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message 1: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Hey there! I'm Chloe, and I will be posting poems, short stories and fanfiction here! Please comment if you like them, or some constructive criticism would be nice :) thanks!


message 2: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments He Is
I am the ocean he is the moon
I am the breeze he is the monsoon
I am a cat he is a tiger
I am the wood he is my fire
I am a part he is the whole
I am a body he is my soul
I am the book he is the words
He is the sky I am the birds
He is everything I am a girl
I am just earth he is my world


message 3: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments awwww:)


message 4: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Beautiful Darkness
Lena, my sweet love
Am I the one you're dreaming of?
"Claim yourself" is al they ever seem to say,
But that doesn't mean you should run away!
You mean the absolute world to me
We were made for each other, don't you see? We can communicate when we are miles away
But it feels like our love has gone astray.
You think the choice is already made
Because of that spell on that wretched day
But you are capable of so much more
Than being light or being dark.
You are you, and that's all I need
You changed the Order, the Order of Things
You are beautiful, my lemon-scented girl
Lemons and rosemary
You crashed right into my boring world
At first it was kind of scary
But then, you let me in
You showed me your poems, which were art
You couldn't help but grin
When I told you you had my heart.
You're all I ever think about,
You're my first thought when I get out of bed
And all through the day,
I cannot get you out of my head
I almost lost you once, on your claiming day,
But I was meant to guide you along,
And help you decide your fate.


message 5: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Words
I am just words
Scratches on a page
That you interpret
And understand

We are all just words
Waiting to be spoken
Waiting to be heard
Waiting to be written
Waiting to be read
Waiting.

We are all stories
Waiting to be told
But our stories will end
They always end.

We are all books
That are being judged
By our appearance
While no one ever bothers
To look inside

But there are some people
You will find
Who take the time
To look inside

And when they do
They will see the words
That make up you.


message 6: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Thanks Alyssa! :)


message 7: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments Chloe wrote: "Words
I am just words
Scratches on a page
That you interpret
And understand

We are all just words
Waiting to be spoken
Waiting to be heard
Waiting to be written
Waiting to be read
Waiting.

We a..."


couldn't have said it better:)


message 8: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments hey...how does everyone know my name now?? lol


message 9: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Haha you posted it on another thread :P my friend Lee, her poems :) isn't she amazing??


message 10: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments And thank you!! That means a lot to me :)


message 11: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments oh, yeah! Haha...I post my name lots of places but I don't usually expect people to remember...or see my comments. *shrug*.
Lee IS amazing! You know her in person?


message 12: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Yeah she goes to my school. I absolutely adore her.


message 13: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments Chloe wrote: "And thank you!! That means a lot to me :)"

that's why I said it;)


message 14: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Please add me so we can talk in messages? I don't want my folder to be mucked up, lol :P


message 15: by Abi (last edited Jan 18, 2014 09:17AM) (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments Chloe wrote: "Please add me so we can talk in messages? I don't want my folder to be mucked up, lol :P"

oh, okay:) ((sorry lol))


message 16: by Reann (new)

Reann Oh that's awesome!


message 17: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Thanks, I'm glad you think so! :)


message 18: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments It's Worth It

There's always another decision to make
There's always another chance to take
There's always another turn or bend
But it's always worth it in the end.
Some chances are worth taking
Some decisions are worth making
Some battles are worth fighting
Some fires are worth igniting
Some mountains are worth climbing
Some things are worth finding
Some heartbreaks are worth feeling
Some books are worth reading
Some secrets are worth keeping
Some rewards are worth reaping
Your life is worth living
You won't get anything out of just existing.


message 19: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Thank you so much Kayla!!!! That means so much to me :)


message 20: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments You are You

Perception
Is what breaks me
Who I am
Is what makes me
Your thoughts
About me
Are so cruel
And not worthy
Of recognition
Or thought from me
Open up
From the darkness inside
Stop shutting down
And trying to hide
You need more
Than their selfish pride
You are more
Than what's on the outside.
You are
The golden prize
Not what they hold
In their eyes
Their thoughts
Are nothing but a ruse
To make you feel
Lonely and confused
You are more
You are you
You are so much more
Than what they see, too.


message 21: by Reann (new)

Reann Wow I love your poems!


message 22: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments This Girl

Look at this girl
Who is she?
Is she really
Who you think?
She's happy,
Eyes as blue as the sky
But there's more to her
Than meets the eye.
She is always hoping, waiting, dreaming,
Wishing, wanting, watching, gleaming.
She is so much more
Than what you see
Who is this girl?
This girl is me.


message 23: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Thanks a bunch Reann!


message 24: by Reann (new)

Reann Np:)


message 25: by s (new)

s (cherrybelugas) Chloe wrote: "This Girl

Look at this girl
Who is she?
Is she really
Who you think?
She's happy,
Eyes as blue as the sky
But there's more to her
Than meets the eye.
She is always hoping, waiting, dreaming,
Wi..."


