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I am working on a science fiction short-short story of about 1500 words and would just like some feedback before making my final draft and circling it through the publishing channels. Would probably only take 5 minutes of your time. Any and all constructive criticism, proofreading, confusion detection, and/or suggestions are appreciated!

If interested in helping me out with this, please message me an email address where I can send it.

Thanks!

I'd be happy to take a look if you want. I'm a professional editor (and an SF author), but I don't mind giving comments on a short story once in a while just for the good karma.

If you want, you can email me at nas@nassauhedron.com.

Nas

Thank you, Nas, I'll do that!