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message 1: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
Lizzy was terrified, she was in a dark alley that smelled of mold and old fruit. She thought she was being followed, but she was too scared to know for sure. All of a sudden there was a loud howl, Lizzy spun around to see a gigantic dog staring right at her and growling.


message 2: by Ash (new)

Ash (ashposh) | 1 comments The giant dog lunged at Lizzy! She covered her face with her hands, but the dog didn't attack...Someone or something had stopped it...but what?


message 3: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
When she removed her hands from her face there was no one and nothing there. There was blood and claw marks covering the ground.


message 4: by Abigail (last edited Feb 27, 2012 12:19PM) (new)

Abigail lizzy ran home and the next day at school all she could think about was what happened that night and why? her best friend dru could see the panick on her friends face and asked her what was wrong but lizzy pretended not to hear and walked away.


message 5: by Abigail (last edited Feb 27, 2012 12:40PM) (new)

Abigail when she got back she noticed a peace of paper on her door mat she picked it up turned it around and gasped for it read "lizzy if you want to live leave bofore dark thats when nightmare's come to life and fear is a weakness" lizzy seached the peace of paper there was no name or anythink, was this just a cruel joke or did it have somthink to do with the other night? All lizzy knew for sure was that she was staying and she was going to find out what happened that night and who saved and most importantly was he hot?

(COME ON GUYS DONT MAKE ME WRITE THE WHOLE BOOK ON MY OWN BECAUSE I WILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLUS I HAVE GIVEN YOU A GREAT PLACE TO LEAD OFF AND I WILL WRITE A NEW PEACE EVERY CHANCE I GET.)


message 6: by Abigail (new)

Abigail that night lizzy waited for somthink to happen it was about 9:30 now and she was starting to think it was just a sick joke but even so lizzy felt on edge so she went to bed without changing out of her jeans and t-shirt and hid a knife under her pillow and tried to get some sleep. after an hour see gave up and took some sleeping pills but just as she was about to drift into a light sleep her bed room window smashed scatering shards every where. lizzy was trying to shake off the sleepyness of the pills but couldn't and just before everthink went black she had a glimps of The huge dog from the night before but this time it was covered in cuts and dry blood.


message 7: by Abigail (last edited Mar 04, 2012 12:08PM) (new)

Abigail When lizzy woke up she was on a small wooden bed in the middle of a dark room that had no windows and one huge oak door. Lizzy made a dash for the door but fell flat on butt when her legs gave way.
"the sleeping pills have not worn off yet" said a strong male voice.
"who are you what do you want from me"lizzy was terrified and her vocie cracked when she spoke.
and when a tall tan young man about her age came out of the shadow and Lizzy said the first thing that poped in to her head "are you a vampire"
"NO you idiot! but i am a special agent and when i told you to leave i ment it and now because of you the wolf scracthed my leg and before you open that stupid mouth again no i dont know why the LUNA pack are after you, oh and one last thing my name's chris im your...protecter so shut up and sleep off the sleeping pill's." Lizzy was in shock but she managed to drag her self into the bed and drift into a light sleep while chris left the room


message 8: by Abigail (last edited Mar 06, 2012 09:58AM) (new)

Abigail The next time Lizzy woke up it was to the smell of burnt toast and somthink like eggs, lizzy was still a little dizzy but managed to get through the door and saw chris there in a small kitchen that had on large window above the sink and a small door way to what looked to be the living room,after looking at the small room she spotted chris staring at a wisk as if he had never seen one before but before i could say "hi" he had began hiting the toast with it.


message 9: by Abigail (new)

Abigail "what are you doing" Lizzy said trying to hold back a giggle.
"to be honest i have no idia, i think its called scrambled toast and eggs" chris addmitted
"your an idiot"she said pushing chris out of the way and cooking scrambled eggs on toast the way it was ment to be made.


