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message 1: by Jordyn (last edited Jul 02, 2009 10:02PM) (new)

Jordyn (bookishadventures) | 12 comments She lived in a house, located next to a ditch...

((Okay I just had too...;.; You set me up to it...But I'll start over with a real one!))
~Sessy


message 2: by Jordyn (new)

Jordyn (bookishadventures) | 12 comments She loved boys and going to the academy just down the walk. Most people can't tell that its an academy but it truly is. The night class consisted of witches, wizards, and sorcerers of all kind.
~Sessy


message 3: by ♫Alisa♫ (new)

♫Alisa♫ (goodreadscomaah9726) | 40 comments She loved going to the academy, but there was one girl who she hated named Becky Lulu Sopu. (That was kinda random.......... you can change it though, if you want).


message 4: by ☮Mary☮ (new)

☮Mary☮ (MaryMusicLover) Everyone liked her at the academy. Except for Becky Lulu Sopu(?) and all of her friends. And she had a LOT of friends.


message 5: by ☮Mary☮ (new)

☮Mary☮ (MaryMusicLover) Jessica tried her best to avoid her, but never could.


message 6: by Tanglesky (new)

Tanglesky | 4 comments One day Becky froze Jessi using a spell.


message 7: by ☮Mary☮ (new)

☮Mary☮ (MaryMusicLover) Jessi was so mad, she melted herself.


message 8: by Jordyn (new)

Jordyn (bookishadventures) | 12 comments She was never violent unless the scenario called for it and that was only natural self-defense. After the she released herself from the spell, she looked at Becky. She thought of so many things she could say: what she hated about her, what she didn't understand, that she wanted to be friends but always questioning why they couldn't be.
~Sessy


message 9: by ♫Alisa♫ (new)

♫Alisa♫ (goodreadscomaah9726) | 40 comments So, instead of doing something to Becky, she walked away calmly, trying to control her anger. When she told her friends, they told her that she should have done something back to Becky. So when Jessica had left, they decided to do something to get back at Becky for what she did to Jessica.


message 10: by Jordyn (new)

Jordyn (bookishadventures) | 12 comments As she walked down the corridor, other children ran through the hallway.
~Sessy


message 11: by R!*A!*V!*E!*N (new)

R!*A!*V!*E!*N (crazyray) | 4 comments Jessica saw her friends making Becky look horrible and lose all of her popularity and friends.


message 12: by ♫Alisa♫ (last edited Jul 08, 2009 06:39PM) (new)

♫Alisa♫ (goodreadscomaah9726) | 40 comments Jessica then went to her friends and told them to stop what they were doing at that moment. She was furious with them for doing such things to Becky. Her friends then felt bad, but were glad that they had gotten Becky back. The one thing that they didn't think about was that Becky was going to get back at them for what they did to her. Becky spent days plotting her revenge, making sure that every detail was perfect. All that was left was to pick the date. Poor Jessica's friends had no idea what was in store for them, and went on for five days gloating over what they did to Becky.


message 13: by R!*A!*V!*E!*N (new)

R!*A!*V!*E!*N (crazyray) | 4 comments Finally the day had come for Becky to do her trick.


message 14: by ☮Mary☮ (new)

☮Mary☮ (MaryMusicLover) The trick would be terrible, much worse than any of Jessica's friends could have imagined. But Jessica knew it was coming. So she went to Becky and told her that her friends only did that terrible stuff because she told them to. What happened then shocked everyone in the school.


message 15: by Tanglesky (new)

Tanglesky | 4 comments ((AHHH PRESSURE WHAT'S THE TRICK????))

Becky started to cry.


message 16: by ☮Mary☮ (new)

☮Mary☮ (MaryMusicLover) ((I DON"T KNOW!))
"You would really do that JUST to protect your friends?" Becky all but wispered.


message 17: by ♫Alisa♫ (new)

♫Alisa♫ (goodreadscomaah9726) | 40 comments "Yes, I would" Jessica replied mater of factly. Becky then felt something she had never thought she could feel, kindness. Becky did not go on with her terrible trick, for a reason that only she knew.
Becky had never been a kind person. She only had a few friends because she forced them to be her friends. When Jessica had said that to her, Becky thought that she knew then what true friendship was, but that was not enough to change her old ways. Becky continued to be mean, and tried to forget that day. Yet she could not. It haunted her, and that made her be even more mean. Then, a few days after the incident, Becky decided that she would continue her plan. It was after all their fault that she felt like this, and she decided to get pay back. This pay back would be even worse than before, and nothing would stop her now.


message 18: by ☮Mary☮ (new)

☮Mary☮ (MaryMusicLover) Nothing but one person.


message 19: by R!*A!*V!*E!*N (new)

R!*A!*V!*E!*N (crazyray) | 4 comments That one person would be her childhood friend, Jacob, who she stopped talking to because she became popular.


