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Shiv {Two Stones, Trying to Float on Water}
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Jan 26, 2014 06:31PM
Umm..... I don't know how to do this so feel free to post comments.
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Smiles....... he thought. All I remember is her smiles, I don't even know what her face looks like anymore. Thought a very bored and depressed Matthew, slumped on the couch face front watching a turned off TV.
that's an awesome sample!! I already wanna read more (even though there might not be more to it) ;)
I like the style and the content ;o)Shiv wrote: " Smiles....... he thought. All I remember is her smiles, I don't even know what her face looks like anymore. Thought a very bored and depressed Matthew, slumped on the couch face front watching ..."
Shiv wrote: "Umm..... I don't know how to do this so feel free to post comments."
Daughter of The Night wrote: "that's an awesome sample!! I already wanna read more (even though there might not be more to it) ;)"Haven't seen that sorry! Yeah! I'll make more, glad you guys like it... :)