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Chris seemed to be puzzled everytime Lizzy looked at him. All of a sudden, Lizzy paused her cooking. "Are you real" she suddenly blurted out...


message 11: by Elise (new)

Elise (elise-manklow-1998) | 3 comments "what do you mean, am i real? of course im not. if i was i would be worlds worst human ever." Chris replied. Lizzie looked strangly at him.


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

"I I I I I... I..." Lizzie spat out. "You what? Spit it out! hello?!?!" Chris was now turning red.


message 13: by Abigail (last edited Mar 26, 2012 09:21AM) (new)

Abigail lizzie know remebered that chris was in fact real but he was being an asshat and she knew one way to teach him a lession by bringing him pain.

"hello dumbo are you there" chris said in a sing song vocie.
lizzie snaped out of her evil thoughts and put plan 'make chris cry like a baby' in to action.

lizzie went upto chris and started her plan.
"so your not real?"
"thats right are you death" chris replyed
"oh so you wont feel this"
"feel whaaaaaaaaaaa aahhhhhhhhhh" chris never got to finish his sentence for lizzie had put her hands on chris's shoulders and knee'ed him in the gron.(THAT GOTTA HURT)
chris crumbled to the ground bitting his bottom lip to stop the cry of pain but little whimpers escaped and that satified lizzie completely.
"dont you ever call me dumb again you...you..you louse or next time you'll be crying so loud glass will shatter.


message 14: by Elise (new)

Elise (elise-manklow-1998) | 3 comments "okay, lesson one never fight a girl and lesson two never call a girl dumb." chris moaned in pain. lizzie asked "if you weren't real you wouldn't have felt that but you did so what are you?"


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

"I am... me....?"


message 16: by Abigail (last edited Mar 27, 2012 11:28AM) (new)

Abigail lizzie snorted and turned back to her cooking, thinking of a way to get out of here such as tieing him up and walking out or just legging it but lizzie knew she had to get out of this mess sure she wanted adventure but getting killed was not in the plan and her pearent where going to kill her for being gone for over a day but wait she still had her phone but she would have to use it when chris wasnt there.

later that night lizzie put her 'get the hell out of here'plan into action.......


message 17: by Abigail (last edited Mar 29, 2012 09:03AM) (new)

Abigail that night lizzy waited lieing in the dark room alone lisening for any signs of chis going to bed and about 1:00am her chance came....


message 18: by Abigail (new)

Abigail she creeped out of the room and started texting her mum saying so was at a friends but just a she sent the text lizzy steped on a creaking floor board and out of no where chris jumped out with a wisk in his hand and only wore a pair of boxers.


message 19: by Abigail (last edited Apr 16, 2012 08:10AM) (new)

Abigail lizzy couldn't help it she laughed so much tears where streaming down her face it was the funniest thing she had ever seen, when she finally calmed down she just had to ask
"what is it with you and that wisk"
chris had gone bright red and hit her on the head with the wisk but not to hard
"well as you can see its a wepion that works" chris retorted angrily and snatched the phone and started storming back to his room.

lizzy now sttod there by the front door while chris was in his room having a hissy fit
WOW how will i ever escape she said inside her mind.

(COME ON GUYS I HAVE BEEN ON HOLIDAY FOR 2 WEEKS NO INTERNET CONECTION I WOULD HAVE EXPECTED AT LEAST 3POSTS)


message 20: by Abigail (new)

Abigail CHRIS P.O.V
"i cant belive that girl"chris muttered to him self
she realy need to stay out of the way because what ever the luna pack wanted with her i could not be good because the way the wolf attacked ment they want her alive but why?
as the thoughts wirld through his head his mind went back to the day her got recruted.

it was a cold night and i had no where to go since my my dad left and my mum is a druken idiot, iwas a boy with nothink to lose and nothink to live for but that was all about to change. he turned a cornner and 2 foot infront of him a huge black wolf with razor sharp teeth and blade like claws where slowly walking towards a terrified littel girl, i dont know why but i jumped on the wolfs back distracting it it easyly shook me off. i grabbed a gaint rock a ran straight at the wolf smashing any part of it that canme near me and the next thing i know to gun shoots had been taken a bullet to the wolf's head and a tranqolizer to my neck when i woke up i was in training.

