellan over denny, i just feel that denny asked for it. not that its right but he shouldve just stayed away lol @paula i love how you said that though u are so right. the immoralities gave the book its edge. perfect.


Aich Elle What about how much she used the word melancholy throughout all three books!!!


Paula Hails wrote: "What about how much she used the word melancholy throughout all three books!!!"

What about how many times the characters rolled their eyes, shake their head, smack each other in the chest or on the shoulder. I am getting so sick of the rolling of the eyes and shaking of the head that I might not be able to finish Effortless.


Monica They gasp all the time too or scowl :)


Shelby C According to Thoughtless Kiera also seemed to blush a lot


Terri chuckle, blush, pale, melancholy, half-smile, goofy smilie and an adverb for every verb. The story was compelling, but it sure would have benefitted with from an ruthless editor with a red pen.


message 12: by Michele (new)

Michele I could not agree with you more... Ya know. I liked this series but it ruined me for other books. If I hear the same phrases used over and over again I stop reading them. They may be great books but I just cannot read them. I would like to keep my hair and not break my iPad thank you very much... LOL@


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