Creative Writing Ideas discussion

These are the characters in the books I'm writing.

I haven't named my book yet, but these are the characters:
Tanner Smith, age 16, has blond hair and hazel eyes. Tanner is very friendly and loves to hang out with anyone, as long as they aren't mean. He cares a lot about his sister and will do anything to protect her, however annoying she may get. He has been in love with Kathryn Valen since four years ago when she moved in next door to him.

Kate Smith, age 12, has blond hair, hazel eyes and freckles, Tanner's younger sister. Kate is really friendly and popular, and she will laugh at anything that might have been remotely funny.

Kathryn Valen, age 15, has black hair and gray eyes. Kathryn loves to read and doesn't like to be around people a lot. She is friendly when she wants to be, but Tanner thinks she is really confusing too. A lot of boys like her, but she doesn't know that.

Eliza Valen, age 10, Kathryn's younger sister, has brown eyes and hair. She is very similar to Kate, who has been her best friend since they met.

Characters that haven't actually appeared in the book yet:

Caitlin Isabelle McCain, 17 years old, curly brown hair, blue eyes, and freckles. Caitlin is really friendly and popular. She is a tomboy and isn't really afraid of anything. If you do something she doesn't like, she will tell you exactly what she thinks, and has a reputation for telling you what she thinks about anything. She is also known to hang out with boys and do a lot of the things they do; she is really athletic and knows several different sports like the back of her hand that most girls wouldn't even think of playing.

Jake McCain, 16 years old, wavy brown hair, blue eyes, is Caitlin's younger brother. Jake is a lot like is sister. He is popular, friendly, and competitive. He will do anything his sister will do, except tell someone exactly what he's thinking. He finds that kind of hard.

I'm thinking that Tanner and Jake and Caitlin will be friends when they meet, and Eliza is going to have a crush on Jake. Please tell me what you think.

Jake sounds more like me, so I guess I like him. :) Hard for me to tell, though... I write characters differently, with very little information. They tell me about themselves as the story progresses.

lol cool

I put Caitlin and Jake in my story. Actually, Caitlin is 17. Eliza and Kate haven't really met them yet. Jake likes Kathryn.

good job! u r very descriptive,that will make the story more interesting!

Thanks!