over the hundreds of people i have protected this lizzy girl makes me feel like if i dont protect he my life will fall apart and for some reason so will my heart.

chris heard the front door open and lizzys soft but fast steps fadeing "s##t" dread filled him this was not the place to play hide and seek if your not inside by 9:30pm then you have a 97% chance of getting rapped or attaced i had to find lizzy and fast.

chris sprinted out the door dragging his trousers on with his wepons and t-shirt behind him...................


message 21: by Elise (new)

Elise (elise-manklow-1998) | 3 comments he ran up and down the streets yelling her name. when he got to the ally he saw a light. he followed the light and found lizzy. she was shaking.
"are you cold or scared" chris asked her...


message 22: by Abigail (new)

Abigail " im FREEZING it's cold out but im not scared "
"well i'll take you back and get warmed up"chris said softly trying to control his anger
" im not going back there im going to go home and forget this every happened." lizzy stared walking backwards, just as chrises eyes widened she hit somthink warm and big.

she turned around and saw a huge man covered in tatoo's
"where do you think your going sweet thing" the stranger said
and for some reason chris's blood started to boil.


message 23: by Abigail (new)

Abigail now lizzy stared at the huge man and started to slowly walk back t chris but she had bearly goten 2 steps away when th stranger grabed he arm, lizzy was about to scream but chris was already on the stranger. and when i say chris was on the stranger i mean chris was on his back covering the mans eyes, yer thats right even chris who was taller than me by 3inches was up to the strangers shoulders................


message 24: by Abigail (new)

Abigail "Lizzy go back to the house" chris said still hanging on to the big guys back.

lizzy ran back the way she came and after 5 minites of wrong turns and dead ends the house became clear but the second she saw it her heart sank and she knew she couldn't leave chris like that so she ran back.

chris waited for lizzy to be safely out of the way before bending down and throwing the dustbin lid that had been on the floor hitting the man in the head while the big man tried to regain focus chris elbowed him in the gut folowed by a knee to his head. after a second he looked around and saw lizzy standing there staring at him and before he knew it she had run up to him and was giving him a hug.
"ARE YOU ALRIGHT" she said holding him at arms lengh scaning his body for marks.

chris knew that what ever had made him save her from the wolf twice had made him save her now and he didn't know if he could ever let that go..........then he woundered was he in LOVE?


message 25: by Abigail (new)

Abigail lizzy was still holding chris in her arms when the shock wore off but she didin't want to let go yet she knew he was probly waiting for her to pull away but the second she started moving backwards he pulled her back to him and before her mind could catch up they where kissing............

(GUYS IT DOESN'T TAKE LONG TO TYPE A FEW LINES I JUST WRITE LOADS TO GET ANY BORING PARTS OVER NOW I'VE GIVEN YOU A PERFECT OPENING NOW TAKE IT)


message 26: by Abigail (new)

Abigail chris now knew he loved her or liked her a lot but he had kissed a lot of girls but this was somthink new and he liked it, and when she started pulling away he couldn't help it he kissed her and started carrying her back to the house put her in the guest room and locked her door so he could rest easy. but on the plus side he knew what a wisk was ...........kind of


message 27: by Abigail (new)

Abigail the next morning lizzy got up and went to the door but it was locked DAM she thought i realy need to pee she banged on the door until chris opened the door he had his hand to his forehead like he had a head ack.
"god girl could you keep it down i need to sleep because if you remember i just had a fight with a giant about 4 hours ago"
it all came back to her running away the fight the ...kiss.
"i..im s..sorry" she stamered and thats when chris grined making lizzy's blood boil "if you didn't lock me in here you could of gone to sleep you jack-ass"

the grin was wiped off his face as he hit her on the head with guess what... the wisk
"your an idiot" she screamed and stormed off into the bathroom to pee and get ready for the day. but then a passing thought can she wanted another kiss from ..him her only compitision was the......Wisk!

