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Feb 03, 2014 06:15AM
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Spider walked into camp, still dragging Jaystorm. He dropped him on the ground. "We have succeeded at capturing a few warriors!
"Let us go! How dare you! We have many more warriors than all the rouges! We will fight to the end!" Mousepaw yowled. A rouge pinned her to shut her up.
Spider looked annoyed. "Put them in the pit" He said as he dragged Jaystorm over to a deep hole in the ground
Mousepaw yowled in anger. She slashed the rouge dragging her and wriggled out. "Get off of Jaystorm!"
Razorpaw rushed into the rogue camp, "Don't worry, Mousepaw! I'll save you!" But when he sees the scary-looking rogues, he freezes.
Zitcloud pounced Razoraw and held him to the ground, "Where do you think you're going? WE need you for the plan."
"Zitcloud! You traitor!" hissed Mousepaw under a rouge. "you'll never get away with this!" she yowled as they dragged both apprentices to the pit.
Zitcloud gave a glance to spider, "She (hopefully I'm right) does know I never was part of the clan, right?"
"You think I'm loyal! I despise your clan and everything in it! You attack helpless rouges, lay around all day, you have an idiot for a leader, and you expect me to be loyal!!? I'll show you!""Now now Zitcloud, lets not get to hasty. We still need her." Ihj interrupted.
"Fine," Zitcloud turned and hissed at Mousepaw, "But one moon, I'll teach you a lesson."
Mousepaw was lost for words starring at a cat she used to admire. "Bu-but the warrior code, we are told to follow it since kithood. You could have been a great cat." she stuttered. This caught Zitcloud but he pushed it away as they were thrown in the pit.
"I'm so sorry Razorpaw, this is all my fault! I should have just waited for Jaystorm to just take me hunting. Now you could die, or Jaystorm, I shouldn't have gone out hunting." Mousepaw felt tiny, like a kit without it's mother. She curled up into a ball, her sleek brown fur suddenly seemed ragged and dull.
"No, it's all my fault!" Razorpaw insisted, "Going hunting was my idea in the first place. I'm sorry."
Mousepaw looked to Razorpaw. "Now the clan will never accept me. I'm a half clan, and I don't even know which clan, and I led us to danger. Razorpaw, I-I"
Zitcloud spoke to Spider so the two down there couldn't over hear. "You go help Reap with Riverclan, I'll go back to Windclan and come up with some excuse.
The pack of rouges came back into camp, some dragging unconscious cats. "put them in the pit" Spider ordered
A few cats dropped into the muddy hole as Mousepaw rushed over to them. They smelled of Riverclan. Mostly apprentices. But one kit sat shivering. "Who are you?" the fiery orange kit asked.
Reap ran back to the rouge camp. "You filthy flea bags, you could of at least stayed back a little while, I hope this was a successful hunt at least for your sake!"
The kit jumped up at the bottom of the pit. "I recognize your voice! You're that mean cat! My mother will get you!" she shouted.
Mousepaw was curious about the brave little cat. "Hello, I'm Mousepaw of the Windclan. And you are?" The kit stared at her. "I'm Amberkit from Riverclan, and you smell funny." she said. Mousepaw was fascinated with the kit. She seemed so connected to.
Razorpaw stared at the kit, "I'm Razorpaw." he introduced himself, but then glanced around worriedly, "What do you think is going to happen to us?"
Amberkit leaped up. "You smell familiar! Help us please!" she shouted. The Shadowclan cats ran through the rouges. "Help these cats!" yowled Lostmist looking down into the muddy pit.
Amberkit was lifted out of the pit and heard that whisper. "Who said that?" asked Amberkit loudly. "Why are they distracted?" she asked.
Mousepaw rushed through the rouges attacking at any chance. She kept Amberkit close behind.
Lostmist felt the strength of a lion as she clawed and bit.
Lostmist felt the strength of a lion as she clawed and bit.
Reap pounced Lostmist and pushed Mousepaw aside. "You think you can just stop me!? It'll take much more than that!!" Reap slashed at Lostmist viciously.
Lostmist and Reap tumbled slashing as they came with some scars. "Rogues have no place with clan cats!" she shouted. She felt her sharp claws scrape his eye. Reap yowled in anger. This was her chance. She was about to attack when two windclan apprentices jumped on him.
Reap slashed at the two apprentices, flinging them of of him with severe injuries, "Get back here you coward!!"
Mousepaw tumbled to the ground on top of Amberkit who actually made a few scratches here and there.
Lostmist leaped from behind Reap attacking him with the all the power she had. They were a tornado of fur and claws. Hissing and yowling. Blood trailing wherever they went.
Lostmist leaped from behind Reap attacking him with the all the power she had. They were a tornado of fur and claws. Hissing and yowling. Blood trailing wherever they went.
Amberkit tried to keep up but through all the battleing she was lost. "Mousepaw! Where are you?!" she wailed. She looked at the caos. Every time a rouge cornered her it would be attacked by a clan cat. "Please help!" she shouted trembling.
Mousepaw saw Darkshadow attacking another clan cat. "What are you doing?! You're both Shadowclan!" she yowled.
Elise, wrote: "Amberkit ran to Joyclaw. "Please help me! You're another clan cat. I lost Mousepaw." she said."((they're in the pit, sorry she can't help right now))
Amberkit frantically ran away from a tabby. He was gaining on her. They came to brambles and the tabby pounced on her. "Help! Help!" she wailed.
Mousepaw slashed at anything in he path. She made it to the end of the camp. "Yes!" she shouted. But she noticed something "Where's Amberkit?!"
Darkshadow lunged at Jaystar. Unlike last time, He was ready. Jaystar sidestepped and Darkshadow flew past. Jaystar swiped while He was unbalanced. The blow connected with Darkshadow's face and he flew up the side of the pit. Still uneasy, he slipped and fell back into the pit, landing directly on his head
Amberkit mewed with fear and pain. Her paw was bleeding, she felt the tabby bite the scruff of her towards the pit again.
Lostmist rushed to Jaystar. "That was amazing sir! But I think you'll need a new deputy,"
Lostmist rushed to Jaystar. "That was amazing sir! But I think you'll need a new deputy,"
A rouge called out from the crowd. "Spider's dead! Retreat!" All at once, almost all the rouges turned and ran.




