Fans of Interracial Romance discussion

Hey guys,

I just completed a book and I need an honest critique. here is the synopsis.


THE DEVIL'S OWN is a 31,000 romance novella.

Yvan never thought he would fall in love. He never thought he would love twin sisters. As he gets to know both of them he discovers that there is an evil twin, Rubi and a good twin, Rae. Rubi wants his family fortune while Rae just wants him. Yvan marries Rae to spite Rubi, he wants to show her that her sister would make a better D'Alessandro. Rae realizes that she is just a pawn, but goes along with it.

When Yvan leaves to go to Spain they fall in love through a series of emails. They soon discover that their marriage isn't about revenge anymore and its the real thing. Rubi isn't happy that her sister got everything that she wanted. She is determined to reclaim the life she thinks belongs to her. She is even willing to kill her twin sister.

If interested please DM me.

I'd like to read it! :) I could get back to you with feedback next week.

I'd like to read it and give you my feedback once finished.

I would love to beta read for you. The story sounds like it's going to be great.