as lizzy walked away chris had the erge to run after and pull her into a kiss but instead watched her with admiaration in his eye's. chris loved the way she could go from a sweet little girl to a mean but super sexy women then he laughed she might be bi-polar


message 28: by Abigail (new)

Abigail while lizzy was taking a shower chris went out to the shops around the corner this place wasn't to bad in the day time also he neded to get stuff for lizzy because he really didn't give her a chance to pack.


when lizzy got out of the shower she relized she would has to put on the cloths she had discared on the floor. when she left the bathroom she found the house empty but she knew that chris would be back soon so she only had a few minites to find the wisk and when she entered his room her task became a lot easyer the wisk was in the middle of the bed she grabed it and threw it under her bed and 5 mimites later chriss came back


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

"Here take these." Chris said trying so hard to sound like he didnt care.


message 30: by Abigail (new)

Abigail lizzy took the items from chris spending the whole day trying on the outfits he had gotten her i mean 8 bags is quite a lots.

chris heart didn't know what to do he wanted her in his sight but every time she came out in one of the new outfits he had got her he started grinning like that cat from alice in wonder land.
but then a scary tought hit him maybe it was the fact that she was in danger or the fact that with him she was always going to be in danger so now he had to start finding some clue's but tomorrow first he was going to spend time with lizzy


message 31: by Abigail (new)

Abigail The next morning chris was in a bad mood because today he had to leave lizzy alone witch is always a bad idia but once he explaned to her what he was going to do she seemed fine with it witch made his heart sink did she really not care about him?
"okay so if im not back take my spare car that is parked behind the house and ONLY call me in an emergancy" chris warned
"yer yer i know now get out of here" she replyed
chris tought he saw sadness in her eyes but he couldn't tell and before he could think about it he kissed her and she kissed back he was in paradise and now he was relutant to leave but he had to to keep her safe. so when the kiss ended he walked out the door as calmly as he could manage.


message 32: by Abigail (new)

Abigail lizzy watched as he walked away first she didn't want him to leave now after the kiss she wanted to tie him up so he wouldn't leave but when he just walked away from a kiss like that hate started to boil in her blood she had never been good with relation-ships but i guess it's true what they say "it's a fine line between love and hate"


message 33: by Abigail (new)

Abigail chris walked along the ally where the wolf was last seen and it didn't take long for the wolf to apper
"where is the girl" the beast growled and sounding in-human throught the wolfs large mouth full of razor sharp teeth.

"now why would i tell you where she is, i could take you down by myself" chris replyed calmly

"you should be scared human, it is not me that wants the girl it is the alpha of the luna pack" the wolf replyed

"ah ha so logan wants lizzy ..why?" chris said emossionless but on the inside he was scared for the first time since this job he was scared because if the alpha wanted her there was no way in f-ing hell he was going to live and a week ago he had nothink to live for now lizzy was that somthink to live for.

"do not use his name you are not worthy" thw wolf was now angery if you use the alpha's name with out premission not only did you disrespct the alpha but the whole pack.

"i just want to know why he wants lizzy" chris asked voice almost cracking his palms where sweating and his heart was pummping 5 times faster than before this was the answer he needed.

the wolf tried to laugh throught his wolf mouth "alpha is going to make her his mate" answered the wolf.
and with that the wolf was gone and chris had his heart in his throut and the futuer he dreampted about crumbel around him


message 34: by Abigail (new)

Abigail chris new he couldn't go back to lizzy right away if the alpha wanted to make lizzy his wife / mate then some of the wolf's will be following him to find out where lizzy was. so he went into an all night cafe and at about 9:30pm it was dark out and he had to lose any wolf folowing him chris took every dirt track and country road he knew and about 2 hours later howls sounded telling chris he lost the wolfs and lizzy was safe and he couldn't wait to hold her.