message 20: by Jordyn (last edited Jul 11, 2009 11:42AM) (new)

Jordyn (bookishadventures) | 12 comments Jacob looked a little scruffy around the edges, loose band T's with holes, faded and torn jeans, and messy, although clean, short black hair. He wasn't the best at magic either. Becky was his neighbor, and as they grew together, all of Becky's friendlyness towards Jacob evaporated coming to making fun of him and pointing out all his sloppy and secret ways.
Jacob, though being hurt by her newly found cruelty, he did nothing, because he couldn't do anything to her. Not to Becky. He knew all her secrets as well, but shared not one.
Becky had been scheming to let loose the pixies in the teachers ward, putting a destructive spell on them so that they would attack Jessica and her friends. Jacob was walking through the hallways, half hour after dusk, not too worried about making it to class on time.
~Sessy


message 21: by ☮Mary☮ (new)

☮Mary☮ (MaryMusicLover) He had heard what Becky was planning. He knew what he had to do. He also knew that Becky wouldn't like one bit.


message 22: by Jordyn (new)

Jordyn (bookishadventures) | 12 comments He snuck into the teachers lounge, making sure Becky wasn't anywhere in site. He took out is wand, and looked at the pixie cage. "Okay you can do this." He was planning putting a protection shield on the cage, but, "Harpis Protectiarmous!" His walk accidentally flicked to the right, making the cage door open. The pixies flew everywhere.
~Sessy


message 23: by ☮Mary☮ (new)

☮Mary☮ (MaryMusicLover) But the pixies weren't out to get Jessica and her friends, they were out to get Becky. Jacob knew that the teachers would walk in when they were attacking Becky. She would be blamed, and would therefore not be able to get Jessica back. Jacob would never want anything to hurt Jessica. He liked her.


message 24: by Jordyn (new)

Jordyn (bookishadventures) | 12 comments He learned this from his Defense courses that are required, house pixies, if caged, are never tamed. And whoever lets them out are usually unharmed unless transfixed by a spell before hand. But after being let out, if someone disturbs them, they will attack.
Jacob slipped out of the room, laughing to himself in the back of his mind. He sneaked off in the direction of his present class, shaking the laughter from his head. Pranks were fun though it was sort of cruel to preform such a dirty notion, but then again he believed that Becky deserved this much!
~Sessy


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) the pixies streamed down the dark corridors, looking for their enemy. They could feel her emotions, her thoughts, pulsing through them like an overpowering heart. Finally, they could scent her glorious smell. BECKY, BECKY, BECKY,they whispered as one, although she couldn't hear them. They were creeping quietly behind her, getting ready to attack.


message 26: by Jordyn (new)

Jordyn (bookishadventures) | 12 comments They grabbed her hair and pulled, tugging viciously.
~Sessy


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

Becky screamed and took out her wand, which the pixies stole. Becky tried to get them off but the pixies cast a body-binding spell one her so she could not move and then they brought her to the longest staircase there and pushed her down. At the end of the staircase was


message 28: by ☮Mary☮ (new)

☮Mary☮ (MaryMusicLover) Jessica. "You did this!" Becky screamed at her. "You knew I was going to do this to you and your friends, so you did it first!" However, Becky didn't notice the headmaster was standing right behind Jessica until it was too late.


message 29: by Jordyn (last edited Jul 14, 2009 08:19PM) (new)

Jordyn (bookishadventures) | 12 comments Jessica just blinked, heat rushing up her cheeks. "Becky? You did this? You released the pixies?"
Becky reeled back, then winced at the pain. "What? No! Didn't I just say that I - I mean. I didn't-"
"I've heard enough Belinda Lulu Sopu. I don't want another word. To my office at once, where we can talk this behavior over with your parents." The Headmaster looked down his stubby nose and through his half moon specticles, looking disapproving.
~Sessy


message 30: by ☮Mary☮ (new)

☮Mary☮ (MaryMusicLover) Jessica stared at them with eyes unblinking. From behind a door, she heard wild laughter. She opened it and saw Jacob. She quickly closed the door and walked swiftly away, confused beyond believe.


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) Had it been him who did this? BUt he was her best friend! Or was he?


message 32: by Jordyn (new)

Jordyn (bookishadventures) | 12 comments Becky started to cry as another teacher came to help gather her off the floor and walk her to the main office.
Jacob waited until all the the commotion calmed to leave his hiding spot. He hadn't minded that Jessica had seen him, he just-
As soon as he stepped around the nearest corner, Jessica was in his face.
"Did you do that on purpose?! Were you trying to make Becky even more mad at me?" She huffed in his face.
"Whoa, Jess! Chill out! I heard what she was going to do to you! She was planning on sicking the pixie things on you and your friends. I interviened and let them out, I didn't mean for them to get out of the room though! I was hoping that when she walked into the room after me that they would attack her or something.." Jacob tried to smoothly cover the fact that he had been paying attention in class the day he was actually present and in his seat and reading about taming pixies from the How To Domesticate Mystical Creatures by Mary Hobblkins in his third period Mythical Creatures class.
~Sessy


message 33: by ☮Mary☮ (new)

☮Mary☮ (MaryMusicLover) "well, so what?" jessica demanded. "that doesn't give you the right to do that!"
"woh, just chill," jacob said. "would you rather have those things after you?"
"no," jessica replied. "i would rather they not be after anyone."


