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Characters > Nanu - My charrie ! ^_^

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message 1: by Ashlyn (last edited Feb 04, 2014 06:22PM) (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments First Name: Nanu

Last Name: Aziza

Gender: Female

Ethnicity: Egyptian

Class: Maid

Preferred Deity: Isis

Age: 18

Social Status: Upper Class

Occupation: Handmaiden to the Chief Vizier's Wife

Personality:
Trait 1: Affectionate - Nanu has always been caring towards all living things. It's impossible not to toss bread to a little beggar boy in the market. Or give a lost pet a loving home.
Trait 2: Attentive - Nothing escapes her eye. Not the smallest thing. She knows when someone is approaching or planning a terrible scheme.
Trait 3: Bold - She isn't afraid to speak her mind. She's confident to speak her opinion to or against others no matter the cost.
Trait 4: Charming - Nanu has always had the cunning ability to charm people with her words and stunning looks. She's learned to wrap men around her finger, and the ability to get people to do what she wants.
Trait 5: Clever - She thinks quickly. She thinks best on short notice. No matter the time and place, she always comes up with a solution to a problem or question.

Appearance: description
Height: 5'6"
Weight:135lbs
Hair colour: brown
Skin colour: caramel
Eyes: hazel
Body type: curvy; thin
Pitch of voice: alto
Distinguishable Markings: She has a few tribal tattoos and healed whip lashes all around her body.

Weakness(es):
A child in need
A lost animal
Slaves

Strength: Silence

Brief Biography/History: Before Nanu became a Handmaiden to the Chief Viziers wife, she was a slave in her early life. Once born to a middle class family, was traded for sixty chest of Nubian treasures and gold. Nanu grew up in the slums of Egypt, begging for food or stealing some. Nanu was eventually captured and forced into slavery at the age of ten. Her cunning wits and bold mouth earned her countless beatings and torture sessions. After several years of pain, she escaped her masters wrath, only to find herself alone. She didn't know what to do. So.. She did the first and only thing she knew. Steal. After stealing food, gold, and clothing, she bought her way to the palace.

Relationship Status: Single

Family: Unknown

Biggest Fear: To be captured and forced to be a slave again

Weapon(s): Daggers, knives

Fighting Skill(s): She has trained herself to fight with blades.


message 2: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments Is there anything else I need? Other than a picture and a more interesting History?


message 3: by Z, The Great Pharaoh (new)

Z | 282 comments Mod
Well you took out all the bolds and italics, but other than that and what you said that's all you'll need


message 4: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments Oh . Can I put it back in ?


message 5: by Z, The Great Pharaoh (new)

Z | 282 comments Mod
Yup :)


message 6: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments How?


message 7: by Z, The Great Pharaoh (new)

Z | 282 comments Mod
Edit the post, for bolds put <.b> at the beginning of the word and at the end, but without the periods. For italics it's an "i" instead. It's all in the template :)


message 8: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments Thank you!! I'm sorry I messed it up !


message 9: by Z, The Great Pharaoh (new)

Z | 282 comments Mod
Don't worry about it ^_^


message 10: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments Ugh! I'm so confused. When I put '<.b>' inside of the text when I edited the post, it wouldn't bold it? Can you help me? Im sorry I'm being a bother.


message 11: by Z, The Great Pharaoh (new)

Z | 282 comments Mod
It's okay :) make sure you get rid of the periods.


message 12: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments Oh! So I just put '' ?


message 13: by Z, The Great Pharaoh (new)

Z | 282 comments Mod
Exactly! And make sure you put the ending one but without the period.


message 14: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments Okay! I'll try that! :)


message 15: by Z, The Great Pharaoh (new)

Z | 282 comments Mod
Okay :)


message 16: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments Oh mer gosh !!! It did it!! Oh thank you, thank you, thank you! Your the best!!


message 17: by Z, The Great Pharaoh (new)

Z | 282 comments Mod
Yay! :D


message 18: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments :) Thanks again!!


message 19: by Z, The Great Pharaoh (new)

Z | 282 comments Mod
You're welcome :)


message 20: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments I believe I'm finished! Finally! *big sigh* It was a lot of work... But I think I'm good!


message 21: by Z, The Great Pharaoh (new)

Z | 282 comments Mod
- Remove all things in parentheses. Ex: "(5-7 sentences please)"

- Delete Alias if you have none

- Make sure there is a space between all colons

- I'm afraid she can't be a handmaiden to the queen, but she can be a handmaiden to a noblewoman or some other noble.


message 22: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments Can she be a handmaiden to a viziers wife?


message 23: by Z, The Great Pharaoh (new)

Z | 282 comments Mod
That works :) tell me when you've finished the edits and I'll look over her again!


message 24: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments I think I'm finished ! Please tell me if I need to make more changes:)


message 25: by Z, The Great Pharaoh (new)

Z | 282 comments Mod
-Put a space between Deity: and Isis

-Put a space between Occupation and Personality

-Please bold all personality traits

-Please un-capitalize all physical descriptions and use semicolons to separate instead of commas

-You don't have to put (in bio) for her markings :)

-In bio, change Queen to Chief vizier's wife


message 26: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments Alright ! ^^ I'm confused on one of the corrections though... When you asked for me to use colons instead of commas... Can you point me to where I need to correct it?


message 27: by Ashlyn (new)

Ashlyn (queenofhistory) | 21 comments WAIT! Never mind! I got it:) I think I did everything you asked of me.. If not, please tell me


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