message 35: by Abigail (new)

Abigail once chris left lizzy felt her heart sink but she had to let him go she had to get her life back even if that ment leaving her heart here and losing the adventure she had always wanted but could never have well she could have this adventure but its to dangerous. lizzy did the one thing that she could she packed all the stuff luke got her and the wisk got into the spear car...and left she did, couldn't see chris again or her heart would brake and plus once this was over she could go back to high school and crush on the jocks mostly "jake jetar" but now she did't feel that blush she got by thinking about him but as they say flight or fight and lizzy chose ...FLIGHT


message 36: by Abigail (new)

Abigail when chris got home he had a huge smile on his face he had never missed some one as much as he missed lizzy but his smile quikly faded when he relized lizzy was not in the appartment but had taken his spare car.
he took a few moments to collect some wepons while thinking about the hug he wanted to give lizzy but now couldn't.


message 37: by Abigail (last edited Jun 06, 2012 04:40AM) (new)

Abigail lizzy knew the first place chris would look for is at home or school so she did the most logic thing she went home got her stuff and had a sleep over at her best-friends house (dru) and she told dru everythink even her feeling for chris.
"well you cant make that S**t up" dru said
"what shoukld i do" lizzy whined
"go to school tomorrow they cant attack you there and i hear jake jetar is going to ask you out, so let me see though outfits you can finaly dress to impress"

"you know what your right i just need to move on and forget this ever happened" lizzy said with a boast of confidence.

in the end lizzy and dru chose a red tank top, a black crop jacket, black skinny jeans with ankel high boots, that went well with her brown hair and blue eyes.


message 38: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
(SORRY I HAVEN'T BEEN INVOLVED IN MY OWN CREATION, I JUST ENTERED COLLEGE LAST YEAR AND HAVEN'T BEEN ON IN LIKE FOREVER. LOVE EVERYTHING SO FAR AND READY TO ADD ON.)

in the morning lizzy and dru went to school like any other day. they went to class, ate lunch, and by the end of the day jake jetar still hadn't shown his face.
"Did you guys hear what happened?" asked Jenny, one of their other friends, as she ran up.
"What news?" Lizzy and Dru asked together.
"Jake Jetar is missing," exclaimed Jenny. "The cops were called to his house last night by his parents after they heard a scream and then the howl of a wolf."
"Oh my god," said Dru.
"No way," said Lizzy.
"There was a huge hole in the wall to his bedroom and there was blood everywhere," Jenny's voice began to turn into a shouting tone. "His parents think he's dead, but the cops aren't saying if its true or not."


message 39: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
(AS A RANDOM SIDE NOTE, THE E-MAIL I USE FOR GOODREADS ISN'T WORKING PROPERLY SO WHEN YOU ADD SOMETHING TO THIS PLEASE SEND AND E-MAIL USING THESE WORDS ONLY "I HAVE ADDED ONTO CREATIVE WRITING". MAKE THE SUBJECT CREATIVE WRITING AND TELL ME WHO YOU ARE.
THE E-MAIL ADDRESS IS hartmannh@lakeland.edu
THANKS IN ADVANCE FOR YOUR COOPERATION)