I love it! :D


message 26: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Thank you bunches Selia! That means a lot :)


message 27: by s (new)

s (cherrybelugas) You're very welcome!


message 28: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments :)


message 29: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments that's awesome


message 30: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Thanks Alyssa!! :)


message 31: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments welcome(:


message 33: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Wow, thanks Emelia! That means a lot :)


message 34: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Ridley

Twirling
Her lollipop of death
Swirling
In her minidress
Making
Boys fall in love
Breaking hearts with a single shove
Turning
Heads with her racy attire
Yearning
To go back to the dark fire
Showing
Everyone her blue eyes
Knowing
Her power is gone, but she just denies.
Hiding
The good inside of her soul
Lying
To herself and believing she's still cold
Who is she?
Why are you asking me?
Ask her yourself, and you will see
Her name is Ridley.


message 35: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments -Beautiful Creatures reference:)


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

You're such a GREAT poet! I love the "He is" poem:)


message 37: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Teardrops On My Blue Scarf
(Sherlock's POV)
John looks at me
I fake a smile so he won't see
that I want and I'm needing
everything that we should be
I'll bet she's beautiful,
that girl he's taking out.
And she's got everything that I have to live without.
John talks to me
I analyze it perfectly
He's in love with me
Oh why can't he just see?
That he's so in love,
He's finally got it right.
I wonder if he knows he's all I think about at night
He's the reason for the teardrops on my blue scarf
My only true friend,
And I think that he's even more
I just know he loves me,
and I loves him don't know why I do.
(John's POV)
Sherlock walks by me
can he tell that I can't breathe?
and there he goes so perfectly
oh, I just wish he was in love with me
I should be holding him tight, giving him all my love
look in those beautiful eyes,
and I know i'm lucky cause


message 40: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments Haha sang that to Teardrops on My Guitar tune:)


message 41: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Aw thanks guys!! :) haha yeah lol i do that with all of mine lol


message 42: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Hey guys! So these are the lyrics to a song that I’m working on for my boyfriend for valentines day  hope you like it!!!!

Missing Parts of Me

There’s a box
Of puzzle pieces
In my heart
But some are missing
You are the parts
Inside of me
I’ve been needing
When you kiss
Me I’m swept away
When we touch
It’s like electricity
You are the one
The one that I
I’ve been needing
You are the pen to my paper
You’re the key to my lock
You’re the sunny weather
When the storm clouds are lifting up
And I hope you’ll always be
The missing parts of me


message 43: by Abi (new)

Abi (abilyssa) | 1289 comments oh that's so awesome!
#jealous #loljk
but seriously really good


♥ Charlotte ♥ (concealdontfeel) | 173 comments OMG ALL BEAUTIFUL GIRLLL!!!! My favorite ever ever is Words. Awesome! Gosh keep it up! And show this to me in class once and a while maybe ;)This are awesome! Keep up the good work Chloe!


▂▃▅▇█۩✡۩̮✾ԲคՆՆ૯Ո คՈ૭૯Ն✾۩✡۩█▇▅▃▂ (-percabethforever-) o.o XD BEST SHEELOCK JOHN TAYLOR SWIFT SON EEEEEEEEEVEEEEEERRRRRRR


message 46: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Thank you so much Lee and Percabeth!!!!!!! :) and yeah Lee I'll try to :)I love you girly :)


message 47: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Thank you so much Alyssa!!!! :))) haha :)


message 48: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments This one I wrote a long long time ago, lol. It’s a poem from the point of view of John Watson, after Sherlock fell.

One More Miracle

The twinkle in your eyes would give me butterflies,
But now my heart is full of pain
My heart was light as a feather, I thought you’d be mine forever
But now it’s all a dark rain.
My life is so empty without you
I can’t move on just yet
Please Sherlock, one more miracle,
Just for me, don’t be dead.


♥ Charlotte ♥ (concealdontfeel) | 173 comments BAM! And this, my friends, are how tears are made.


message 50: by Chloe (new)

Chloe Fray (bowtiesandtrenchcoats) | 117 comments Alright, I'm trying to make this into a song, but I've had it for a week on paper and thought I'd share it with you guys:

Set My Spirit Free

I am
Trapped and tangled
I am a lost soul
I need to be freed
From this cage

I am a bird in a cage
I need to fly away

And you set my spirit free
With your beautiful smile
And now I can finally see
That I was meant to fly.

And now
I am a new me
Remade
Through your love for me
I used to think
I was nothing
But now I feel like
Everything is in my reach

I am a bird in a cage
I need to fly away.

And you set my spirit free
With your beautiful smile
And now I can finally see
That I was meant to fly.

You changed me
Rearranged me
And you showed me
That I was worth it
You showed me
That I can fly
That I was meant to fly.

And you set my spirit free
With your beautiful smile
And now I can finally see
That I was meant to fly.


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