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message 1: by em_panada (last edited Jun 26, 2017 07:16PM) (new)

em_panada Deleted


message 2: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ahhh yayayayay I can't wait!!!

((and also, where are you getting the fonts and stuffs?? I see a bunch of members use them and I dunno where to find them...))


message 4: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ohhh thanks!


message 5: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ahhhh the wording - the mystery - the the the ahhhhhhhhhh my brainnnnn I love it I love it I love it


message 6: by em_panada (new)

em_panada ^ I'm glad you like it so far! ^___^


message 7: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Double thumbs up!!


message 8: by ella (new)

ella  | 362 comments Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "Ahhh yayayayay I can't wait!!!

((and also, where are you getting the fonts and stuffs?? I see a bunch of members use them and I dunno where to find them...))"


I use messletters.com.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

OMG Emmeline this is really good :) You just keep on going you!


message 10: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Soo good!!!


message 11: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Thanks y'all! ^_____^


message 12: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Wow, did you come up with that song or is it something else? Cause it's really good! The rhyming sceme is amazing!


message 13: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Thanks!! And no, I was writing it. It has a rather catchy tune if I do say so myself. ;)


message 14: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
What is it?? What is the little thing in his hand??? I like her, where are her parents? Is she completely human? Ohhhhh come on, I need more!!!!


message 15: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Haha! More coming up. :)


message 16: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Ooooooohh


message 17: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
I LIKE HER.


message 18: by em_panada (last edited Jul 18, 2015 10:46AM) (new)

em_panada Me too. :)

I was actually trying to make them sort of like a spin on a fairy tale I read once (and can't seem to find). It was about this boy and girl who were best friends and came upon a woman in a crystal/ice cave (whatever it is) that gave wishes. I think the girl wished for a few things (either that, or it was just the boy), but I know the boy did. I think he had three, but I only remember two. It was like power and to marry his best friend. Anyway, years later the power gets to the boy's head and well, you can imagine he was pretty bad. Then he comes back to the girl and is all like 'marry me!' And she was like 'um no.' (I think she was engaged too). Well the boy has kind of like an ego check (if I remember) transforms into a bird that she talks to or something, and the boy basically makes his human self sound good (I think he changed his life around, etc), but anyway. The boy got the girl. But I was trying to adjust it into the tale (with a few stuff changed).

Do you have any idea what that fairy tale is called? Because I cannot find it.


message 19: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Hmmm well the beginning sounded a bit like the Snow Queen, maybe...I don't know, though


message 20: by em_panada (last edited Jul 18, 2015 11:07AM) (new)

em_panada It isn't that one. There were no roses and goblins if I recall. Ah well.


message 21: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Oh..well then, I really don't know..that's a shame...


message 22: by em_panada (new)

em_panada My seven or eight year old self really should pay attention. :)


message 23: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Haha


message 24: by ella (new)

ella  | 362 comments No offense, Ruby, but I think you're over-thinking it. There's already polls.


message 25: by Deanna (new)

Deanna Q Ronan & Atari speak to me. All are good though. I think Aria may be at saturation point, but still solid.


message 26: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
@Emmeline Thanks a bunch!!

And sorry for kind of spamming your story thread, I'll delete my comment on here now and REALLY APPRECIATED!


message 27: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
ƐƖƖα wrote: "No offense, Ruby, but I think you're over-thinking it. There's already polls."

+shrug+


message 28: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "@Emmeline Thanks a bunch!!

And sorry for kind of spamming your story thread, I'll delete my comment on here now and REALLY APPRECIATED!"


You're welcome, I'm always happy to help a friend. :)


message 29: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
O.O That's what always happened in the end??? MORE! Please I'm gonna die!!


message 30: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
O.o


message 31: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Wow


message 32: by em_panada (new)

em_panada That a good 'wow'??? Lol


message 33: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Definitely


message 34: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Yay!!!! ^___^


message 35: by em_panada (new)

em_panada ^^^ I've deleted all my comments with the story. Not because I'm discontinuing it, but because I've changed the narration and plot a bit. :)


message 36: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
O.O WHAT? But but but


message 37: by em_panada (new)

em_panada I can share a bit of the new one so far. It still has the same idea, just a few changes. :)


message 38: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Yes!!!


message 39: by em_panada (last edited Jun 26, 2017 07:16PM) (new)

em_panada Deleted


message 40: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
O.O


message 41: by em_panada (last edited Jun 26, 2017 07:16PM) (new)

em_panada Deleted


message 42: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
O.O


message 43: by Adi (new)

Adi Teodoru (adi_teodoru) | 7 comments Yes and yes. I love your writing style as well, puts you right into the moment. I am looking forward to more of this!


message 44: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Thank you. :-)


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