message 40: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
"Hey are talking about that weird kid that's been hanging around the school today?" asked Jenny's brother.
"What weird kid?" asked Lizzy nervously.
"I was telling them about Jake Jetar," said Jenny angrily.
He stuck out his tong and continued with his story.
"The principle called the police after he walked in on my Science class asking for some girl," he said.
"What girl?" asked Lizzy checking over her shoulder with worried eyes.
"No one knows," he said. "No one could hear him over the screaming. The girls were freaking out because of the frogs that got loose when he barged in."
"Where is he now?" Lizzy asked leaning on a locker to hide behind Dru without looking suspicious.
"He disappeared when the principle went to the phone and hasn't been caught yet," he laughed. "But he has been seen around the school plenty of times."
"Hey, Lizzy," said Jenny as Lizzy slid to the floor with a sudden head ache. "You don't look to good."
"I'll be right back," Lizzy said as she walked to the bathroom.
She was tossing water on her face and when she looked up into the mirror standing behind her was Chris. Before she could do anything he had his hand over her mouth and was stroking her hair.
"Hello Lizzy," he said softly in her ear. "It's time to go."
Lizzy began wriggling around trying to get free and she eventually got his hand off her mouth, but not out of his grip.
"No," she snapped. "I'm not going anywhere."
"If I have to," Chris said taking out a small switch blade. "I'll take you back to the house by force."
"You're not getting me out of this building without being noticed," Lizzy said her voice cracking as she starred at the blade.
"Let's go," he said. "Calmly and I'll put it away. Roughly and I'll put it behind you and walk you out like we're best friends talking."
"Calmly," mumbled Lizzy and Chris put the blade away.
Walking out of the bathroom Lizzy took off at a full out run. She ran past her friends, still talking about the stranger and missing kid, and out onto the street only to run right into Chris' open arms.
"Roughly," said Chris sadly as he put the blade on her back so that she could feel it there, but did not push it to cut her.
"I'll get away again," Lizzy snapped angrily.
"If you do, you will get killed," yelled Chris a little too loudly.
"What?" asked a passing stranger.
"Role playing," said Chris as he pushed the blade a little harder. "It's for our acting class, right?"
"Right," said Lizzy angrily.
"Oh, well have fun," the person said walking away.
"The pack leader wants to make you his wife," Chris said loudly in her ear. "He will do whatever he has to for that to happen. Including kill your family, friends, and possibly you. Why do you think that boy got killed? Logan was getting rid of his competition."


message 41: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
(OOPS! WHAT CAN I SAY. I'M A WRITER.)


message 42: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
"We weren't together," Lizzy said looking in his eyes with horror. "Why'd this leader kill him?"
"Because that kid was planning on asking you out today," explained Chris. "I know that because I heard him tell his buddy when I was looking for you. But Logan must have heard somehow too."
"So he killed Jake because he liked me," cried Lizzy tears coming to her eyes.
"Sorry to burst your bubble," started Chris. "But he didn't like you. He just wanted sex."
"You don't know that!"
"I told you I heard him tell his buddy he was going to ask you out," Chris explained. "I also heard him tell that same friend that he'd get your virginity one way or another. What a jerk."
Lizzy started crying so hard that she couldn't keep walking and she fell to the ground covering her eyes and sobbing.
"What happened?" asked Chris looking around. "Did something get you? Are you hurt? Should I carry you to safety? What can I do?"
"He didn't like me," mumbled Lizzy. "He just wanted me for his pleasure. That's all anyone ever wants from me. Kennith asked me out so I'd do his homework, Bill to make his ex jealous, Dan to please his parents."
"Um," was all Chris could manage.
"No one likes me for me!"
"Uh, um, I do," mumbled Chris.
"You-you do?" Lizzy asked looking up with tear streaks on her cheeks and more still falling.
"Yea," said Chris. "I guess I do."
"You guess!"
"Well, I don't know," Chris said defensively. "I've never felt this way before, I think I like you."
"Well," Lizzy said wiping her eyes with her sleeves. "It's something."
"We've got to get going," said Chris hearing a low growl from in an alley nearby. "Like now!"
He grabbed her arm, yanked her to her feet, lifted her into his arms, and ran.


message 43: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
(OOPS. DID IT AGAIN.)


