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Well you took out all the bolds and italics, but other than that and what you said that's all you'll need
Edit the post, for bolds put <.b> at the beginning of the word and at the end, but without the periods. For italics it's an "i" instead. It's all in the template :)
Ugh! I'm so confused. When I put '<.b>' inside of the text when I edited the post, it wouldn't bold it? Can you help me? Im sorry I'm being a bother.
- Remove all things in parentheses. Ex: "(5-7 sentences please)"
- Delete Alias if you have none
- Make sure there is a space between all colons
- I'm afraid she can't be a handmaiden to the queen, but she can be a handmaiden to a noblewoman or some other noble.
- Delete Alias if you have none
- Make sure there is a space between all colons
- I'm afraid she can't be a handmaiden to the queen, but she can be a handmaiden to a noblewoman or some other noble.
-Put a space between Deity: and Isis
-Put a space between Occupation and Personality
-Please bold all personality traits
-Please un-capitalize all physical descriptions and use semicolons to separate instead of commas
-You don't have to put (in bio) for her markings :)
-In bio, change Queen to Chief vizier's wife
-Put a space between Occupation and Personality
-Please bold all personality traits
-Please un-capitalize all physical descriptions and use semicolons to separate instead of commas
-You don't have to put (in bio) for her markings :)
-In bio, change Queen to Chief vizier's wife
Alright ! ^^ I'm confused on one of the corrections though... When you asked for me to use colons instead of commas... Can you point me to where I need to correct it?



Last Name: Aziza
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: Egyptian
Class: Maid
Preferred Deity: Isis
Age: 18
Social Status: Upper Class
Occupation: Handmaiden to the Chief Vizier's Wife
Personality:
Trait 1: Affectionate - Nanu has always been caring towards all living things. It's impossible not to toss bread to a little beggar boy in the market. Or give a lost pet a loving home.
Trait 2: Attentive - Nothing escapes her eye. Not the smallest thing. She knows when someone is approaching or planning a terrible scheme.
Trait 3: Bold - She isn't afraid to speak her mind. She's confident to speak her opinion to or against others no matter the cost.
Trait 4: Charming - Nanu has always had the cunning ability to charm people with her words and stunning looks. She's learned to wrap men around her finger, and the ability to get people to do what she wants.
Trait 5: Clever - She thinks quickly. She thinks best on short notice. No matter the time and place, she always comes up with a solution to a problem or question.
Appearance:
Height: 5'6"
Weight:135lbs
Hair colour: brown
Skin colour: caramel
Eyes: hazel
Body type: curvy; thin
Pitch of voice: alto
Distinguishable Markings: She has a few tribal tattoos and healed whip lashes all around her body.
Weakness(es):
A child in need
A lost animal
Slaves
Strength: Silence
Brief Biography/History: Before Nanu became a Handmaiden to the Chief Viziers wife, she was a slave in her early life. Once born to a middle class family, was traded for sixty chest of Nubian treasures and gold. Nanu grew up in the slums of Egypt, begging for food or stealing some. Nanu was eventually captured and forced into slavery at the age of ten. Her cunning wits and bold mouth earned her countless beatings and torture sessions. After several years of pain, she escaped her masters wrath, only to find herself alone. She didn't know what to do. So.. She did the first and only thing she knew. Steal. After stealing food, gold, and clothing, she bought her way to the palace.
Relationship Status: Single
Family: Unknown
Biggest Fear: To be captured and forced to be a slave again
Weapon(s): Daggers, knives
Fighting Skill(s): She has trained herself to fight with blades.