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) Jacob sighed. DId she have to be so difficult?


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) She should appreciate him for what he did.


message 36: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 16, 2009 08:20PM) (new)

"well, Jessica, next time i should try letting them out on you, if you try to get back at someone!"
"well, then i don't think you are a very good friend. to ANYONE!"
Jessica stalked off and ran into Professor Sintagejam.
"Watch where you're going kid!"
"That's no way to treat a student!" Jessica retorted," You're my teacher!"
Jacob and Jessica both took out their wands.
"ARE YOU RIGHTFULLY A TEACHER OR NOT?"Jacob screamed.
Jessica spun around. "I can handle this myself Jacob."
"No," Jacob argued,"I WILL HELP!"
While the two were arguing Professor Sintagejam had taken out his wand. Both the kids turned around.
"YOU WOULDN'T HURT A STUDENT!" jessica cried while Jacob said "are you asking for a fight?"
Professor Sintagejam cast a charm at them that made them fly backwards right into the headmaster.
"What is going on here?" he demanded, then he saw professor Sintagejam and said, "come to my office immediately! All three of you!"
They all followed the headmaster to his office.


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

errrggghhhh! when is someone going to continue with it? I AM GETTING IMPATIENT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!


message 38: by ♫Alisa♫ (new)

♫Alisa♫ (goodreadscomaah9726) | 40 comments After the three of them had taken their seats, the headmaster said, "Well, explain your selves."
They started talking at once.
"They yelled at me!" said Professor Sintagejam, pointing an accusitory finger at Jessica and jacob.
"He hurt me!" Jessica retorted, her voice shrilly with anger.
The only person who remained quiet was Jacob. He was looking at his hands, with a slightly guilty look on his face. The room was suddenly quiet as Jessica and Sintagejam stopped talking. They all looked at Jacob, waiting for him to talk.
"Well, um, Professor Stintagejam did yell at us, and he did hurt us, yeah, he, yeah" Jacob finished lamely.


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

then jacob got up and marched straight out of the room and didn't realize where he was going and walked right off the third floor landing where there was no railing and started plummeting to the ground. Luckily Sina Lina a smart person (and also the weirdo) and gave him a cushioning fall with conjuring up a dragon to land on. The dragon turned his head to jacob purred and opened his mouth and



message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

and accidentally breathed fire on him while saying it. Jacob sat there covered in soot.


message 41: by Jordyn (new)

Jordyn (bookishadventures) | 12 comments The dragon lowered his head in a defeated manner, feeling bad about hurting someone yet again. The dragon landed back on the third floor, dust flew up with the wind under his belly as the dragon plopped down onto the floor. Jacob carefully slipped off the back of the dragon, looking at it as the behemoths of a animal disappeared with a simple pouf.
~Sessy


message 42: by ♫Alisa♫ (new)

♫Alisa♫ (goodreadscomaah9726) | 40 comments Jacob stalked off, still covered in soot, in a towering temper. He kept on walking, and then ran in to a crying, fuming, Becky.



Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) "YOU DID THIS!! WHY!!! I'M NEVER SPEAKING TO YOU AGAIN!" she screamed, then did a weird hand motion that turned Jacob's feet into jelly, and ran away in a rage of anger.


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

Jacob cast a fireball at her and hit. He liked not being the only one covered in soot.


message 45: by ♫Alisa♫ (last edited Jul 28, 2009 08:17PM) (new)

♫Alisa♫ (goodreadscomaah9726) | 40 comments She turned around slowly, now shaking with rage.
"You... how... I... wait" she barely got out from her rage.
"Well, I'm really scared now," Jacob tried to sound sarcastic, but he was really scared. Jacob knew that Becky, even in a good mood, was dangerous. Not even trying to fight, he turned on his heel, and ran as fast as he could. Becky following, hot on his heels.


message 46: by Tanglesky (new)

Tanglesky | 4 comments "Ow," She said.


message 48: by ☮Mary☮ (new)

☮Mary☮ (MaryMusicLover) ((i don't get it either))


message 49: by Tanglesky (new)

Tanglesky | 4 comments Nikos-JayFeather-JamesPotter-LionBlaze-Warriorcats wrote: "Jacob cast a fireball at her and hit. He liked not being the only one covered in soot."

((I meant for this, I didn't realize their were two pages sorry.))


message 50: by Magical Muggle (new)

Magical Muggle (strawberryfeilder) | 24 comments then everything died THE END


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