message 44: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
Chris sprinted into the woods and made it half way to the house when suddenly something grabbed him by the ankle causing him to fall, tossing Lizzy into the air and a couple feet ahead of him. She hit the ground hard, landing on her left shoulder, and was sent rolling when something kicked her back. When she stopped rolling she slowly turned and looked in the direction of the growls and shouts, terror flooded her eyes. Lying on the ground, head bleeding from falling on a rock, a wolf with glowing red eyes pinning him to the ground, and Chris holding its jaws open with his bare hands three inches away from his face.
"Chris," she yelled slowly getting to her feet.
"Run, Lizzy," screamed Chris as the jaws inched closer to his face, one tooth cutting his cheek. "Run until you get in the house, then call the cops."
"Hell no," Lizzy hollered charging and jumping onto its back, wrapping her legs around the neck and getting its ears in a death grip.
The wolf pulled off Chris and ran into the nearest tree, trying to get her off. Lizzy's grip loosened, but she didn't let go as it hit a third and fourth tree. Finally it went up on its hind legs and fell full force onto its back, nearly killing Lizzy as it crushed her. It stood up, circled her making eye contact as she got to her knees, and charged only to be flung into the nearest tree when Chris plowed his shoulder into its side.
"Damn things," Chris mumbled as he helped her up and started back to the safe house.
"Is it safe to head to the house?" asked Lizzy as she looked where the wolf was lying a second ago. "He's gone."
"She's gone," replied Chris. "And they'll be busy with her for awhile, we've got plenty of time."
"She?" asked Lizzy once they were safely inside. "What that thing was huge?"
"Huge?" laughed Chris. "That was the smallest one in the pack."
"Smallest," gasped Lizzy her eyes widening. "Oh my god!"
"We've got to move to another safe house," Chris explained as he packed his things, then hers, and as they were heading out the door he grabbed the whisk.
He helped her into the car, loaded it with what little things they had, hopped into the drivers seat, and sped away.


message 45: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
(DARN IT. NOT AGAIN. SORRY.)


message 46: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
They drove for hours, most of the time Lizzy slept, deeper and deeper into the forest. Finally they stopped at a place that looked like palace and while Lizzy continued to sleep Chris unloaded what they had brought, stuffing the whisk into his back pocket, the lifted her out of the car and carried her to her new room.
"Are we there yet?" asked a dazed Lizzy awaking on her new bed. "Oh, a new room. We must be there."
"Do you like it?" asked Chris opening the door and walking in.
Lizzy looked around the decorated room. The room was painted a pale purple, with light blue curtains, and red blinds on every window.
"My three favorite colors," laughed Lizzy.
"What's so funny?" asked Chris looking around.
"The colors don't match at all," giggled Lizzy. "But I like it anyway."
"Oh, that explains why they laughed at me when I bought everything," said Chris with a crooked smile. "When I realized I'd have to keep you safe in the different houses."
"Houses?" asked Lizzy. "This place, judging by this room, is a mansion, not a house."
"I guess your right," Chris said.
"Your still bleeding," Lizzy responded noticing a smudge of blood running down his face.
"It's fine," Chris answered wiping away the blood. "I'm more concerned about you."
"Let me help you with that cut," Lizzy said calmly taking control. "And then you can worry about me all you want."
"Fine," said Chris lowering his eyebrows.
Lizzy gathered a needle and thread, band-aids, gauze, and whatever else she thought she may need to fix up the cut.
"Why the alcohol?" asked Chris as they walked into the ginormous living room.
"To sanitize the wound," said Lizzy as she opened it up and soaked a wash cloth with it.
"What do you mean?" asked Chris yet again.
"Lean back and be ready," said Lizzy sitting Chris on the couch and putting his head back.
"Be ready for. . ." Chris started to ask before screaming in pain as Lizzy used the soaked cloth to clean the gash.
"I told you to be ready," said Lizzy pushing his head back down.
"That hurt," snapped Chris.
"It has to be cleaned," Lizzy snapped back. "Just let me do it right."
"Damn," yelled Chris as she pushed the cloth into the cut. "Just get it done."
"It's deeper than I thought," said Lizzy. "I'm going to sew it closed, alright?"
"Great, needles," said Chris sarcastically. "Go ahead."
Lizzy sewed the gash the best she could and then according to the deal allowed Chris to check her arm.
"It's dislocated and easily fixable," explained Chris. "But it will hurt. . .although probably not as much as alcohol in this little cut."
"Little?" asked Lizzy distracting herself from the pain he was beginning to inflict on her.
"You take pain very well," said Chris finishing up.
"When I'm distracted I do," Lizzy responded.
"I'm glad you do. I don't like causing pain."
"Thank you," said Lizzy as he helped her into a sling.
"Your bleeding," said Chris shocked to see blood drops on the floor.
"That's your blood," said Lizzy with a devilish smile.
"I know for a fact that is not my blood," snapped Chris. "Not to mention the fact that the sling now has blood on it and the back of your shirt."
"Shit," yelped Lizzy falling to the floor. "Why am I so dizzy all of a sudden?"
"What hit your back?" asked Chris as he helped her to the couch.
"I don't know," Lizzy answered shaking her head. "I think I got kicked."
"Kicked?" asked Chris slowly lifting her shirt up and finding claw marks all the way across her back. "That's not good."
"Wwwhhhaaaaat?" asked Lizzy in a tone that sounded a bit like a howl.
"This is really not good," yelled Chris running for the alcohol.
"Yeeoow," screamed Lizzy. "It hurts. What's going on?"
"Stay still," shouted Chris running from the kitchen with three bottles of alcohol.
But by the time he got to her it was too late. She was nearly fully transformed into a newly fledged werewolf.


message 47: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
(SORRY AGAIN. ALTHOUGH I THINK IT MAY BE MY TURN TO WRITE IT ALL ALONE. JOIN IN PEOPLE)


message 48: by Abigail (new)

Abigail (sorry i stopped writting in this when no one else was writting)

Chris stared at lizzy in shock, how could this have happened he dropped the bottle of alcohol and ran to get some chains or rope to tie her down a new werewolf is not good they dont know how to control the transfomation until after about 2 weeks.
after she was tied down chris sat on a chair beside her a started muttering "im so sorry lizzy it's all my fault im sorry" at this point tears were rolling down his face.


message 49: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
Lizzy howled loud and long as she starred at Chris.
"I know your trying to tell me something," he said looking into her eyes guiltily. "I wish I could understand it all."
I wish I knew how this even happened, he thought. Could she have had the venom on her claws as well as her teeth?
His thoughts were broken when Lizzy howled again and then was gone. Her natural instincts had taken over and she chewed through the rope breaking free.
"Great," said Chris sarcastically. "Do I run after her or do I change and run after her?"
In the distance he heard Logan's mating call and then the howl he realized must be Lizzy responding.
So that was his plan all along, thought Chris as he let himself change into his wolf form and started running towards the howls. He knew once I got involved no one would be able to bite her to they put venom on her claws. That bastard!
"Get away from her," growled Chris, in a way only other wolves can understand, reaching Logan and Lizzy just in time.
"Back off, Chris," snapped Logan leaping at Chris. "She responded to my mating call. She wants me."
"She just changed," Chris snapped back. "She doesn't know anything about our ways."
"That's why I struck now," laughed Logan.
"That's your trrrrrick," growled Chris leaping onto Logan's back and sinking his teeth deep into his left shoulder. "Thaaaanks for telling me."
"You still won't get her back," growled Logan rolling on top of Chris.
"Want a bet," shouted Chris as he scrambled a little ways away and they howls his own mating call.
Lizzy looked from Logan to Chris and then back again, whining like a pup.
"She's mine," Logan growled knocking Chris into a tree, causing him to yipe loudly, and then snorted triumphantly.
Lizzy then joined the fight charging Logan knocking him into a tree right next to Chris and then jumped on top of him growling, baring her teeth, and nipping at various parts of his weaker body parts.
"That's my girl," said Chris getting up and limping to Lizzy's side. "Let's go home."
"This isn't over, Chris," spat Logan standing up weakly.
"It may not be over forever," said Chris. "But it's over for today."


message 50: by Heather (new)

Heather (dizwolfstitch) | 25 comments Mod
(DARN IT. SORRY AGAIN.)


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